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Part 6

Anas goes outside Zoya's room n sees her sleeping.

"So, Princess is asleep. Let me go n check d Prince," said Anas wid an amusing smile.

Acene shifts at an abandoned fort(Imagine Gudiya Factory 4m d show). Asad is tied on a chair. He was still unconscious. He opens his eyes wen someone throws water at him. He is shocked to see Anas smirking at him wearing his sherwani while he was in d clothes dat Anas had worn. Asad recalls how he got into a fight wid Anas n became unconscious.

"Anas, why u brought me here?" asked Asad angrily trying to free himself.

"Asad Asad Asad, calm down," replied Anas wid an amusing smile, "Asad for ur question why I brought u here? D answer is simple. I brought u here for revenge 4m u & ur Zoya."

"Why r u dragging Zoya in dis? U have problems wid me? Wat has Zoya done to u? Why u have exchanged both of our clothes?" asked Asad angrily.

"Wat has Zoya done to me? Luks like u forgot how she failed my plans to frame u & spke against me. I spent in jail for 6 years cuz of her before I ran away. Everyone thinks dat I am dead but I am alive n living as Asad dat is u," replied Anas in a serious tone.

"U mean all r thinking dat u r Asad while u kidnapped me here?" asked Asad shockingly.

"U r so smart, bro. U guessed so early," replied Anas wid a smile.

"U will not do anything to Zoya," said Asad staring at him.

"I have not done anything yet," said Anas wid a smile, "Just slapped her cuz she threw my cigarette in d dustbin n then pulled her hair hard before pushing her on d bed. It was so pleasant to see her in tears. Dats just d start, bro. She has a lot to pay for wat she did."

"Anasss," shouted Asad.

Anas laughed like a maniac n said, "I need to go now. See u later, bro."

Anas left 4m there. Asad gets more worried n helpless.

Next morning, 4am:

Zoya who was sleeping wakes up as she someone throws water on her. She opens her eyes to see Asad throwing water on her.

"Asad, wat r u doing?" asked Zoya sleepily.

"Get up n make breakfast for me," orders Asad.

"Why u woke me up like dis wen its only 4am?" asked Zoya shockingly, "Even servants wakes up at 6am while we wake up at 8am?"

She goes to sleep again. Asad gets angry n pulls d comforter off her n then pulls her by her hand making her sit up.

"Wat d hell, Asad?" shouts Zoya.

Asad slaps her hard n replies angrily, "I had told u never disobey me n never raise ur voice wid me. Now just get up n be ready. I want my breakfast in an hour.

Zoya gets scared n gets up. Asad smirks evilly.

Zoya baths n changes into a red anarkali. She then makes breakfast. After dat, she lays d table alone as it was 5am n servants wud wake up at 6am. She n Anas then sits to eat.

"I want u to wake up at 4am on ur own 4m 2mrw," said Anas firmly.

"Asad, u can't be serious," said Zoya in denial.

"I am serious, Zoya," said Anas firmly.

Zoya did not know wat to say.

9am same morning:

Zoya gets ready for d office in her formals of blue shirt n black trouser. Wen Zoya came to d hall, Anas got angry.

Anas said angrily, "U can't come to office wid me as u r married now."

"Asad, wat happened to u? Why d hell r u saying dis?" asked Zoya shockingly.

"I am saying right. A woman does not goes to office but she stays n does all d housework. So, 4m now u will only do housework n not think of office," replied Anas firmly.

"But servants r there for housework," said Zoya.

"Servants r not enough for d housework. So, will also work along wid them. U will sleep only wid my permission. Only I will decide wen u will work n wen u will sleep. If u tell anyone wat happened between us then u will regret very badly," warned Anas.

Anas then had fired all d servants n hired new servants.

"Why have u fired these servants n hired new ones?" asked Zoya.

"I don't need to ask ur suggestion for dis as only I will take all d decisions of d house," said Anas rudely, "I am going to d office now. U will clean d house along wid d servants."

"Asad," said Zoya shockingly.

"Don't u dare to disobey me," warned Anas.

Zoya nodded her head reluctantly while he smirked. He then left d house for d office.

"Asad is acting so different," said Zoya.

