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Originally posted by: radadolcevida
So long that I didn't comment on your story, I realized that I didn't comment for 3 chapters 😕. Sh**, so sorry yaar.
So, I stopped when she was about to get married and Asad just came on time to save her. This is good or else, you would have face me, marring to her Akram, yuck.I love how Asad didn't think twice before saving her, he was for sure falling in love with her. But I didn't like his reaction, he belived this Akram and blasted on her. Her health would have tell him that she was force to marry Akram. I love that Zoya didn't shut her mouth and reply to him afterall, she was right, who was she for him?I really love Asad here, the contradition between his words and behavior was really good, he loved her but was hurt by her, he wanted to protect her without telling her his feelings. His turnoil was perfect and well show.I must confess that I felt more for Zoya, her helpness with all this situation, how she fell miserably in this trap to save her mother. The moment, she fell in his arms was so touching and we can feel all the trust that she had for him. ANd the last update, we can feel it perfectly when she accepted this wedding.Of course, as expected, it was a deal of 3 months and they started to ignore the other while in real, they are missing each other badly. I am really curious how you will bring them closer now, that they are just pretending that nothing happen. And for sure, the unexpected twist is Tanveer 's entry, nice move. The audacity of this woman if she only knew who Zoya was for Asad, she would have die trapped by her words 😆.The chapter was short and it would be nice, if you explore their feeling more, even if their actions speak loudly for them.The story was going nicely now and I am really intriguing how Asad will deal with his family with this new proposal and waited for the moment when he will reveal about his marriage.Continue soon and sorry for the delay dear. I forgot to comment for so long, that I felt shame 😳, I am so sorry and holding my ears 😒
Hey dear thank you so much 🤗
Ya I will reveal truth one by one
We will see how marriage reveal to his family
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