New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 31

Originally posted by: cutie15

Res
unres
.this is just too much awesomeness. .
Loved the update sooo much..!
It was so intense.. ol those emotions they felt were so beautifully written..
asad is having such a hard time convincing zoya..
nd zoya is just playing with her own emotions. .
It will be interesting to see how asad will pacify zoya..
loving this.. thanks for updating soon..
nd next part sooner as well..!! :)

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice
Glad to asad not giving up
I knew zoya is hurt by his words n actions..but y she is doing this to herself...I like the way she is punishing him but her last words making me scared plz don't let zoya do something in acceptable like accepting Adam ..it is equal to using him for her ego against asad..then I am sorry to say she will fall low
P.s...plz...plzz...plzz don't make something like that even though I don't like Adam he don't deserved to be used..or hurt his feelings...
Hope asad will win his lady love with some patience n more love...
Plz update soon

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Fantastic chapter rada

I can't believe asad said such awful words to zoya

He did wrong

Poor zoya

Asad is crazy

Update soon dear

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Rada

i m gayab from so long i feel alien here now...life was mess

but still i m back 4 d awesome writers & stories

It's ok I can understand, how life can be crazy a** and consuming, really sometimes, life acts like a possessive husband 😆, but kya karoon we love life 😃

comnt 4 last 3 updts

so Asad was extremely jealous seeing Zoe wid Adam & it was so cute when he cried in his room on d pillow he looked like a spoilt baby who is crying after losing a toy😆😆

d past flashback was nice Zoe was also hurt in a similar situation but that time I m not sure she felt love it was more of strong frndship & mayb unrecognised love also😉 & not 2 forget she cared a lot 4 him cuz she knew those girls took advantage of him & his intelligence😡

exactly she wasn't in love with him at that time, she was just worried and possessive, she was overprotective about him

Both of them r very possessive whether its Asad or Zoya 😆😉

D way Zoya was feeling guilty & restless when Asad went from there & was not talking 2 her & their cute childish fight on d hospital bed was very delightful 2 read😊 pulling each others hair😆😆

d mixing scene of past & present of their fight & childish antics was awesomely penned I loved reading it, Both were jealous at times & they knew it😆

Zed was jealous in friendship and Asad jealous in love, they grew up and feeling grew up too with them.

D ending was lovely & Zoe's dialogue I forgot my heart was apt 4 d scene😉

I love that scene too, I found it cute and I was even surprised when I write this part, I almost made a highfive with myself

nxt part came Zoya's Bday

she was remembering her last Bday which she celebrated wid Leo & surely Asad tried 2 make it special in d start & succeeded in agreeing her 2 celebrate in her home

Zoya kept many memories of Leo wid her 😲❤️

It's really difficult to throw away memories, she kept them because it was beautiful moment for her, even if she forgot about them, she kept in her mind and her heart Leo. He was an important part of her and she can't let it easily no matter what happened in the past.

d camera taking scene from her father's room was wonderful scene emotional & funny at same time

D all picture clicking scene was very sweet 2 read so Zoya admitted 2 herself that she misses Leo & feeling peace wid herslf after 13 yrs cuz now she is not only looking at sad things but happy memories of her past also.👏 I learnt 1 lesson again😆😆 love u guruji😛

I call it maturity and it was also my way to show that she started liking Asad, that's why she accepted finally to move on. SHe accepted that she can't change her past and it made her what she was now. If human still focussing on the sad part of the past,it means he still hurt but if you are able to see also the good moment without recalling the bad, it means you heal your wound. I am proud of you Jas 😆 that you understand my words

Asad's idea was lovely & I liked Zoe's explaining 4 taking Asad's last pic

Zoe had all d pictures & Asad had d last 1.

"she didn't dated who she works wid" what that mean Rada😡😡

Nothing Jas 😕, Zoya didn't fall in love because her heart was always with Leo and it was hard for her to find someone like him. It was just to show that she will not date Adam.

She was gloomy that no1 wished her & wanted 2 spend time wid Asad so saved his room 4 last 😳

but was happy after getting s surprise & Asad's playing piano was cherry on top😃

She was more happy to see him than anything, she was already in love for sure if someone play for me, I will myself put the ring in his finger 😆

Flashback Asad went outside 2 search 4 a cake 4 her but veiled his intentions but anyways d scene was lovely 2 read & Zoya was touched wid his thought😊

His gift 4 Zoya was very thoughtful a bracelet having their journey 2 frndship😊

This is Leo, a sweet and sensitive person and I wanted to show the constrast between Asad and Leo.

d present cake cutting ceremony Zoya wished 2 move on & looked at Asad❤️ but idiot Adam got it wrong. I think & Asad felt odd at that place he is so sensitive afterall who wont be

Exactly, he felt himself out of her life and this beautiful picture of her. He wanted her only for him and he was just left behind like those 13 years that why he left her.

