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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

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1...

sound like mystery solving story...with twist..
now pregnant zoya looking for husband...

Asad is a cop...👍🏼

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

2...

Interesting... little more on the character ...

we trust you to do your magic...

little changes...will give different taste... of the

story...

will wait for the changes...

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#344

3...

Ayaan is responsible... and he desperately want to
help zoya...

asad have some kind of restless moment...
after looking at ashaan pic...

so this getting interesting ayaan doing the investigation

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#345

Oh my oh my oh my!!!! So many different vibes I'm getting from this one! How Noe how! How do you do this! You gave so much...and I still want so much more. And moreee! What when why how! And yes. Most importantly, WHO!!!! Who is everybody. Who is real. Who is not. Is that even the right question! Oh myyy!

I'm sure next update would be Darjeeling flashback. Oh I'm sooo intrigued by everything! This story is so riveting and you! Master storyteller you! Noe, you. What spell have you casted upon me (and others too! ) with your words and your style!

You always bring out all the feels. Hugs.

Oh yes,reading you is like watching the scene playing out in front of you. And speaking of movies. They were showing the movie Aan that day starring Akshay Kumar, Sunil Shetty, Shatrugan Sinha...and okay many others too (multistarrer this one) and some things from this update reminds me of scenes from the movie. Especially the bribery stuff. And new leader new rules. Omg. ACP Asad and Akshay Kumar (forgot his name in the movie) same kind of no nonsense! Oh Noe. That's a fine fine movie. And you a fine fine fine storyteller. Imagine how I'm actually playing the scene in my head!!!!! Love youuu Noe! Thank you for this.

Edited by farz_parachute - 10 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#346

My interest is js growing n growing vid ur every fantabulous updates. I can't hold my curiousness of knowing d end, yet I don't want dis story to end any time soon
Finally asad got to know bout zo's missing husband n him being d humshakal.. Excitement at its peak 😉
So dis case is getting discussed vid d senior 1..
Loved Asad's awkwardness soo much.. Dat was really adorable n also loved d fact when he didn't loved dat d future info of zoya's case would nt b informed to him
Long lost brother.. haha simply awesome
Update super duper soon please.. Can't wait to read more n d flashbacks as well

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#347

What a wonderful update👏👏👏

sounds there is no connection between asad and zoya's husband but why she said so and where did this pic of asad come from in zoya's report? ??

LOOKS CAN BE DECEIVING

is asad hiding something?

Or is it zoya's look?

Just one thing

I think that dead body was zoya's husband😕

why and how

no clue that's what my heart says 😆

Let's see what happens

eagerly waiting

really love this ff

update soon

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#348

Many replies for last and current chapter are pending, but still replying to this one out of order because you mentioned Aan.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh my oh my oh my!!!! So many different vibes I'm getting from this one! How Noe how! How do you do this! You gave so much...and I still want so much more. And moreee! What when why how! And yes. Most importantly, WHO!!!! Who is everybody. Who is real. Who is not. Is that even the right question! Oh myyy!

I'm sure next update would be Darjeeling flashback. Oh I'm sooo intrigued by everything! This story is so riveting and you! Master storyteller you! Noe, you. What spell have you casted upon me (and others too! ) with your words and your style!

You always bring out all the feels. Hugs.

Thank you very very much. It feels good to try explores new horizons and I am not exploring them alone - so many have accepted it - that is heartening to know.😳

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Oh yes,reading you is like watching the scene playing out in front of you. And speaking of movies. They were showing the movie Aan that day starring Akshay Kumar, Sunil Shetty, Shatrugan Sinha...and okay many others too (multistarrer this one) and some things from this update reminds me of scenes from the movie. Especially the bribery stuff. And new leader new rules. Omg. ACP Asad and Akshay Kumar (forgot his name in the movie) same kind of no nonsense! Oh Noe. That's a fine fine movie. And you a fine fine fine storyteller. Imagine how I'm actually playing the scene in my head!!!!! Love youuu Noe! Thank you for this.

I haven't watched 'Aan'. But a movie released before 'Aan' called 'Khakhi'. And, Aan always ends up reminding me of Khakhi. Now that was one police drama/chase/suspense movie. Amitabh, Akshay - yes, common factor, Aishwarya, Atul Kulkarni. Fantastic acting, gripping story, edge-of-the seat entertainment and a twist like baap of all twists. Aww...thanks for reminding me about this one. Maybe, I should go back and watch it again. Bollywood did have good police movies then.

Mahalaxmi - hogi koi budhiya...uh oh...😆 a very meaningful dialogue...I tell you.😛

Thank yo so much for lovely review. I think I should check Aan, too.