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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...


bilkul bhi nhy! The whole eid was regret and was ruined😔

Zoya trust kaccha maybe tha but i think she trusted on Asad more than to think of Tanveer plans she was happy and she thought Asad will never let that happen but maybe she never knew tanveer will do all this also in my story Zoya trust Asad very much but her belief and love crumbled because in startings after few updates zoya accepted that asad seem confused and he can be tricked but due to Asad less faith on her she thought to not help

yes sad phase is ending 😃

Oh really why so ??

Yeah I agree on that She trusted Asad immensely but when 2 ppl were there in this matter Zoya shouldn't have thought Billi as a powerless cat cuz Billi did caused a lot of trouble 4 Asya 4 so many days after wedding preps started. Yes chose not 2 say anything cuz of Asad's less faith on her but I still feel knowing how shaatir & confident Billi is plus she always succeeded in making Asad a fool & also she used 2 fail Zoya in all her attempt 2 prove her lies keeping all these things in mind Zoya should have been a little careful. She took her threats lightly. 😳 & also not thought 2 use logic just like Asad used 2 do.
I saw u r saying ki u r again gonna get disappeared wid college reopening pouts ab nxt part post karke 15th part ke liye kinne mahine wait krayegi not fair
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


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Oh really why so ??


<div>Yeah I agree on that She trusted Asad immensely but when 2 ppl were there in this matter Zoya shouldn't have thought Billi as a powerless cat cuz Billi did caused a lot of trouble 4 Asya 4 so many days after wedding preps started. Yes chose not 2 say anything cuz of Asad's less faith on her but I still feel knowing how shaatir & confident Billi is plus she always succeeded in making Asad a fool & also she used 2 fail Zoya in all her attempt 2 prove her lies keeping all these things in mind Zoya should have been a little careful. She took her threats lightly. 😳 & also not thought 2 use logic just like Asad used 2 do.

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<em>I saw u r saying ki u r again gonna get disappeared wid college reopening pouts ab nxt part post karke 15th part ke liye kinne mahine wait krayegi not fair


what to say yar some relatives just know to cause troubles

you are right Zoya took Tanveer threat very lightly especially after knowing how much troubles she has caused but Zoya just concentrated on her marriage that was not wrong but she should have been careful too

aww sorry yar but entering a new environment with such a huge course will be difficult for me but as you all are saying i'll try to give short updates atleast if only possible
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ok guys there is good news and bad news!
The good news is I have finally completed the whole big package chapter and the bad news is I can't post it now as it is needed to be proof read and am also tired to copy and paste it so you have to wait for the time I proof read it and and get my net back to post it so that means you have to wait for 24 hours I guess
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...


what to say yar some relatives just know to cause troubles

you are right Zoya took Tanveer threat very lightly especially after knowing how much troubles she has caused but Zoya just concentrated on her marriage that was not wrong but she should have been careful too

aww sorry yar but entering a new environment with such a huge course will be difficult for me but as you all are saying i'll try to give short updates atleast if only possible

Oh I get it. Ramzaan main bhi pareshani kar di khair. Hope everything is settled now😊
I know Zoya was d bride & every girl just want 2 feel happy about her special day so did Zoya so definitely she was right on that thing. But remember in show also when Asad didn't showed up & every1 was tensed & waiting even than it was just at d last moment Zoya realised Billi was missing tab tak use ehsaas bhi nahi tha billi bhi gayab hai. Khair I guess we can still ignore that but I hoped that she would b a little careful.Cuz if we blame Asad always trusted billi blindly not logically thinking wid clues & seeing Zoya's constant rant of blaming Billi than we should also accept Zoya also was little careless & didn't think of Billi's threats to b taken seriously.
Well keeping studies in mind I can completely understand that & I agree u should concentrate on that. If u get time 2 post short updts even in 2 weeks that's fine nd if time doesn't permit u should rap up d story cuz I know sometimes waiting 4 so long lessens ur interest as a reader & writer also. But I want 2 read this 1 as no1 wrote on this topic I guess & I really like ur writing style & how things r happening in d story.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...

ok guys there is good news and bad news!
The good news is I have finally completed the whole big package chapter and the bad news is I can't post it now as it is needed to be proof read and am also tired to copy and paste it so you have to wait for the time I proof read it and and get my net back to post it so that means you have to wait for 24 hours I guess

means aaj updt aane wala hai😆
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^^yeah they ruined it but now everything is settled and I just wish everything goes well now!

