New ASYA SS :Angel || chapter 18updated on pg 115(10/8)

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Hey friends
I am new as a writer plz forgive me in any grammar mistakes
This writing is inspiring from all beautiful writers and readers.
Specially thanks to saima sayed.


Prologue

She is very pretty girl. Look like angel wear salwar kameez pray on Mazarin.she did not take any meal at whole day. Sun is complete his day. She staring at moon tears drops from her eyes.She said"your Zoya will complete your dream ammi " She is very upset becous today is the day she lost her mother and she becomes an orphan.
In Khan mension, Today is the day he Will never forgot. He quickly take shower and ready go to office. He step down stairs go to start his SUV and directly go to the office.he can't give any attention in office. He comes late night at home without disturbing anyone else. he stairing at full moon tears drops from his eyes and said "miss u ammi and need u ammi please come for your son your 'asad' ".


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Lovey start
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Chapter 1(
First meeting
Sidra don't cry I Will give you new color pot. Aadil, don't be upset I will give you new sport shooes. Zoya said on phone. After cutting the phone she goes to shop and collect the stuff they children's demanded to her. Today Zoya is very happy because she selected in Khan construction as architect designer trainee.
In Khan construction,"Prasad, contact with American clients and inform them I want a meeting day after tomorrow in our American branch. " sad said his P.A.
"OK sir I will inform them"prasad said.
ASAD AHAMAD KHAN IS INTERNATIONAL LEVEL ARICHITECTUR, Young bachler and good looking. But he never never miss behave with any people specially women's because he have guts her mother.
He is very strict but loyal also. He want perfection in his work. He have values of time and money. He don't have any friends except angel.
At night ASAD is going to airport by his car.in airport "sorry mam I can't help you because all seets are already booked but on your request you can take help from flights passenger".receptionist said to zoya.Zoya is going to her friends wedding because her joining date in next week.
ASAD came to tickit counter and ask for his ticket Zoya hears this conversation and stood next to ASAD and crying very loudly. ASAD heard and immediately turn around and see who is crying.
A beautiful lady who is in red salwar kameez. ASAD look at her frozzenly because she is very beautiful, pure and innocent. Asad ask her what happens.zoya see him and lost in his charm.she stop crying. ASAD again ask her what happen she didn't answer him. After few few minutes. She told him my child is admitted in hospital and isn't to go but tickets are not available. Please help me. After this drama ASAD cancel his ticket and transfer to Zoya name and booked for next flight. Zoya go to America for her friends wedding happily and thanks to asad.




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Hihi
Nice start
Interesting!
Haww!!
Poor Asad
Tricked by Zoya!
Nice start
Who's Angel?
Curious!
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