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Lovesahil

@Lovesahil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

OMG... I'm bursting here... This was such an emotional chapter... So that is how aahil changed.. It's still so amazing that sanam wants to be with him... I wanted to cry at that.. Mahuu.. You've outdone yourself once more 👏

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Ramya

@jazz2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Wow wow wow
Read the last two chapters in a go
Both are amazing
Thanks for the pm

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MyAnastasia18

@MyAnastasia18

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Wooow amazing update... I felt so bad for Ahil but thn I wqs happy when Sanam accepted hin and have him new hope... go girl love your spirit...

Thx for the pm

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sahil333

@sahil333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Oh my, what a beautiful chapter 👍🏼

I love the backstory of Aahil. The whole ancient story of the clan. The evolving stories of his grandparents and then parents... I need to read this again...

So unfortunate that his mother died so young. The transformation of Aahil was so awesome. So the truth is out and glad that Sanam has not pushed him away. So happy they will be together and for each other and be each other's rock. Coz very hard times are around the corner.

That emerald ring...very touching...

This is such a brilliant supernatural story...can some producer adapt this script and make a movie out of it? 😆

Thx for the pm!

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tazzz

@tazzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

OMG I UNDERSTAND EVERYYYTHING! NOW!! This was written perfectly! I loved Sanam sooo much here! you made her character soo understanding. I was so nervous when Aahil brought the ring with him. Like what is she rejects it or will she accept him? but you wrote it flawlessly! it was beautiful!!!

I'm soo sooo excited for the next update!!!

😆 ❤️

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noesha

@noesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

loved it! I really love how intelligent this story is written.

Update soon!

Thanks for the pm!

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innocentangel4u

@innocentangel4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

So you might not believe, but I came across your update even before you'd PMed me... Yup, I've been too busy lately... But hey, I'd read it immediately... And I really loved it... 👏

Aahil's past... his grandmother Nazeera's story... & his own story of how he transformed... So its been in his ancestry after all... His father had the vampire trait in him... & that's how Aahil never died & turned into a vampire instead!! That's how vampires & humans are trying to co-exist... The way you've written it all feels so realistic 😊 👏

AAAND is Zain the one who caused the accident?? 😲 Goodness me!!! I see huge rivalry there!!

Aahil shares such a beautiful relationship with his grandmother... She gave him her ring... This suddenly reminded me of Spiderman-3', y'know, where Mrs. Ben gives her ring to Peter asking him to give it to Mary Jane Watson ... And the way Nazeera calls Aahil the Chosen One reminded me of Harry Potter' 😆

And haayeee!!! How sweetly Sanam forgave him for all of it ... The conversation is so intense, passionate, emotional ❤️ ... I'm so lost for words... Its beautiful, really 👏

Oh, and the bonding between Aahil & Hamza is really interesting 👍🏼

As for the teaser... Is the other son Zain??? Actually he is so jealous of Aahil, so I just thought, y'know maybe... 😉

I really feel this story of yours is one of its kinds on the forum... Its so interesting... Not to forget the intricate web you weave in each part... I believe you must be tired of hearing this from me 😆 ... Do update soon Mahu 🤗

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NanduVijay

@NanduVijay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Thanks for the pm.
This chapter cleared many of the confusions regarding Aahil being a vampire. So, Aahil's entire family has been vampires or half-breed for three generations.

Really loved the conversation between Aahil and his grandmom. At last, he had someone who cleared his confusions regarding Sanam. Aren't grandmoms always sweet like this. Understands us and helps us like friends at odd times. I loved when she gave her ring to Aahil to give it to Sanam.

Sanam and Aahil's conversation was mind blowing. I was very sure that she will accept him whoever he may be and the same happened. I think she understood his pain behind all this and will stand by his side always in the tragic period.

Waiting for the next update. Please update soon. The story id getting interesting day by day.

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Thanks for the PM!

Lovely chapter. We get the backstory, and finally see how Aahil came to this point.

Poor guy was so lost without his Sanam and losing hope. It's not like he hid anything from her, he just found out and his world was just ripped apart, too. 😭 The image of him being buried alive, and then Hamza and Junaid rescuing him was great! You got the atmosphere just right.

I'm glad Sanam came through and chose her Aahil. It just took her a little bit of time.

"I intend to keep you.. Love you.. Embrace you. All of you. You just need to show me how..

How lovely was this line? Sanam and Aahil standing against the world. She chose to be with him, even though this scary truth came out and isn't that what love is about?

Update soon!

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onlyaahil

@onlyaahil

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Nice update.Now i got it how Aahil became vampire.So Sanam accepted aahil
Of course she cant stay away from her love
They are made for each other.Update soon

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