#3 Asya/Kabhi FF Teri Galiyan Epilogue on pg 19

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Yay my 3rd thread 🥳
Finally i got my first time 3rd thread.
My story never reached third thread its the first time.
And all thanks to you guys 🤗
A special thanks to yashu, chotu, abi, sanjhari, gowtu di, amu, aashi, aaroo, affu, aishu, riddhi, shrashtu, sweet_tehs, mayur, jas, anopma di, swapno di, nilusoni, asifbaqsh, aarzoo, chahanya, pravalika, PriyaCherry, Princess_101 for being so regular and loyal. 🤗 You have been with ne from the starting of this FF.
Its all because of you guys that i write.
Thanku guys. And i am sorry whose names i forgot to mention.
I never thought that my this story will reach its 3rf because i was only not sure that you ll like this story or not. But you guys shpwer it with your
Thanku you.
And as a treat plz scroll down.
Love you guys lots of hugs 🤗 ❤️
Love Vish

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii guys.
How are you?
So i am back with a new update.
And this update is a holi present as i love holi. Hope you guys like this update.
So belated happy Valentine's day.

Part-19

One night before Valentine's day.

Asad while entering the house.
Asad- ammi zoya kaha hai? Kahi dikh nahi rahi?
Dilshaad hiding her excitement- beta vo abhi aayi nahi hai. Uska phone aya tha vo late ho jayegi.
Asad checking her watch- 10:30 ho rahe hai ammi. Usko bolte kyu nahi ki itni late tak bahar na raha kare.
Dilshaad- usko kuch zaruri kam tha. Aage se nahi hogi.
Asad- ok.
Dilshaad- dinner laga du?
Asad- nahi ammi. Bhuk nahi hai. And he went in his room.
Dilshaad thought- ha bhuk hogi bhi kaise zoya jo nahi hai.

It was now 11:30 and asad was getting restless. He was tring zoya's no. But it was switched off. He got a call and he hurriedly received the call thinking of zoya.
Asad- hello ,zoya.
Stranger- sir aap asad bol rahe hai?
Asad- ha aap kon?
Stranger- sir jinka yeh phone hai unka accident ho gaya hai.
Asad's world stopped as soon as listened this line.
But he was brought out of his trance.
Stranger- sir. Sir. Aap plz jaldi se XYZ restaurant ke bhr aa jaiye.
Asad- ha ok.