Zoya started cleaning d house along wid d servants. Zoya cries d whole day thinking wat happened to Asad n how can he hurt her like dis. She was abt to tell her parents on phone but she remembers Asad's threats n stops. She did not slept d whole day.

Anas returns in d evening n gets changed. He then calls for Zoya to come in his room. Zoya comes in his room.

"Wat happened Asad?" asked Zoya.

"Bring coffee for me. Remember, it sud be black coffee widout sugar," ordered Anas.

"But u never drank black n bitter coffee?" asked Zoya shockingly.

"I don't need ur permission to decided wen I sud start drinking black n bitter coffee. Go now," said Anas rudely.

Zoya left d room. She came back after some time wid his coffee.

"Now, u can go n sleep for an hour. And after dat, u sud start preparing for dinner wid others," ordered Anas.

Zoya left d room. Anas tuk a sip of d coffee n sighed in pleasure.

Days went by. Asad wud make Zoya work hard along wid servants d whole day allowing her only 4-5 hours of sleep in d entire day. Weneva Zoya wud sumthn which wud anger him, he wud manhandle her, pull her hair n slap her n even give her more work for punishment. Zoya was always scared due to his cruelty n brutality 2wards her. She was very helpless.

AsYa r invited to KV 4 days after their marriage. They were invited to live there for 2 days. Anas n Zoya got ready to go to KV. Zoya dressed in a navy blue saree wid black sleeveless blouse while Anas dressed in a red shirt n blue jeans.

"Don't u tell anything to d family otherwise u will have to face d consequences. If u shed one tear there then I will make u shed thousand tears for dat," warned Anas.

Zoya nodded timidly.

"Good girl," said Anas.

They reached KV in some time in Anas oops Asad's car. Everyone in KV got happy on seeing them. Anas lukd his family in shock after 6 years who r thinking him as Asad. Rashid told Latif to keep their luggage in their room. Latif was their servant who was an eunuch.

"Its good to see u both here," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Why don't u both permanently live wid us?" asked Ayaan.

"Bhaijaan, we will move here after a month," replied Anas.

"After a month, both Asad n Zoya will be killed by me," thinks Anas.

"Well, wat abt ur honeymoon?" asked Humeira.

"We have not decided yet," replied Anas.

"Get fresh n come for breakfast," said Rashid.

Anas n Zoya went to Asad's room.

"Since we had to be in d same room, u will sleep on d couch while I will sleep on d bed. Don't say dis to anyone," said Anas.

Zoya was shocked to say anything.

Anas n Zoya came to d dining table for breakfast. All talked while having breakfast. Anas acted well not even letn them have a single doubt abt wat is going on in his n Zoya's life.

"Zoya haddecided not to go to office for a month as she wants to rest as we have got married recently. But still she works 4m home sumtyms," said Anas wid a fake smile.

"Oh dats so nice," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Zoya cud not believe dat he cud lie so much. She wanted to tell d truth but she is scared as Asad(4m Zoya n other's POV Anas is written as Asad) is wid her right now.

After breakfast, all r in d hall except Anas. Zoya was lukn tensed n was quiet.

"Zoya, why r u lukn so tensed?" asked Dilshad.

Zoya decides to tell d truth abt Asad.

"Ammi, Asad has changed...," replied Zoya but she was cut off by Anas who came all of a sudden n stared at her.

"Ammi, she means dat I have changed cuz I did not tuk Zoya for shopping but I have promised her dat I will take her soon," said Anas wid a fake smile.

"Oh, so dats d reason," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Zoya gets upset as its not truth. Anas gives her a threatening stare.

"Yaa Ammi," said Zoya wid a fake smile.

Scene shifts to Anas pushing Zoya on d bed roughly. He came near her.

"How dare u try to say anything to d family?" asked Anas angrily.

"Asad, I was not going to say anything," replied Zoya in a scared voice.

"Don't lie to me," said Anas angrily grabbing her hair, "Since u did d mistake, there will be punishment for d same so dat u think twice before opening ur mouth again. 4m now till next morning, u will neither get to eat nor drink anything. Tumhe bhookha-pyaasa rehna padega."

"Asad no," said Zoya in a shocked voice.

"Yes, u will be starved," said Anas in a steely voice.

