AsYa FF: Revenge Of Evil Twin- Epilogue on Page 97 on 3rd Feb

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Plot:
Asad Ahmed Khan and Zoya Kandpal falls in love at 18 wen they were in their 1st year of BBA. Zoya's father is a Hindu while her mother is a Muslim. They loves each other a lot. They get engaged before doing their MBA n gets married 2 years later after doing their MBA. They even opened their own online shopping n made it successful within just a few months. They married 1st in a Muslim ceremony n then in a Hindu ceremony. All goes well till Zoya gets a shock of her life wen was waiting for Asad on their 1st night after their Hindu wedding ceremony in their dream house built by Asad. Asad comes but he is totally changed. From d 1st night itself, he mentally n physically abused Zoya. He banned 4m gong to d office as she is married. He has turned a MCP n abusive husband. He makes her work a lot along wid servants n allows her only 4-5 hours of sleep. He slaps, beats n even spanks her wen he is angry wid her. She is punished by him for even slightest mistakes. He even humiliates her publicly. Zoya is shattered n wants to leave but Asad does not lets her leave him. Zoya still can't believe dat Asad can change like dis n even think of hurting her. She has doubts regarding him. Wats actually happening in dis story? Has Asad really changed or there is more to d story than we can see?



Summary(Edited):

Mumbai 2009:
18 year old Asad Ahmed Khan falls in love wid Hindu-Muslim girl Zoya Kandpal at 1st sight on their 1st day of college where they both did BBA. Zoya starts falling for Asad. Both confess to each other after 2 months. Asad n Zoya used to come to each other's house. Asad's family likes Zoya n Zoya's family too likes Asad.


Mumbai 2012:
Asad n Zoya have passed out n starts preparing for MBA. Asad n Zoya visits each others houses regularly to study. Ayaan n Humeira gets married while Asad n Zoya gets engaged.


Mumbai 2013:
Abhimanyu n Najma gets engaged before Asad n Zoya leaves 2gthr for Delhi to study MBA as they r selected. Asad decided to join Khan business after his MBA while Zoya decided to join Kandpal business.


Mumbai 2015:
Asad n Zoya have completed their MBA. They started opening their own online shopping business dat became successful in few months.

Mumbai 2015:
Asad n Zoya gets married 1st in Muslim ceremony n then in Hindu ceremony.

1st night of wedding:
Zoya was waiting in d bedroom of d dream home Asad built for them after their Hindu wedding ceremony. Asad arrives while smoking. Zoya is shocked.
"Why r u smoking? U never did dat?" asked Zoya shockingly.
"Dat does not mean I can never smoke," replied Asad coldly.
Zoya is shocked wid his tone.
"Dis is wrong," said Zoya.
She takes d cigarette 4m him n throws in d dustbin. Asad slaps her hard across d face shocking her.
"Don't do dat again. U r my wife so u better never do anything dat angers n never disobey me," said Asad angrily.
"Asad, how can u slap me?" asked Zoya angrily.
Asad pulls out her head dupatta throwing it on d bed n pulls her hair hard n said in an enraged tone, "I am ur husband so I can do dat. Don't u ever raise ur voice again while talking to me."
He pushes her on d bed n goes to another room to sleep. Zoya is still in shock. She changes into a nightie n cries to sleep.

Next morning, 4am:
Zoya who was sleeping wakes up as she feels water on her. She opens her eyes to see Asad throwing water on her.
"Get up n make breakfast for me," orders Asad.
"Why u woke me up like dis wen its only 4am?" asked Zoya shockingly, "Even servants wakes up at 6am while we wake up at 8am?"
She goes to sleep again. Asad gets angry n pulls d comforter off her n then pulls her by her hand making her sit up.
"Wat d hell, Asad?" shouts Zoya.
Asad slaps her hard n replies angrily, "I had told u never disobey me n never raise ur voice wid me. Now just get up n be ready. I want my breakfast in an hour.
Zoya gets scared n gets up. Asad smirks evilly.


9am same morning:
Zoya gets ready for d office.
A said angrily, "U can't come to office wid me as u r married now. If u tell anyone wat happened between us then u will regret."
Asad had fired all d servants n hired new servants. Zoya cries d whole day thinking wat happened to Asad n how can he hurt her like dis. She was abt to tell her parents on phone but she remembers Asad's threats n stops.

Asad wud make Zoya work hard along wid servants d whole day allowing her only 4-5 hours of sleep in d entire day. Zoya is shocked dat Asad started drinking black n bitter coffee instead of drinking it wid milk n sugar.

A week after marriage:
Zoya fell asleep one evening getn very tired of working. Asad comes 4m d office n calls Zoya to bring him coffee. He gets irritated wen she does not listens after he called her 2-3 times. He goes to her room n gets angry on seeing her sleeping. He woke her up by pinching her arm n slapped her twice for sleeping widout his permission. Zoya gets angry n tells him dat she has enough of his nonsense n she will leave d house n tell everyone abt him n go to police to complain abt him. Asad gets angry n tells her dat he will punish her severely for her rebelling. He pulls her over his knee n starts spanking her. She gets shocking n tries to escape by covering her bottom, biting his thigh n squirming. He ties her hands wid his tie n tells her to remain still otherwise it will be worse. He spanks her while she begs for forgiveness n promises not to tell anyone abt him but he does not stops n enjoys punishing her. He stops after 10 minutes. He further punishes her by denying her sleep dat night n giving her lots of works to do. She has a hard time while daring not to sleep.