The drive was very fast he reached there in 15 minutes. He searched for her everywhere whole road was empty finally he entered the restaurant.
He entered only to meet darkness everywhere.
Asad- hello is anybody here?
One spotlight came on him. And some voice in background.
Voice- tumhe koi aur dekhe toh bahut dukhta hai yeh dil.(now another spotlight was there on ohr zoya. Asad was shocked to see her) Galtian kuch tumne bhi kuch humne bhi. Saza dur rehne ki tumhe bhi mili hume bhi. Ab jab hum dono ko hamari galti ka ehsaas hai toh kyu na apni galtia sudhare or aaj ke din ek dusre ko har mayne(means) mein apna le.
Asad was now angry he has tears of thought of losing zoya and here she is here claded in a red saree luking all good. He was angry, he dont like such jokes.
Zoya came to him and was about to say something but asad blasted on him.
Asad- zoya tum yaha thik ho? Aur mujhe laga tumhe kuch ho gaya. Kyu hamesha mujhe hurt karti ho. Maza aata hai kya mujhe aansoo dekar.
Zoya- i am sorry asad. Par main toh tumhe surprise dena chahti thi.
Asad- bht acha surprise dia tumne. I am going
He was about to go but zoya grabbed his wrist.
Zoya Very confidently- nahi asad aaj nahi. Aaj tum mujhse lado gussa karo par jao mat. Aaj ki rat nahi jane dungi main not at all.
Asad- zoya plz leave me.
Zoya- choda toh tha 7 sal ke liye. Aur kitna chodu. Ab nahi chodungi. Tumhar le mein himat hai toh ja ke dikhao.
Asad now again make an attempt to go but this time our zoya was in a sherni mode.
She stopped him by holding his collor. Listen Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan aaj tum yaha se nahi ja sakte.
Asad was taken aback by her anger so to avoid it he said. See zoya chodo log dekhenge toh kya kahenge. And than he saw there was noone except them.
Zoya- shut up asad dont change the topic. Aur yaha hamare alava koi nahi hai.
Asad- zoya yeh sab kyu?
Zoya- bas asad. Aur kitna ladenge hum kitna hurt honge? Aaj jo bhi hai main yeh din tumhare sath hi beetna chahti hu. Maine kabhi socha hi nahi ki mere sath sath tum bhi hurt hue ho. Plz mujhe maf kardo asad plz. Zoya was crying by now.
Asad wiped her tears. And said not to cry.
Zoya bent on her knees with very difficulty as she was wearing saree.
I love you asad. Will you be my Valentine for today for rest of my life?
With that lights were on and they were showered by rose petals. Whole restaurant was booked for them noone was there only a lil staff and them. Whole restaurant was decorated with orchids, fairy lights. It was all a dream date which asad has always imagined.
Asad was shocked- zoya yeh sab toh..
Zoya- tumhari dream date asad. Now jaldi se tell me your answer.
Asad- oh i am sorry. Yes Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan i ll be your Valentine. Now get up. With tht he helped her in getting up.
Asad hugged her tightly zoya too hugged him passionately. Zoya's hands were roaming on his muscular body. and asad's hands were roaming on her alsmost exposed back.
Asad was losing his control so before he do something else he broke apart.
Zoya shocked- kya hua?
Asad- kuch nahi lets have dinner.
Zoya- we ll have that. But why you broke the hug.
Asad with a sheepish smile- vo i was losing control. And i dont want to make you uncomfortable.
Zoya- you are not making me uncomfortable asad. And wait for sometime you ll get your time. And she winked.
Asad shocked- zoya tum thik toh ho na? Ho kya gaya hai tumhe?
Zoya- asad yeh sab batein kal karenge but aaj lets enjoy ourselves. After so long we got each other back so lets not spoil it. Come pets have dinner.
Asad- ok.
There were everything of asad's choice.
Zoya- you i wanted to make this day special for you. Because jitna i have hurt us hisab se i had to compensate.
Asad- plz zoya bas aur nahi. Abhi tumne kaha lets enjoy lets not talk about past.
Zoya- ha ok. Now feed me i am hungry. And i know tumne bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga. But before eating lets cute the cake.
Asad- ha vo i was waiting for you.
They cut the cake and feed eachother. There was some cream on zoya's lips.
Asad- zoya cream lagi hai.
Zoya said lovingly- toh hata do na.
Asad instead of using any tissue or his hand he licked her lips. Zoya was shocked but she kissed him. They both kissed eachother passionately. The kiss was rough but still soft. All emotions were poured in that one kiss.
They broke apart when found the need of oxygen.
They both blushed and silently fed eachother. The dinner was full of romance.
Asad holding her hand- zoya your are looking ethereal.
Zoya blushed- thanku.
Asad- par plz aage se aise accident ki bat mat karna i ll never talk to you.
Zoya- ok meri jaan nahi karungi.
Asad- main tumhari jaan hu?
Zoya- koi shak?
Asad- pata nahi tha.
Zoya with a sexy look- ghar chalo batati hu.
Asad- ghar mein ammi bhi nahi hongi.
Zoya- kaha gayi ammi?
Asad- vo sab khala ke ghar haye hai.
Zoya- oh ok. Vaise tumne kich plan nahi kia tha?
Asad- pata lag jayega tumhe.
Zoya- ok. So lets go.
Asad- yup.