Tears came 4m Zoya's eyes but he did not cared. After dat, he made sure dat Zoya be in d room along wid him so dat she cud not eat or drink anything. They were called for lunch. Zoya hoped to eat but did not had any idea wat Anas had planned. Dilshad came in d room.

"Ammi, Zoya was so hungry dat she had eaten earlier. I got food for her 4m Latif," said Anas wid a smile.

Anas had actually taken food 4m Latif but for himself so dat he cud torture Zoya while eating food in front of her n also so dat he cud lie dat Zoya had eaten food earlier. Zoya was abt to say sumthn but Anas threatens wid his eyes to shut up.

"Ohhh okay," said Dilshad wid a smile n left d room.

"Asad, why u lied?" asked Zoya, "Its u who had eaten d food."

"Cuz I don't want u to get any chance to have anything till I want," replied Anas, "I am going to do lunch wid d family but u will remain here only in d room."

Anas left d room for lunch while Zoya lukn on helplessly.

After lunch, all slept till d evening. Anas always kept an eye on Zoya so dat she cud not have anything. Zoya was hungry like hell. She requested him several times to let her have anything but he did not listened to her n always shut her up.

During dinner, Anas said dat he n Zoya will eat in their room. Others thought dat they want to spend some time alone so Dilshad told Latif to keep their foods in their room.

In AsYa's room, Zoya was abt to eat sumthn 4m her plate wen Anas caught her hand.

"I think I have told u dat u r not going to eat n drink anything," scolded Asad.

"Asad, plz let me eat. After breakfast, I have not even drank water," pleaded Zoya.

"U sud thought of dis before trying to tell everyone d truth," said Anas in an amusing tone.

"Asad, I am sorry. Plz, I want to eat," begged Zoya.

Anas smirked at her begging. He recalled how he had to eat bad food in d jail for 6 years.

"Cuz of u, I had to eat bad n tasteless food in d jail for 6 years. Now, u r begging me to let me eat. U had messed wid d wrong person, Zoya," thinks Anas angrily.

"Shut up, Zoya," said Anas angrily, "If u say one more word then u will be starved one more entire day. So, be quiet. I am going to eat ur food also in front of u."

Zoya gets scared n keeps quiet to avoid getn him more angry. She helplessly lukd Asad enjoying d food while she is badly hungry. He did d same in d afternoon n is doing dat again. Anas enjoyed seeing her lukn helplessly while he was d food.

After dinner, as Anas said he slept on d bed while Zoya slept on d couch. Zoya cud not get sleep easily as she was very hungry as she had nothing after breakfast. She recalls one of d happy moments wid Asad. She cud not believe he is d same Asad who loved her so much.

-----Flashback-----

It was 2nd day in their MBA college. Asad n Zoya were in d canteen.

"Zoya, wat wud u like to eat?" asked Asad.

"Just a plate of veggie salad," replied Zoya.

"R u on a diet?" asked Asad amusingly.

"No, I just don't feel like eating more," replied Zoya.

"Zoya, dis is not right. We have various lectures so u can't eat so less. U will have to eat properly," said Asad.

"But Asad," said Zoya to protest.

"No ifs n no buts. U will have to eat properly otherwise u will get sick," said Asad.

"I will not get by eating less for a day," said Zoya.

"Still, u will have to eat properly," said Asad.

Zoya smiled n nodded at him. He also smiled.

-----Flashback Ends-----

Zoya came to d present as tears filled her eyes.

"U always made sure dat I eat properly but 2day u starved me d entire day after breakfast & I will have to be starved till next morning," said Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

She slept after some time. Next morning, she woke up at 8 along wid Anas. Anas had told her yesterday dat till they r here they will sleep till 8 so dat no one gets to know anything.

"Clear all d beddings 4m d couch n keep in d bed," said Anas rudely, "I don't want anyone to know dat we sleep separately."

Zoya did as he said.

"Now, u can eat or drink anything," said Anas.

Zoya quickly drank water 4m d bedside bottle n finished half of 1 litre bottle while Anas lukd on amusingly.

After breakfast, Anas went to d abandoned place where Asad was kept as a hostage. Asad lukd wid anger at him. He had some bruises on his face n body due to Anas n his men.

"U have kept me here 4m 5 days. Let me go," shouted Asad.