Your points are truly right jas! Zoya didn't think of billi threats we accepted Asad didn't knew about billi truth and trust him like fool but he was unknown of those threats to be careful but zoya knew it still she was not caution! Okay let's leave them Zoya has learned hard now😉

I am glad to know that you are liking it but I promise I will not leave this story like this yeah you are right long time wait kills the interest but I will not let that happen with this story because it is my first AsYa story and it is really very near to my heart
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means aaj updt aane wala hai😆


yes my sweetheart you are going to get the update in some minutes and pm in some more minutes😉
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Salam to my all loyal readers.
First of all am very sorry for dissapearing for almost two months and today I will not give any explanations.
However I will like to tell you all my college life is going to start from 14 of this month that is 2 days away so I will be quite busy in it and may not be able to update soon like before but for you all I may try to give short updates but for that I want to know if you guys want short update in a week? Now let's come to update

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Chapter 14 - The Fire of Conspiracies
This chapter is dedicated to Jas91 whose coments inspired me to update soon and sweet_tehs who wanted light moments between AsYa

Zoya looked at the moon with wistful expression. She smiled sadly and keep on gazing it deep in thoughts.

I never thought I will help Mr Khan after what he did to me. After all those pain he caused me I never thought that I will help him but I did. I agreed helping him, I don't know why? Maybe because I wanted to confirm that my belief on Mr Khan was not wrong that how much hurt he cause me, he can never betray me or maybe...maybe because I wanted to punish Tanveer! There are many others things that might be reason for me to do it but I don't want to think that, no, never.
It is difficult, difficult to be with the person who caused me so much pain, who ditched me on our wedding, who left me whenever I need him but I tried to forget all that and believe he is innocent yet it didn't helped.
Some days back, everything changed. When Mr Khan told me how he wanted to be friendly with me, something in my heart twisted, I know he didn't said exactly that he wanted to be friend but his words implied that only and those words, just don't know why touched my heart and somewhere I started to come out of the shell and be with him without remembering those days. Now, I talked with him quite fine but I think am falling in love with him again. His every action is making me fall for him again and again. His care, his touch and his words they are so comforting so welcoming an-and so affectionate yes affection! I found it in his every action every thing and my heart has started to believe that he loves me truly but I will not let this fact come between my self-respect that is hurt many times by him. If I will forgive him just like that then I may lose my self-respect but I will not forgive Mr Khan untill I really wishes untill I really found that he will not repeat his mistake of hurting me and my self-respect yes I will not forgive him till then! He cheated me and till he can't prove he is innocent I can't forgive him because I can't lose my self-respect for someone, I can gave him everything my love, my care, my thoughts and my everything but I just can't give him my self-respect. I cannot give him that right to hurt it, I can't!


Asad was sitting on the bench in the garden and was looking at the moon with hopefull smile.

Life is strange you cannot even guess what's gonna happened in future any second can be a surprise any moment can be a shock. I thought, I am the writer of my own destiny that after my father betrayal nothing else will go wrong but I didn't knew that I am myself wrong. I became rude to save other's from me, I thought by doing so they will be disgusted of me but what I didn't knew was that my rudeness is not the shell around me but has become my personality that is not just throwing people away from me but is also hurting them, hurting deeply and just like that, I hurt the girl I love the most, I hurt my Zoya. I hurt her because I was falling for her, I hurt her so to throw her away from me, I hurt her so much that I even forgot my morals and values or mayb...maybe I hurt her for her dressing style and thoughts? I don't know but the fact is I hurt the person who loves me, whom I loves, I hurt her deeply. I don't know if there is any forgiveness for me but I love her and I can't let her go I will do my best to get her forgiveness and if I failed, I failed to get her forgiveness and change myself then I will let her take the desicion but till then I will fight, fight for my love.

"Jammy?"Asad cringed hearing that name and the voice of the person who destroyed him no she didn't destroy him it is him who gave her chance and destroyed himself it is all his fault

Asad's thought were broken when Tanveer touched his shoulder and called him again. He cringed at her touch but showed like unaffected.

