New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

It was amazing...

Just loved it.

Both the past n present days...

Loved the part from lag Jaa gale till the end.

From the kiss to the slap.

Everything was perfect.

Now just don't let Zoya push him away .

Both have suffered a lot.

Thanks for pm.

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EMOksgian

@EMOksgian

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#262

amazing update rada !! perfect combo of past and present I luvd everything even dat kiss and slap vs awsum ...
bt vy zoya slapped him ?? I m confused bt wanted to know from u soo plz don't take much time in updating
keep giving us kissing scenes of asya tooo ;)

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Awesome
Loved it
Finally truth is revealed
Past n present both awesome
U wrote it amazingly
Plzzz plzz don't separate asya again
Y I am getting negative vibes that u r going to use zoya with Adam against asad plz don't let zoya take any impulsive decision or to get back at him
Plz whatever it is it should be BTW asya
No third party
Plz
Plz
Plzz
Hope u won't dissapoint me
Plzzz

Edited by sasir - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Both The chapts were Wonderfull and full of emotions..Rada.
The Synchronization between past and present was very good...
Song select was also very nostalgic...with real AsYa related to it..
But this reaction of Zoya we should have expected...
Now have to see what come next..
Bt nothing like Zoya making Asad jealous...with Adam or something Plzzz...
Continue soon.

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Hiii...
It was sooo damn awesome rada!!!...

Beautiful !!...

Hope zoya forgive Leo...

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Mitamad

@Mitamad

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Wow amazing,
Thank you so much for the double update.

Can't wait to read what happends next, I was so not expecting a Slap when he tells her the truth.

Can't wait to see what he has to do to get her around to being with him again.

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

The updates are so beautiful...but zoya slapped him?...
Plz reveal what happened with Zed and Leo now...
They both love each other...so much
I want to see them together and happy...

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Fabulous chapter...

Brilliantly written chapter it is...

Zoya's feelings in the starting were so well explained that I felt whole thing happen in front of me and I understand each and every word written there...her feelings, thoughts about getting mature.. Intense.

Adam is being a good friend and maybe hoping to be something more...

Coming to asad...he was angry when Adam came..but love overpower anger and he played piano... Nice surprise...

His pain, anger, helplessness was felt while reading.. Past scene of being her shadow was pretty...

Whole 13 years ago, birth day was explained beautifully...how they care and fight at same time.. Their friendship is so respectful...

Zoya's reaction on seeing asad on piano was priceless.. Her talking about past and bracelet with asad was calm and peaceful.. Her realization of love during kiss and urge to express it was so real...

Asad was like totally on emotional rollercoaster... From sadness to hope..to love...to desire...to confession...

Zoya's reaction could never be better after his confession... I was on edge whole time and chapter end there...please update soon...really soon... Don't want to see them separate...make them yell, fight, angry with each other but make them one at the end...

Their picture taking Scene was beautiful...

Edited by kabhi_asya - 10 years ago