"Let u go?" asked Anas amusingly n laughed heartily, "I can't let u go, bro. I have got a great chance to torture u & ur darling wife & I can't let dis chance go."

"Anas, u will pay for everything," shouted Asad.

"Its u & Zoya who will pay for everything. Dat stupid girl was abt to tell yesterday after breakfast dat I have changed n wat all I am doing to her. Glad dat I was there in time n twisted her words saying dat she means I am not takn her for shopping but I have promised dat I will take her soon to shopping. Zoya did a big mistake & I punished by starving her till d next morning. It was fun to see her pining for food n water. Cuz of her, I ate bad n tasteless food in d jail for years. So, I had d opportunity to trouble her for dat," said Anas wid a smile teln him everything abt yesterday.

He wud come here everyday n tell him wat all he is doing wid Zoya. Asad wud get angry but he was helpless as he had his men around n was tied most of d time. Asad got angry again as he told him abt how he starved Zoya yesterday for trying to tell abt him to all.

"Anas, stop troubling my Zoya," yelled Asad.

"Its no use of yelling, Asad. No one will hear u," said Anas wid a laugh, "As for ur Zoya, she has to suffer for a long time. Ur princess has become my slave who wud always obey wat I say n order. If she does not then she will have to bear my wrath."

Asad lukd at him shockingly.

"How cud u be so inhumane?" asked Asad wid rage.

"Dats my way to deal wid people who I hate," replied Anas in a sinister tone.

He came forward n slapped Asad hard n grabbed his hair pulling his head down.

"Everyone loved u more than me all our life & u always scored more than me in school. No matter wat I did, I cud not succeed to get u out of d school," said Anas angrily still grabbing his hairs, "But now, I will have my way wid u & ur Zoya."

Anas left his hold 4m his hairs roughly. Asad was shocked n stared at him.

"Bye bro," said Anas wid an evil smile n left d place.

Asad lukd on helplessly as he left d place.

Precap:

#Anas n Zoya leaves KV d next day n Zoya's trouble starts again as they reach their house.

#Anas gets angry wid Zoya for sleeping widout his permission n not bringing him his coffee wen he told her. Zoya gets angry n tells him dat she has enough of his nonsense n she will leave d house n tell everyone abt him n go to police to complain abt him. Anas gets angry n angrily tells her dat he will teach her a lesson for her rebelling.


A/N: I know I am writing some heavy parts and will write even more heavier parts for some time but its needed for the story. Asad can't be out so soon to save Zoya because Anas is a dangerous and powerful villian in this story. From the next part, the violence or any other horrifying scene will be written in bold part with previous warning so you all can skip that part if you are uncomfortable.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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hey wolo
asad worried about zoya
oh finally zoya became bold
anas is rocking as a villian
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dnt mind juhi but I don't like this story.but I like your other story very much sorry if I hurt your filling
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Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil

Dnt mind juhi but I don't like this story.but I like your other story very much sorry if I hurt your filling


Its okay dear😊. I know u r offended by Anas. Atleast, in dis dark story Asad is not evil like in several stories n Zoya forgives him no matter wat but someone else is. Even I don't like several stories where Asad is evil n disgusting. U can continue reading story later wen its okay to read.
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Thank u😊
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Originally posted by: ashlesha2

hey wolo

asad worried about zoya
oh finally zoya became bold
anas is rocking as a villian


Thank u😊
But her boldness will cost her badly😭
Anas is supposed to be an evil n disgusting character who can never be forgiven
Asad has to be helpless for some time cuz Anas is also very strong
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Fatafat read ki mene abhi ye update nd i don't knw y bt i enjoyed reading the heavier parts too lol
maybe its how u write that attracts me 😉
love u nd yes update soon
i dread 4 zoya nw
wat lesson anas will teach her?
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Posted: 10 years ago
great update
anas is torturing both
he is really powerfull
asad is too hurt
hearing what all his love is going through
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god..this anas is a psycho. .stupid man..
poor zoya..hope she fights back and finds the truth soon..!!
U write so well..! :)
Awesome. .! :)
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Nice update
So much torture on zoya.
Asad was helpless
Scared abt zoya brave step to go to police. Hope everything will be alright
Update soon plz
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