New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: asyakabhidreamy
Hey rada that was amazing
It's hard to tell how much I loved it
Aww my Asad
such cute chocolate boy he is
Zoya my sweetheart is never ending beauty
Don't know how many r going r going to be prey of her beauty
And how many fans r u gonna increase of your stories
UK fantastic writer know
U always portray asya just a way I want them
Love u for that
Keep writing and blessing us with such beautiful stories

Thank you so much dear 😃

I am a prey of Asad's character and beauty 😆, I can't resist to such cuteness.

Thank you so much for your comment (bold ), even if I feel that this story was not fully appreciate and the way of presenting the story might be the cause and bit confusing for many. However, I still have many readers who appreciate it. So, it's not totally sad for me.

Thank you so much and thank you for you loyalty

I will keep writting, and I love writting and it's only because of Asya, they help me to realize an old dream : writting stories 😭

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: binuuu
loved it..
here old zed is replaced by asad..
I hope zoya will realise her Leo asap..
looking forward..

thank you

Soon, she will find the truth and let's see how she will react at this 😕

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: shailu123

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update
Asad was jealous as zoya was jealous previously. Flashback scenes was nice. Zoya heart wanted more. Asad broke her heart & accused her. Curious to know the reason why he did that. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

thank you so much dear

The real reason will be revealed later but many will see some glimpse of their fight and Leo's anger

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: SONU2408
sorrry 4 rl late as i was busy lst 4days...

yes its a short update bt nice updt.asya jealousy loved it...

it's ok dear and thank for your comment

yeah for a change it was short but happy that however, you like it 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: anopama
Love the update
So love their jealousy
She in past and he n present
Their past and present coincide so well
How it doesn't bring back memories to her
Both r so affected by each other
Love the line I forgot my heart 😉
Aww love how she got his attention and his stubbornness
Aww their proximity she is addicted
Continue soon

Both of the past and the present, involve them differently this time

asad was in love and Zed was just confused with her feelings , strong friendship or new love,

I love this sentence too, and I am happy that I didn't forget about that part 😆

thank you so much and I will try to update soon

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya
Awesome update...
Loved it totally...
Brilliantly written and perfectly Mashed up...
👍🏼

thank you so much dear 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya
Their past moments are really cute...
And present ones are hot...
Loved the whole intense piano scene and then the angry/jealous asad...
Their fight, messing hairs and all that was cute and hot at the same time...
Awesomeness in the hospital air..
Update soon

thank you

I want to show the long route of falling in love, how in the past they built a friendship and how in the present, they fell in love with each other.

I know the piano scene was intense, I wanted my readers to be able to feel Asad hidden words of love and I am happy that many approve and fond it intense.

And their fight, of course, something never changes, they never really grew up 😆

I will try to udpate soon

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Wow wow wowow
Its superb ,amazing ,mindblowing update dear

I love it sooo much

When will their identity suspense end?

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

yeah asselah dear

thank you so much , you are spoiling me with so much adjectives 😳

soon, Zoya will know the truth and let's see how she will react