"can I sit here?"Tanveer asked

Asad looked away without replying while Tanveer sat beside him gleefully.

"Jammy, I know things are weird for you but the fact is we are getting married day after tomorrow. As I know you love Zoya, I wanted to ask do you really wanted to get married to me"Tanveer asked innocently while in her heart she knew that Asad cannot deny

"look Tanveer the truth is I love Zoya and always will... It is difficult for me to accept what is happening so please give me some space"Asad snapped rudely

Tanveer opened her mouth to say something but Asad rudely interrupted

"S.P.A.C.E!!"Asad emphasized gritting his teeth

Tanveer shutted her mouth and stood up.

"I think... I should leave"Tanveer said with nervous smile and waited for Asad reply but when came none she walked away frustrated.

Asad sighed. He looked at the sky and thanks to Allah that Zoya left the house because if she would have been still living then how must she would have feel seeing Tanveer's closeness with him? Also snapping at Tanveer so rudely will surely angered her and if Zoya would have been still living then for sure Tanveer must have tried to harm her, hurt her! And he can't afford that. Zoya has went through many pains caused by Tanveer due to him but not anymore now he want to heal those scars not to give her more.

It was almost mid-night, everyone were sleeping peacefully except for one soul.

Zoya twist and turn in her sleep, sweat dribbled on her forehead. Her expressions painfull and scared like a nightmare is haunting her. It didn't take a minute when she sat on her bed with tears runing down her cheeks. She touched her forehead and wiped her tears.

"why aren't these nightmares leaving my side! From the time I went in that gudiya factory with Asad these strange nightmares are haunting me every night! Why?"Zoya murmured as she cleaned her face



"Zoya what if that doll factory is haunted? And that's why those ghosts are troubling you?"Zoya smiled as she think of her own stupid conclusion

Zoya shook her head with a smile trying to clear her stupid conclusions when her eyes fell on a box placed on a table. Her smile vanished as she walked towards it and sit on chair taking it in hands. Zoya opened the box, revealing it's content. She touched every thing present it, they were the memories of her parents mostly her mother. Zoya was looking through every thing intently when her eyes fall on a burnt paper. Her eyes widen as she took in her hands and read half burnt words.

"means my father is related to this factory he maybe the owner! Ya Allah, is this the reason am having dreams of this doll factory since I investigate in it? Because I go there in my childhood!"Zoya eyes widen as she connect all the dots

"I will go there now only. I just can't wait for tomorrow to know about all this"Zoya decided

Zoya changed into her jeans and taking her bag she started for doll factory.


Zoya keep on looking at doll factory when guard saw her and walked towards her.

"what are you doing here again?"Guard asked

"I-I*she took a deep breath* I want to meet the owner of this factory"Zoya stated

The answer didn't go well with guard, he was curious so he asked the reason on which Zoya told him that she is finding someone and she think that the owner is the one she is finding so she asked him to call them once or gave their number.

"I can't give their number but yes I can tell them about you, what's your name?"Guard asked

"Zoya, Zoya Farooquie"Zoya told with hope

"thek h. I will inform them in morning"Guard said and started to go

The light smile on Zoya face dissapeared and she ran to guard requesting him to call the owner right now which sounded ridiculous to guard but after Zoya persistent he gave in an called the owner.

The darkness and silence were swelling the whole mainsion when someone's phone ring. Razia sit on her bed and murmured cursings.

"itni raat ko kis kambhakt ne phone kiya hai?(who has called at this time of night)"Razia said before taking the call

"kon kambhakt bol rha hai?(who is talking?)"Razia asked in sleepy voice

"madam! It's me Abdullah, the security guard of your gudiya factory"The guard identified himself

Razia eyes widened.

"why is he calling me now? What has hapened?"Razia murmured

"madam?"Guard questioned from other side to confirm her presence

"han, han bolo mai yahi hun! Kis liye phone kiya h itni raat ko?(yes yes say am here! Why have you called at this time of night)"Razia asked in low tone looking at Ghaffur sleeping at other side

"madam some girl wants to meet you she is saying that she is finding someone and she believes the person she is finding is the owner of this factory"Razia get shocked and curious hearing this

She sneakingly walked away from Ghaffur near the window and asked for the name of the girl.

"Zoa- han Zoya Farooquie"Guard told remembering it

The phone almost slipped from Razia hand but soon she composed herself.

