New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: cutie15
Oh god.. this was hot..!! Nd so intense..
loved it.. the chemistry between them is superb..
very well written..loved it :)
Update the next part soon..this is getting so interesting. .:)

Yes, the temperature between them increased dangerously and soon, the distance will decrease too 😉

thank you so much , I will try to upate soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: aleenaansari
Awsm update..
Luvd it..
Cntinue soon...

thank you so much and I am glad that you like it 😃

soon, I will try to update

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Absolutely amazing part..
So Zoya finds him familiar, recognizes his touch but still can't recall he is Leo..
Waiting for next part..

Thank you so much 😃

for the chapter 4, yes, her heart and her eyes were fighting. BUt soon, both will be agree (her heart and her eyes) 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: miss.namrata96
Thanks for the pm...
Thanks for updating...
Awsome chapter too good... ❤️
Very beautifully written and executed... 👍🏼
Will be waiting for the next update...

Thank you , thank you your lovely comment

in the upcoming chapter it will be fulll of surprise 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Rada..
Thanks for the PM...
Well this was surely a light hearted , lovely , well written and a wonderful part...
I also liked the way you contradicted both past and present...in a way that the Characters and people were swapped..
I really liked this part...well Asad has more reasons to be concerned not just with jealousy...but with his chance to love and getting Zoya back also...isiliye he might have reacted the way he did..in the same way Zed reacted the way she did in her time...but the diff is here Asad loves Zoya ...but their Zed was confused about her feelings towards Leo.
Soo...it is not also tit for a tat kind of feeling ...but a great remainder of the past in present...but i wonder...did both even realised that or not..
This really was a Hearty Update..
Continue soonish..

Hey Mayur,

thank for your comment. I know for a change there was no twist or bad surprise and I wanted to show it simply, how their attraction grew up slowly with the time.

You understand perfectly Asad behavior and for sure, he was now totally in love with her but in the past, Zoya was just too young to decipher her feelings.

Actually, when they were young, it was more strong friendship than true love. In our young ages, we are more confused about attraction, love, friendship, and the subtle differences, it takes us time to deal with our feeling and sometimes, we decided to choose friendship over love because friendship is more important. They will put the L word when they will be seperated and after time. Asad was quicker than her.

I will try to update soon and in the next chapter, it will be more about Zoya.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Aww this was seriously such a cute update with a jealous asad and loved their moments a lot
god i am actually getting really attached to this story
please continue soon
will be waiting impatiently 😊

Thank you so much dear and I am happy that the magic of this story was appreciate

It was a new way for me to expose a story and I am happy that many appreciate and didn't quit 😃

I will try to update soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: binuuu
read till chapter 4.
nice story..
waiting to see what happened between zed and Leo..

thank you so much and the new readers are always welcome 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
I love the techique of flashback you are using
In contrast to what is happening. ..it seems the present is in parallel with their past
Now we have an asya moment
It was different but I love it

Exactly and this story it's all about past and present, and how using the same road, doesn't always pushing you in the same end. Asad has a second chance to rectify his mistakes but this time, not with a friend heart but with a heart full of love for her.

Thank you so much for your loyality 😭

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: sasir
Awesome

thank you sasir 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: KabhiManiac
Omg dear that was best part over now
Really loved it yar
I mean Al the time reading it my mouth was all wide
My cheeks r aching due to smiling like idiot
Lol
I just loved the update
Full of awesomeness
Update soonish yar

Thank you so much, for a change, I write it simply and I wanted to show how they were still a kid 😆 even if they are attracted or jealous or even stubborn , something never change with time.

You make me smile like an idiot with your comment, it was a pleasure 😃