'DOBARA'-A SAHIL THREE SHOT-LAST PART-NEW-ON PAGE 10

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

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Absolutely lovely Mandy !!

Loved the way you tied up the loose ends and made Aahil discover the truth on his own.

How heartbroken he must 've felt seeing "Sanam" with a little boy who looked like Rehan... Good thing Seher was kind enough to put him out of his misery.

Loved their Dobara meeting and how he convinced her to give their relationship a second chance.

Lovely !!

Thanks for this. 🤗❤️

Edited by sageflower7 - 10 years ago

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

it was awesome u r a fabulous writer di so emotional

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Fab update it was..

So emotional..

Very well written..

Loved SaHil..

Seher is too good..

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

That was absolutely beautiful..😊
It was so lovely..😊
Loved their confession..😊
Awesome.. 🤗

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Az07

@Az07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

What should I say? Such a lovely update
I really wish to c something like this in show than all sort of non sense going on
Loved the moments of seher ahil sanam little rehan & sahil
Do write more beautiful stories like this in future

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

That was a perfect ending
Now because of yesterday kiss episodes know exactly how to imagine their expressions prior to it
Thanks tons
Lovely story
Excited for your next, no pressure hehe :)

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

It's superb loved it

Perfect ending

Seher and ahil talk is amazing

Saahil meeting and talk little emotional

I hope to see epilogue

Plz pm me for your work

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sahil333

@sahil333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

TQ for the perfect ending for a wonderful story!

My heart melted when Aahil pleaded: "Don't give up on us Sanam"...ufff...chills!!

And finally his Sanam said those magical words: "I love you"...I so loved this 😊

I'm so happy that the family is finally together and all happy

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Thanks to all who have commented so far on this story! I think I may consider doing an Epilogue to this story if people are interested. I think this story probably deserves one! :)

Let me know if you all wish to read an Epilogue to this story.