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Asya entered there room. Whole room was decorated with candles and rose petals. There was heart made on bed with rose petals.
Zoya squealed- so yeh tha tumhara surprise?
Asad- abhi toh starting hai.
Zoya- tumne yeh sab kia kaise?
Asad- i also decided all this so ghar phch kar main yeh sab kar raha tha. and than vo call aya.
Zoya hugged him tightly- i love you asad.
Asad- i love you too my love my Angel.
They both were hugging eachother as if there is no tomorrow.
Asad opened her strings while hugging her and touched her sensuously.
Zoya's breath hitched. She moaned his name. Asad.
Asad breaking the hug asking for permission. May I?
Zoya blushed an just nodded
Asad lift her in bridal style and gently made her sit on bed.
He showered some rose petals on her. Zoya was feeling special.
Asad kissed her forehead, than her eyes, than her cheeks. He bite her cheeks softly. He than kissed her lips. Zoya too responded to the kiss with equal passion.
They both were sucking eachothers lips nibbling on it. They were having there best kiss.
Due to lack of oxygen they broke apart but asad trailed kisses to the neck. He than removed her dangles and kissed her earlobe. He bite her ears. Zoya was moaning all this while.
Asad than unpinned her pallu. He kissed her cleavage. Placed open mouth kisses there. Zoya was having the best time of her life. Same is the case with asad.
Asad than one by one removed her clothes. Zoya too opened his buttons.
Asad sucked her boobs mercilessly. Zoya was just moaning in pleasure.
Asad than entered her making sure he didn't hurt zoya much.
Finally on the love day they both became one.
Full night the spend exploring eachother.
The both slept in eachothers arms with a content smile playing on their lips.

Precap- asad's date. Some more romance
So how was it? I hope you guys like it.
Happy Holi Guys. May this holi bring lots of colours in your life. Stay blessed.

Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res for yashu, chotu, abi, sanjhari, gowtu di, amu, aashi, aaroo, affu, shrashtu, aishu, riddhi, sweet_tehs, mayur, jas, others too.
Edited by MagsDhingra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

Res for yashu, chotu, abi, sanjhari, gowtu di, amu, aashi, aaroo, affu, aishu, riddhi, sweet_tehs, mayur, jas, others too.


res 4 me...
i m 1st 🥳
unres...

lovely update...
loved zoya's surprise...
asya r one now 😉
thnxxx for res...
congo shongo for new thread...
or haan pm me next time..
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS for well deserving 3rd Thread yar
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
well it was Awesome Update Yar
Zoya's prank wasn't good(accident) but I guss Asad deserve that mini-heartattack after what he had done with Zoya(leaveing her)

Overall I l❤️ve it yar
btw thanks for "res" yaara
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

<font color="#333333">Res for yashu, chotu, abi, sanjhari, gowtu di, amu, aashi, aaroo, affu, shrashtu, aishu, riddhi, sweet_tehs, mayur, jas, others too.</font>


Heyy Vish... 😊
Thanx alot for the Res' 😛
Though i have to admit i was not following this story from the starting because I didn't knew about it... 😳 but now iam a regular here... 😆
So coming to the update...this was Romantic , Very nice and well written part... 👏 ⭐️
Iam glad Zoya took the initiative to do something for her and Asad's first Valentine together...and that was very perfectly done..😉 atleast she took the charge and didn't let Asad runaway this time...😃
Though Accident thing was little scary😲 but our Asad was so worked up and worried he didn't realised i think that the stranger called him to a restaurant and not hospital... ' Bechara Asad '
Happy that all things are left behind and they started their new journey together...in all means...
Lovely update...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

<font color="#333333">Res for yashu, chotu, abi, sanjhari, gowtu di, amu, aashi, aaroo, affu, shrashtu, aishu, riddhi, sweet_tehs, mayur, jas, others too.</font>



thanks 4 the res!


Loved the update!!

AsYa one in every sense!!

pagal accident nahi use karna chahiye tha !!

darr gayi mai bhi asad ki tarah!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

<font color="#333333">Res for yashu, chotu, abi, sanjhari, gowtu di, amu, aashi, aaroo, affu, shrashtu, aishu, riddhi, sweet_tehs, mayur, jas, others too.</font>




Wow Maggie... Congratulations on new thread 🥳
Party tym...

And d updt was...



Al d way I was like *aaawww*

Baaasss...

Just loved it yaar...

That was romantic
😳 😳

So beautifully written... 👏

Rose petals and alll huh... Lvly..

Happy Holiday maggu.. I m watching kyy now..
Holi epi start hogaya 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Romance at peak.
Both confessed & became one in all senses. Happy Holi to u.
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

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