Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 36

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith

Ah, the story keeps getting interesting with each Chapter.

Originally posted by: Persiko

I was waiting for the update!!!! Loved the chappy!!!! mere dimaag ke ghode full speed doud rahe hai!!! can't wait for the story to move forward!!!

Originally posted by: pumpkin.honey

I m lovin dis, kbi present kbi past wale scenes soo much 😊

Glad that you are liking the format.

So I guessed it right d previous time hainna
😛 dat guy whom zo met on her way to movie dat day was Ahsaan n he also become a tenant their.. Ye bhi guess sai nikla 👏 😃

Yes, your guesses have been right.

Zo Dilshad convo was really sweet n lovin dis carefree character of zo a lot.. ab lgta h ye h apni Zoya 😊
Haha zarina aunty's strict acting while taking his interview was really a fun n side by side zo n binu's fun chatting on phn as well 😆
auntie ne bola ki wahan wo serious hoke sawalat kar rahi hongi aur main unko itna sakht pesh aate dekh hans doongi dis line really cracked me up 😆
Finally both met, m so curious to know how was their relationship
Zoya sat down on sofa pulling a dish of biscuits that was on the table near her. haha dis is what I also do many a times 😉 😆

Many of us have done this one or other time.😆

OH.MY.GOD so Asad finally saw Ahsaan's pic
So much confusions.. Ye asad pkka ahsaan h I think.. Js an innocent guess u know 😳 baki pta ni whats d real story behind
Btw lemme tell u 1 thing, don't know y bt I always get too excited while reading dis story.. I soo much love dis mystery n everything 😊

Yes, Asad saw Ahsaan's pic. If you love mystery so much, this story will keep you quite entertained, I hope.

Thanks for lovely comments.

Originally posted by: ayeshalove

Awesome stry. Read it 1 go. Pls update soon nd pls pm me.

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Loved the update, as always 😳.

OMG so finally ACP Khan will see for himself why a Mrs. Hussain called him Ahsan. Am loving the slow progress of the story Noe. Love how you build up every character.

I enjoyed reading the conversation between Zoya and Binodoni, it was do cute 😃. Ekdum natural 😃.. Waiting for the next part already.

Thanks for the PM 😊

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Meri man ki baath keh di thune dear

Its simply superb dear

I am eager to read more

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Wonderful update
Like the way u told abt tea botanist. It's a new subject for me. Dilshad & zarina enquired br Ahsan. Zoya & binnu talks were nice. She was surprised to see that stranger become their tenant. On the other side, asad started his day but that was not nice. Ayaan handed file of Zoya to asad. Waiting to see whether he saw Ahsan picture or not. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: swapno

and it started with a bang...😊
Tea-botanist ...how I am imagining the handsome as a tea botanist...

I liked how you call him "The Handsome". He is one of a kind.

I am mad ...more than ACP...tea botanist intrigues me...mysterious and interesting character...!

It is perfectly okay to be mad. This story is going to drive people nuts that I tell you. But wait till ACP steps out of shadows and he and Zoya are thrown together. 😉 I am so excited to write that part. It was one of the first things that I thought about this story.

Surely this guy is not what he is showing to others and his study area reminds me again about a mission and an ACP 😆 (back to square again..huh!!)

Yes, back to square one! 😆

I am making a story in my mind and it is going almost according to my way only and I am waiting for the surprise..!
Oh! Noe I have always loved your subtle description of everything..! Like Zoya's imagination of Ahsaan's face on the window pane...! I love rain and after BNHH segment rain and AsYa became my obsession. I did not like the song much but I love it now...SIGH!!

I love raindrops sliding down a clear glass pane. I have used the scene in one of my one shots, too (airport one).

And, BNHH and rains...❤️ For me to that song sequence was the clincher.

Hum Darjeeling main hain...baarish to hoti rahegi 😛

Anyways back to Darjeeling...and AahYa...

Aah...they have a name.
Zoya is already liking him and he will come around her just for the sake of history I guess...and time will make a way to change their feelings!
ACP khan needs to work out his brain too...not only glare at inspector Khan...!

He glares and barks orders -- that's it, naa! Time to change that.

Ayaan' character has interesting punch which I will love to read more about..!

The dish is becoming my obsession day by day..and I am becoming greedy...want a sooner update...
Thanks for PM 🤗

Thank you for lovely review. 😃

Originally posted by: Amin21

Wow what a wonderful update⭐️

so the stranger was Ahsan.

but is he asad?

If yes then why asad saying he doesn't know her😕

He botanist and asad is ACP😕😕

if no he is not asad

then what what about the pic zoya gave in report😕😕😕

He can be just someone who looks like Asad, naa? It is possible.

and most importantly who was that person in first scene of the story😕

Haan...that you will know in due course of time.

Confusion hi confusion hai😆

but one thing is crystal clear:

This ff is rocking👍🏼

Beautifully written👏

love love love it❤️

Thank you very much. All readers are loving it and it is very encouraging.