New ASYA SS :Angel || chapter 18updated on pg 115(10/8)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Awesome part

asya marriage happened

tanveer become new problem

misunderstanding between asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome part
asya marriage happened
tanveer become new problem
misunderstanding between asya
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part

Hey Nilu thank you so much dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Amazing
Ab is billi ki hi kami thi
Really fiance stupid
Waited for a moment asad came to know about dilshaad and why zoya married him
Asad realized his feelings towards zoya wen three month contract came to end
Anyways its ur story do justice to it as u want
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Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar
Amazing
Ab is billi ki hi kami thi
Really fiance stupid
Waited for a moment asad came to know about dilshaad and why zoya married him
Asad realized his feelings towards zoya wen three month contract came to end
Anyways its ur story do justice to it as u want
Love it
Thanks for pm
Cont soon

Thank you so much dear 👏

Yes it's come to know asad about dilshad soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: shailu123
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Posted: 10 years ago

#470

So long that I didn't comment on your story, I realized that I didn't comment for 3 chapters 😕. Sh**, so sorry yaar.

So, I stopped when she was about to get married and Asad just came on time to save her. This is good or else, you would have face me, marring to her Akram, yuck.

I love how Asad didn't think twice before saving her, he was for sure falling in love with her. But I didn't like his reaction, he belived this Akram and blasted on her. Her health would have tell him that she was force to marry Akram. I love that Zoya didn't shut her mouth and reply to him afterall, she was right, who was she for him?

I really love Asad here, the contradition between his words and behavior was really good, he loved her but was hurt by her, he wanted to protect her without telling her his feelings. His turnoil was perfect and well show.

I must confess that I felt more for Zoya, her helpness with all this situation, how she fell miserably in this trap to save her mother. The moment, she fell in his arms was so touching and we can feel all the trust that she had for him. ANd the last update, we can feel it perfectly when she accepted this wedding.

Of course, as expected, it was a deal of 3 months and they started to ignore the other while in real, they are missing each other badly. I am really curious how you will bring them closer now, that they are just pretending that nothing happen. And for sure, the unexpected twist is Tanveer 's entry, nice move. The audacity of this woman if she only knew who Zoya was for Asad, she would have die trapped by her words 😆.

The chapter was short and it would be nice, if you explore their feeling more, even if their actions speak loudly for them.

The story was going nicely now and I am really intriguing how Asad will deal with his family with this new proposal and waited for the moment when he will reveal about his marriage.

Continue soon and sorry for the delay dear. I forgot to comment for so long, that I felt shame 😳, I am so sorry and holding my ears 😒