2 weeks after marriage:
Zoya is sitting in her room wearing a short blue dress. Her face n hands had bruises due to Asad's frequent beatings. Asad enters her room n she gets scared. He had a black dress in his hand. He throws it at Zoya teln her to wear as they r going for a party. Zoya throws d dress on d bed refusing to wear dat dress as it was too short just dat just ended till her buttocks, was low neck n was too revealing. He again tells her wear d dress but she slaps him n calls him a jerk n cheap man. Asad gets angry n spanks her worse than d last time teln her dat she will do as he say. She agrees to do as he say n wears d dress.


At d party:
Zoya sees dat Asad had friends she never knew n there were not any friends dat she knew as Asad's friends. D girls in d party also wore s**tty dresses like her. His friends seemed like goons. Asad forces her to drink n slaps her in front of everyone wen she refuses. He makes her drink. He forces her to dance on d table. Wen she refuses, he warns her to punish her in front of everyone like he punished her before cumn to d party for refusing to wear d dress. Zoya gets embarrassed n agrees while Asad smiles evilly. She dances on d table while his friends throws money on her. Asad goes in a corner n does a video recording of her.
After cumn 4m d party, Zoya is shattered n breaks down saying to god dat how can Asad change so much n before marriage he never hurt her but always loved her so much. She then recalls some of Asad's words to her abt his life n gets shocked.
"Wat if its not Asad but him?" says Zoya in wonder.
"No, it can't be him as he is dead. But wats wrong wid Asad? He is not letn me even leave him," says Zoya.
She recalls trying to escape 4m d house twice only to be caught n punished by Asad severely. Also, d new servants r actually bad n on Asad's side who always keeps an eye on her on Asad's instructions.


Next morning:
Zoya sees Asad reading a urdu newspaper n gets shocked.
"Wen u learned urdu? Both of us did not knew to read urdu?" asked Zoya shockingly.
"Its none of ur business wen I learned urdu. U go n bring coffee for me," replied Asad rudely.
Zoya goes 4m there while Asad luks shocked.
"Dis girl is running her mind too much," said Asad coldly.


A/N: I thought of dis new concept 2day. Like Phir Milenge, dis story also has lots of violence scenes. I will start dis story in April after Drawn To Each Other ends as it has only 2 more parts wid an epilogue. Do lemme me know if anyone is interested😊.



Index:
Plot

Summary

Character Sketch
Part 2

New Characters


Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Promo 2

Part 6

Part 7

Part 16

Part 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Hey Juhi..
Thanx for the P.M...
Well its a Unique & Interesting plot..
But Asad can't be like this , I guess...
Zoya being a victim of Domestic abuse...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Juhi yeh Kya tha 🤢 itna bhari bharkam wala promo ? 🤢
First of all I was really jumping looking that u r writing a story (cause I really have found no stories of yours ) but then the promo Aree you said u din like dark shade boys so what's dis ? Aree Fifty shades of grey dekh liya Kya ? 😳
Anyways I will comment how was my reaction from first .
First line was just both AsYa falling for each other muah ! 😳
Then they marrying and I was like ! Yippee ! 😃
But then the first night ? What's that ? What happened to our Asad ?😡 What the f****** hell is wrong with him ? 😡
Aree baaf re baaf ! Poor Zoya na 😭 hate this Asad 😡
Okay okay so is this not Asad or what ? 😲 Yeah u gave me some hope 😊
Okay now this should be started soon ! And I want Asad , the real one back !
Anyways all the best and go on with this one !
Ps one thought that came to my mind the moment I saw the thread , title kyu nahi rakha bae? 🤣
Confused with it or what 🤣 help chahiye Kya ? 😆
Love
Sam
Omg what a long one ! Mujhe scroll down karnaa padh raha hai 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting
I guss Asad is under control of some short of supurnatural power.

Juhi count me in
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting...
What happened to Asad?😕
Edited by ammusjyoti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for starting a new story
haw story gong so fast
Asya married
What happened to asad
Oh i have some hope now he is not asad
Ok wen u start story pm me
Thank u for pming me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Juhi..
Thanx for the P.M...
Well its a Unique & Interesting plot..
But Asad can't be like this , I guess...
Zoya being a victim of Domestic abuse...
Continue soon...


Thank u😊
Its just a summary
There will be nice scenes also😃
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Juhi yeh Kya tha 🤢 itna bhari bharkam wala promo ? 🤢

First of all I was really jumping looking that u r writing a story (cause I really have found no stories of yours ) but then the promo Aree you said u din like dark shade boys so what's dis ? Aree Fifty shades of grey dekh liya Kya ? 😳
Anyways I will comment how was my reaction from first .
First line was just both AsYa falling for each other muah ! 😳
Then they marrying and I was like ! Yippee ! 😃
But then the first night ? What's that ? What happened to our Asad ?😡 What the f****** hell is wrong with him ? 😡
Aree baaf re baaf ! Poor Zoya na 😭 hate this Asad 😡
Okay okay so is this not Asad or what ? 😲 Yeah u gave me some hope 😊
Okay now this should be started soon ! And I want Asad , the real one back !
Anyways all the best and go on with this one !
Ps one thought that came to my mind the moment I saw the thread , title kyu nahi rakha bae? 🤣
Confused with it or what 🤣 help chahiye Kya ? 😆
Love
Sam
Omg what a long one ! Mujhe scroll down karnaa padh raha hai 😆😆



Thank u😊
Yaa I don't like such heroes but dis story has suspense which I can't reveal
I did not read n watched 50 shades but these types of stories were always available on internet as short stories. These spanking things r common among MCP n jerk husbands.
Loved ur reactions😆
Dis is not my 1st story but I have wrote several stories before dis
I have read more horrifying stories than dis
Zoya doubts dat he is not Asad but then who he is is?
Main 2-3 parts k baad hi thik se title soch sakti hu😆

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Thank u😊
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Originally posted by: -ABI-

Interesting
I guss Asad is under control of some short of supurnatural power.

Juhi count me in


Thank u😊

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