AsYa FF: Revenge Of Evil Twin- Epilogue on Page 97 on 3rd Feb - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aman1605

Looking forward this Juhi😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Am so sure that its not asad but someone else.
But where is he... Please come save your zoya


Dis twist will come after some parts. So, enjoy happy parts till then😊.
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Promo 1: Introducing Asad Ahmed Khan and Zoya Kandpal

Mumbai 2009

In Khan Villa(KV), a boy of 18 is getn ready for his 1st day of college. He wears a black leather jacket over his white t-shirt n blue jeans. He then wears an aviator. He comes in d hall where his family is waiting for him.

"Bhaijaan, u r lukn so dashing," said Najma.

"I wish u too get a girlfriend, Asad," said Ayaan.

"Is it so easy to get a girlfriend?" asked Asad, "Bhaijaan, u focus on ur date wid Humeira."

"Who knows u might find someone," said Ayaan.

"Najma, ur 10th results will come next week. U sud start deciding which college u will go. Asad, enjoy ur 1st day in BBA college. Take care, beta," said Dilshad wid a smile.(SSC Board has school till 10th standard n college starts 4m 11th standard. Mumbai people knows dis.).

"Okay ammi," said Asad wid a smile.

"All d best for ur college," said Rashid.

"Thanks abbu," said Asad wid a smile.

Asad left d house n got on his bike to go for college.

Scene shifts to Kandpal Mansion(KM). A girl dresses up in red sleeveless t-shirt, blue jeans mini-skirt. She then wears a jeans jacket. She then wears a knee-length low heeled leather boots. She comes in d hall. Her younger brother Abhimanyu was playing video games. Her parents were watching TV.(Zoya's hair is curly in dis story like d picture I posted in CS).

"Mom, dad, I am going," said Zoya.

Her parents n Abhimanyu got up.

"U go in ur new car," said Abhijeet.

"No dad, I will go by my new Scooty Pep+ instead. I will use car later," said Zoya.

"As u wish, my dear," said Abhijeet wid a smile.

"Di, do tell if u made any boyfriend," said Abhimanyu.

"Abhi plz, can't u talk sumthn else?" asked Zoya, "Next week, tera result aayega. Tu ye decide kar ki kaunse college me jaayega."

"Vo to main decide kar hi loonga, Zoe. U have fun on ur 1st day in BBA college," said Abhi wid a smile.

Abhimanyu calls her di as well as Zoe. He loves his sister very much but also fights wid her a lot. He loves cooking n always says dat he is a better cook than Zoya.

"Tu aakar muje sab bataana ki tera college kaisa gaya," said Zainab.

"Okay mom," said Zoya.

"Take care, beta," said Zainab wid a smile.

"Okay mom," said Zoya wid a smile.

Zoya left d house n got on her scooty to go for college.

Scene shifts to Asad reaching d college on his bike. He parks his bike n comes out of d parking. He luks around d campus.

"2day is my 1st day," said Asad.

After some time, his eyes catches a girl cumn on her purple Scooty Pep+. Dat girl is none other than Zoya. He gets drawn to her as he sees her removing her helmet n smoothing her curly hairs. He smiles as she gets down 4m her scooty n parks it.

"She is so beautiful," thinks Asad wid a smile on his face.

Zoya gets out of d parking n luks around d campus. After walking a little, she stands a feet away 4m Asad.

"Gannuji, ye college kitna accha hai. Allah Miyan, I hope mere naye friends bane," said Zoya.

Asad heard her talking to herself n loved her voice. He was amazed at her talking to God Ganesh as well as Allah. Zoya then turns her face a little n sees Asad. She comes to him.

"Which class r u in?" asked Zoya.

"1st year BBA," replied Asad.

"Same here," said Zoya.

"Wats ur name?" asked Asad.

"Zoya Kandpal," replied Zoya n asks, "And urs?"

"Asad Ahmed Khan," replied Asad.

Asad was amazed by her name which was Muslim name wid Hindu surname.

"Can we be friends?" asked Asad extending his hand.

"Sure," replied Zoya as she held his hand.

They smiled as they shook their hand.


A/N: No horrible twist till 9 or 10 parts. Enjoy happy parts of both the families till then😊.

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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
res
unress
the promo was awesome and Asad's words and feelings were nicely written
so...introduction is awesome

p.s : sorry for late unressing to be honest i forgot to unress😃
Edited by Asshi... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Nice
So we will get happiness for a while
Then u will hit us with the terrible twist

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Posted: 10 years ago
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now i can understand that zoya loved asad. and the one she married is surely abhimanyu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanKsgian

now i can understand that zoya loved asad. and the one she married is surely abhimanyu


Abhimanyu is Zoya's brother. I think u missed sumthn in CS n Promo 1😛.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice promo
Thanks for pm
Waiting for an update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
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Thank u😊

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