Zoya came 2 feed him cake more cuz she was missing him afterall she is in lovvee❤️😉

& Asad noticed his gift on her hand & decided 2 confess d truth but d song brought back past ki kuch yaadein

Two dances were about to start in different time involving same persons with two different feelings but same song. very apt line completely true & awesomely merged👏👏

in d past their kisses were innocent & tender & start of love But in present their kiss was of love😳

When friendship show you the destination of love, the constrast was important in this part and I am happy that everyone understand it well and didn't say that it was too quick for her to fall in love with him. I was not confident about this part, but it works 😳

but sadly Asad's truth hurt Zoya & than came slap

Expected sadly

I m happy I didn't have2 wait 4 nxt updt cuz its already updated😆😆 lucky me

last part 7

MY god Zoya's condition was so heart clenching 😭😭

4 sure what Asad said in d past was absolutely horrible & he deserved all d slaps

how could he trust that Akram & not melt seeing a weeping & begging Zoya😭 if Leo died that day according 2 him than he also killed Zed wid his venomous words.😡🥺 Both were miserable after this encounter.

This day he killed their friendship, he killed her love for him and she killed his trust in human. He was always optimistic but this day, he lost everything because of Akram. This part will be detail later. I showed a bit a the reason of their separation to justify her anger.

But I also feel he got fair punishment 4 13 yrs if Zoya want 2 punish it should involve just him & her not that Adam guy

No Adam promise 😃

nxt day their convo was very emotional Asad wanted 2 talk & get 1 chance but Zoe has steeled her heart

so Asad went 2 stop her at d airport damn I wish Zoya consider that +vely😳

I will use this part later for the upcoming chapter 😉, I gave you a hint here

when she didn't bulged Asad used force & even Zoe couldn't resist after 2nd kiss

wid Zoya's monologues its clear she loves him madly but is just hurt & taking his determination 2 win her back as a challenge which she doesn't wanna lose.

Asad left but wid promise 2 b wid her like her shadow & win her back but when he didn't showed Zoya missed him😒

finally d scene came when she self thought how she couldn't recognise him & d piono tune was 4 her

Zoya decided 2 distrat herself in d charity party but it was also organised by Asad I liked their convo during d dance it was really nice😊

but it ended on bitter note again cuz Zoya can't keep her emotions in check around Asad & it hurts her pride & ego😵

It was always a pride and ego, she didn't want to forgive easily while she just wanted in real to make babies with him 😆, but if I show this the story will finish so soon that why I dragged a bit before leaving them in one room totally in love 😳

Hope she doesn't do something like getting involved wid Adam I don't like that guy plus I find this thing wrong I remember in Runaway bride Zoya rejected Asad & he knew it still he never invoved wid Elena or any1 else I wish Zoya also show some loyalty 2 her love Asad & even her frnd Adam by not playing wid feelings of all 3 of them.

super lateness ke baad super long comnt😆😆

Rada u r awesome buddy I was away but would never abandon ur story like this. I saw u replying 2 some1 ki ppl r liking this story less than ur other works. Don't feel bad dear some have exams & some mayb busy in life just like I was. Plus every1 have a certain liking 4 some concepts so that can b d reason. U just do ur work cuz u r awesome writer.👏

Thank you so much, I must confess that I was a bit sad and gloomy that this story was not well welcome by many but I can understand that the concept was new and many will find it more confusing than interesting. But I appreciate the effort of my loyal readers who keep commenting no matter what. I feel blessed by their love and support, that why I always write for those who comment and never for those who ignore. You followed me from the beginning and I am happy to have you still 😭, that's why I love you so much for this.

Never feel sad just stay happy😃

Promise I won't be sad and I will try to stay happy 😃 and thankfull with what I have

Take care

& have a very nice day😊

Love u sweety pie🤗

Love you so much Jas sweetheart , Allah blessed you with a beautiful and pure heart, and I hope he keep you always like this and many other things

Originally posted by: maha2012

uff this was pure awesomeness😃⭐️

loved how u described asad's possessiveness and love😛

i love how he manhandles zoya😆☺️

soo romantic