"how can this happen?"Razia thought

"let her wait inside the doll factory. I'll reach there in sometime"She replied to guard evilly

Saying so Razia cut the call.

"Tanveer ne to kaha tha k Zoya New york chly gye! She must be fooling me I will see her later but for now I need to end this Zoya game she is troubling a lot"The evilness shone in her eyes as she planed something wicked

On the other side

"kya kaha unhone?(what did they said?)"Zoya asked with hope shining in her light smile and eyes

"they said that they will come and meet you in sometime inside the factory"Guard told

"okkk. You open the factory then na"Zoya said impatiently

Guard noded.

Zoya entered the factory and wait for the owner to come.

After 25 minutes.

Razia looked at the guard and asked him for Zoya.

"thek h. Ab tum jao chutty kro(alright! Now you go, take a leave)"Razia ordered

Guard noded and giving Razia keys, he walked away.

Razia peeped inside to make sure the girl is the same Zoya she is thinking and her doubt was confirmed too

Closing the door of factory she locked it securely. Throwing the petrol all around the factory Razia gazed at the match stick lightening in her hand.

"ab mai bolungi to bologe bolti hai. Kisne socha hoga jahn maa ka ki mout hoye wahin beti ki bhi hogy!"Razia said evilly "aree mery to koi ghulty bhi nhy kitna smjhaya tha uski ma ko par wo smjhy hy nhy ziddi thi na jese uski beti dekho kitne zakham mille usse phr bhi jan chor kr gye hy nhy par koi bat nhy ab jayegy apni maa k pas"Razia ended with anger

Razia lighted another stick and threw mercilessly. She smiled evilly as the fire started to ignite and spread around.

At the same time, in Khan mainsion.

"Zoyaaa"Asad said waking up with a jerk

Asad took a deep breath taking in his surroundings. "There is something wrong" was the only thought that came in his mind.

He quickly took his phone and was going to call Zoya when he stopped himself.

"what if she is sleeping?"Asad asked himsef "and what if she is in danger? It's better to disturb her sleep then to let her deal some danger"Asad decided and called Zoya

Zoya took the call after two to three rings.

"Zoya! you are awake? At this time? And where are you?"Asad asked without greeting

"hold on Mr Khan take a breath. Yes I am awake am doing some work"Zoya replied cautiously

Asad frowned on Zoya's reply and questioned - "which type of work? And you didn't reply me where are you?"

Zoya pressed her forehead and thought for a reply - "what do you want Mr Khan?"

"that's not the answer my question"Asad stated

"Mr Khan please stop poking your nose in my life"Zoya said frustrately

"why are you getting hyper Zoya? Am sure there is something wrong I mean you are..."Asad was cut off by Zoya

"Mr Khan please"Zoya said and was going to end the call when Asad asked

"Zoya please don't cut the call and listen to me"Asad pleaded knowing Zoya intention of ending the call

Zoya stopped but didn't talk, taking it as green signal Asad sighed.

"tell me where are you?"Asad asked firmly

"a-at ahh hotel"Zoya lied and Asad catched the lie

"you are lying Zoya! Tell me the truth pleasee"Asad pleaded finally

Zoya sighed and finally giving in she told him which was a shock for Asad but as Asad continue to question the reason Zoya stood frozen as she saw the flames dancing around her. The phone dropped from her hand while on other side Asad got scared as hell.

"why is Zoya not replying? There is something wrong I should go there"Asad said and stormed off his room

Zoya saw her mother and father fighting between the fire.

"abu?"She said sofly as tears ran down her eyes

She heared a scream from other side and turned to see a outline of a woman stabbing her mother amidst the fire.

She closed her mouth in shock and took a step forward but fall back due to flames.

"Zoya am coming don't worry"Asad whispered as he opened his SUV door and sat inside zooming off

On turning around for help she saw her mother lying motionless and her own small image screaming for help. She saw the two people standing near her mother.

Zoya shooked her head trying to clear her mind. The dreams that she is seeing from some days started to dance around her with flames.

"this is just my mind playing tricks with me showing me those nightmares nothing else. Concentrate and try to get a way out of it"Zoya told herself

Zoya fall down due to the force and her eyes fall on the window infront of her from where she saw the silhouette of a woman. Her eyes widen in shock but before she could say anything she saw her going away.

