New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Hi Rada

i m gayab from so long i feel alien here now...life was mess

but still i m back 4 d awesome writers & stories

comnt 4 last 3 updts

so Asad was extremely jealous seeing Zoe wid Adam & it was so cute when he cried in his room on d pillow he looked like a spoilt baby who is crying after losing a toy😆😆

d past flashback was nice Zoe was also hurt in a similar situation but that time I m not sure she felt love it was more of strong frndship & mayb unrecognised love also😉 & not 2 forget she cared a lot 4 him cuz she knew those girls took advantage of him & his intelligence😡

Both of them r very possessive whether its Asad or Zoya 😆😉

D way Zoya was feeling guilty & restless when Asad went from there & was not talking 2 her & their cute childish fight on d hospital bed was very delightful 2 read😊 pulling each others hair😆😆

d mixing scene of past & present of their fight & childish antics was awesomely penned I loved reading it, Both were jealous at times & they knew it😆

D ending was lovely & Zoe's dialogue I forgot my heart was apt 4 d scene😉

nxt part came Zoya's Bday

she was remembering her last Bday which she celebrated wid Leo & surely Asad tried 2 make it special in d start & succeeded in agreeing her 2 celebrate in her home

Zoya kept many memories of Leo wid her 😲❤️

d camera taking scene from her father's room was wonderful scene emotional & funny at same time

D all picture clicking scene was very sweet 2 read so Zoya admitted 2 herself that she misses Leo & feeling peace wid herslf after 13 yrs cuz now she is not only looking at sad things but happy memories of her past also.👏 I learnt 1 lesson again😆😆 love u guruji😛

Asad's idea was lovely & I liked Zoe's explaining 4 taking Asad's last pic

Zoe had all d pictures & Asad had d last 1.

"she didn't dated who she works wid" what that mean Rada😡😡

She was gloomy that no1 wished her & wanted 2 spend time wid Asad so saved his room 4 last 😳

but was happy after getting s surprise & Asad's playing piano was cherry on top😃

Flashback Asad went outside 2 search 4 a cake 4 her but veiled his intentions but anyways d scene was lovely 2 read & Zoya was touched wid his thought😊

His gift 4 Zoya was very thoughtful a bracelet having their journey 2 frndship😊

d present cake cutting ceremony Zoya wished 2 move on & looked at Asad❤️ but idiot Adam got it wrong. I think & Asad felt odd at that place he is so sensitive afterall who wont be

Zoya came 2 feed him cake more cuz she was missing him afterall she is in lovvee❤️😉

& Asad noticed his gift on her hand & decided 2 confess d truth but d song brought back past ki kuch yaadein

Two dances were about to start in different time involving same persons with two different feelings but same song. very apt line completely true & awesomely merged👏👏

in d past their kisses were innocent & tender & start of love But in present their kiss was of love😳

but sadly Asad's truth hurt Zoya & than came slap

I m happy I didn't have2 wait 4 nxt updt cuz its already updated😆😆 lucky me

last part 7

MY god Zoya's condition was so heart clenching 😭😭

4 sure what Asad said in d past was absolutely horrible & he deserved all d slaps

how could he trust that Akram & not melt seeing a weeping & begging Zoya😭 if Leo died that day according 2 him than he also killed Zed wid his venomous words.😡🥺 Both were miserable after this encounter.

But I also feel he got fair punishment 4 13 yrs if Zoya want 2 punish it should involve just him & her not that Adam guy

nxt day their convo was very emotional Asad wanted 2 talk & get 1 chance but Zoe has steeled her heart

so Asad went 2 stop her at d airport damn I wish Zoya consider that +vely😳

when she didn't bulged Asad used force & even Zoe couldn't resist after 2nd kiss

wid Zoya's monologues its clear she loves him madly but is just hurt & taking his determination 2 win her back as a challenge which she doesn't wanna lose.

