Thread II, Asya FF: the runaway bride, Epilogue,(LAST) 15-11-15

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

you are too good, you find the thing, yes it's going to be mental than anything else. And I wanted to show that communication between couple is the keys to solve all the problem.
You are too good girl👏

Thank you sweety... 😛
But u r the sweetest ever u know...
N the matter of the story you are presenting is really natural in life yaar...
U r doing a great job..

I ll miss the story again when it will end...I don't want that..

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Wow quiet a sad and emotional update

They keep drifting apart

They say hurtful words to each other

Then they ignite in passion

These 2 need to talk they need to distress

Get everything off their chest their fear their doubt their anxiety

Especially Zoya

Asad left with regrets and Zoya left feeling alive

But ha know he is hurt and she didnt say i love u

Continue soon

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Maha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

please extend the story further more

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Beautiful update...

Very well written chapter...

Their increasing distance and frustrated behavior was justified... They needed to vent their frustration on one thing or other.

Nisha play nice role to get them talk..

Can't believe their distance grew so much that zoya felt disgusted by his touch... That was shocking...

Asad try to be normal .. But these two were anything but normal...

Like dilshaad's effort to make them happy.

Kid scene at party was beautiful.

Every bit of the last scenes was amazing... Their hatred... Their pain... Restlessness... Guilt...everything was just proper and well described.

Loved everything about this chapter..

At last... Asad's guilt in morning was so true...and zoya's pain...and her need to told him that she love him... Heart wrenching...

I am intrigued... Please update soon...

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

One more thing...

I really DON'T want zoya's words to come true...

Never wanna see them apart..

Hope asad won't think about those hurtful words and their cruel meaning...

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya
One more thing...
I really DON'T want zoya's words to come true...
Never wanna see them apart..
Hope asad won't think about those hurtful words and their cruel meaning...

don't worry, I won't do it, The runaway bride was too sad to me and I had to confess that when I started the new thread, I was a bit worried that readers will find it to sad, but I continued in this path anyway and I am happy that many appreciate . Soon, beautiful day will come and they won't drift apart, actually in the next chapter, I will add a twist, many will be surprised...I hope 😕

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Tunailuvsahil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Really plz cont soon with new surprise twist

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kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">don't worry, I won't do it, The runaway bride was too sad to me and I had to confess that when I started the new thread, I was a bit worried that readers will find it to sad, but I continued in this path anyway and I am happy that many appreciate . Soon, beautiful day will come and they won't drift apart, actually in the next chapter, I will add a twist, many will be surprised...I hope</font>😕

i hope you will add happy wala twist...ok let me guess will she be pregnant...or it is something else...
you had said that next update will be happy one...so fulfill your promise soon...