Asad left but wid promise 2 b wid her like her shadow & win her back but when he didn't showed Zoya missed him😒

finally d scene came when she self thought how she couldn't recognise him & d piono tune was 4 her

Zoya decided 2 distrat herself in d charity party but it was also organised by Asad I liked their convo during d dance it was really nice😊

but it ended on bitter note again cuz Zoya can't keep her emotions in check around Asad & it hurts her pride & ego😵

Hope she doesn't do something like getting involved wid Adam I don't like that guy plus I find this thing wrong I remember in Runaway bride Zoya rejected Asad & he knew it still he never invoved wid Elena or any1 else I wish Zoya also show some loyalty 2 her love Asad & even her frnd Adam by not playing wid feelings of all 3 of them.

super lateness ke baad super long comnt😆😆

Rada u r awesome buddy I was away but would never abandon ur story like this. I saw u replying 2 some1 ki ppl r liking this story less than ur other works. Don't feel bad dear some have exams & some mayb busy in life just like I was. Plus every1 have a certain liking 4 some concepts so that can b d reason. U just do ur work cuz u r awesome writer.👏

Never feel sad just stay happy😃

Take care

& have a very nice day😊

Love u sweety pie🤗

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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Maha

@maha2012

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

uff this was pure awesomeness😃⭐️

loved how u described asad's possessiveness and love😛

i love how he manhandles zoya😆☺️

soo romantic

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Love the update

Asad is not giving up I am so happy for tht

He didn't cave in and leave her alone after all the slaps and outburst

He is determined and he will get her in his life

He is surely true he is no more Leo he is not scared and frail

He is strong passionate and possessive and if Zoya think she can get away she is wrong

Love the rooftop she resisted but she couldn't last

Aww she was touched hearing he came looking for her all those yrs ago

She did hear her name at the airport

So he give her an entire week to cool and crave

From the time I heard of the charity I knew it had his name all over it

A masked ball love it but they could recognized each other

Aww the dance the challenges it is going to be an interesting one

I hope Zoya don't play dirty like bringing Adam in the equation

Continue soon

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ikhlass

@ikhlass

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

OOh what a good surprise Rada ! Thank you for this lovely gift before ramadan ! Maintenant on peut jeuner en paix 😆

Vraiment superbe chapitre ! Enfin le voile du passe est leve et on peut voir qu'effectivement la colere de Zoya est justifiee... Ces mots blessant qu'il lui a dit et juste le fait qu'il ait pu croire qu'elle aurait pu faire une chose pareil est trop blessant et j'espere qu'elle ne va ceder si facilement, qu'elle va lui faire bien payer avant de pardonner bien sur 😈. La colere peut nous en faire faire et dire des choses sans meme s'en rendre compte que l'on regrette toujours apres mais le mal est fait. Il est plus facile de guerir d'une blessure physique que d'une blessure causee par des mots ameres. Et comme je l'avait predit c'etait bien ce chien d'Akram qui a detruit la chambre des parents de Asad mais comment il a eu connaissance de cette chambre et comment il s'est introduit chez Asad ? Oui je sais je dois continuer de lire pour le decouvrir 😛

J'ai adore l'attitude de Asad, sa determination et sa possessivite presque effrayante, c'est clair que ce n'est plus l'ado qu'elle a connu, c'est un homme dans toute sa puissance avec des desirs d'homme juste il faudrait qu'il se controle un tout petit plus mais pas trop hein parce qu'on aime bien aussi ce petit jeu la de "je t'aime, moi non plus" ca met un peu de piment dans la chorba/la soupe mdr 😆

Ramadan mubarak a toi Rada puisse ce mois beni nous rapprocher plus D'Allah SWT

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

I simply loved this chapter

The possessiveness

The dominance

OMG

LIKE AWESOMENESS RIGHT THERE

I like this Brave Asad

Feisty Zoya

YAS

They want to prove to each other that they are no longer Leo and Zed

I admire that

Asad's cockiness tho

Lol

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

well asad is so determined here to get her back
bt u didnt disclosed the whole truth abt the psst
their actions on terres was so intense
then their dance was too.
update next part soon

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Awesome update

extremely intense and passionate

will be interesting to see how will asad gain zoya's apology and also her trust back

eagerly waiting for the next update

continue soon😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Very Good and well written part.
So This past is related to Asad's parents...and Akram was the main culprit..in a way mastermind and Zoya was blamed all... that was harsh...
Lets see how this goes..
But yes...Asad does deserve the hate and cuss words...but don't know what happened to him after that...
Would be interesting to know the clear past thing.
Intriguing part.
Continue soonish.

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Wooow...

That was extraordinary...I mean

Rada you never fail to surprise me u know...

The episode was out of this world...

Love you yaar...

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EMOksgian

@EMOksgian

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#290

I liked dis atti I m not Leo anymore sooo gud rada :) well kisses vs so passionate bt kya kare script ki demand thi he he he
awsum update and nw Zoe action I mean slap is justified !!
is it true v vl get next update after ramdaan :(
happy ramdaan bdw :)