Asad was driving the car recklessly, his heart thumping loudly. His instincts telling him that his Zoya is in trouble. He prayed to Allah to keep her safe

Razia looked from the window to make sure Zoya die and when she saw her falling down and all trapped she walked away satisfied because she didn't wanted to be seen by anyone.

Zoya throat dried as she looked at the fire consuming every place. She was always afraid of fire and due to that her mind stopped working and she couldn't even shout for help.

"Zoya take a breath you have to fight against your fear to save yourself there is no one to help you"Zoya told herself trying to calm her mind

Zoya took a rod and pushed boxes consumed by fire. She make her way towards the gate. Zoya threw the rod and tried to open the door. Zoya face become white as sheet as if she has seen a ghost.

Asad car stopped abruptly. He tried to start it again and again but of no use. In anger Asad punched steering wheel.

"now how will I reach to Zoya?"Asad hold his head and then thought "I should walk till there it is just behind that building yeah that will be better"

Asad came out of the car and without caring to lock it he ran for his life his Zoya.

"ya Allah ye kese ho sakta hai? Ye gate to khola tha phr bund kese hogya? Ab-ab mai kese bahir niklungy?(Ya Allah how can this happen? This gate was open then how come it got locked? Now-now how will I get out?)"Zoya whispered as tears make their way

Zoya bang the door asking for guard but to her shock she found no reply. She felt scared when the fire start to spread on steel gate, she took a step backward trying to save herself from the cruel fire, suddenly she remembered something.

"I should go to that window if I reach there I will be able to get out"Zoya look at the rod and take it again so that she could reach her new destination

As Zoya tried to push the burning things away to make her way her hands start to burn as the rod got hot, feeling too much pain she threw the rod away. She whimpered in pain as her right hand turned all red.

"kaise niklun yahan se? Koi bhi nhy hai mery madad k liye(how to get out of this place? There is no one for my help)"Zoya said softly as the tears welled up in her eyes

Zoya looked at roof and closed her eyes as she shed silent tears - "Ya Allah please help me. Please send someone for my hel- Mr Khan!"Zoya opened her eyes as soon Asad's name crossed her mind

"where is my phone?"Zoya looked around "Oh no I dropped it somewhere when I was talking to Mr Khan, I hope he came here"Zoya prayed

Asad eyes widened as he saw the doll factory surrounded by huge flames. The fear engulfed in his heart as he thought of Zoya.

Zoya has fire phobia and she can be inside the factory that's what she told me sometime back and maybe that's the reason she stopped talking. Ya Allah, she will be so much scared and is- is she hu-rt? No no that can't be. I need to save her

Asad ran towards the gate and saw it locked and almost consumed by fire.

"it is locked! but what if Zoya entered from back door"Thinking so Asad ran towards back door and saw it locked too

He sighed. That means Zoya is not inside but why does my heart feel so restless? Why do I feel that she is here?

"Zoyaaa..."Asad shouted to get her answer

" Zoya are you here somewhere? Please answer me Zoya answer me if you can hear me"Asad shouted runing all around outside the factory

Zoya was praying for some miracle, closing her eyes when she heared Asad calling her. She opened her eyes and looked around she thought it to be her illusion but then she heared him again asking for reply. She looked all around to see if he is anywhere around and that's when her eyes fall outside the window where Asad stood all worried unknown of her presence.

"Mr Khaaan"Zoya shouted in order to get his attention

Asad heart raced as soon he heared Zoya shout he looked around to know from where the voice is coming

"Mr Khan am here inside. Turn Mr Khan turn"Zoya said loudly

Asad frowned on hearing her reply, he shivered to know she is inside. Afraid to see the worse he turned slowly and like his worst nightmare came true he saw her inside from the window, surrounded by flames, all scared looking at him with hope.



"Zoya"Asad said scared and shocked

"save me Mr Khan please save me it's s-scary"She coughed while saying scaring the shit out of Asad

"Fire is suffocating her! I need to save her"Asad thought

"Am coming Zoya. Don't worry am coming"Asad said reassuringly while he himself was scared

Zoya felt relaxed after hearing those words from Asad. Zoya nodded at Asad as if saying am waiting save me.

Asad looked all around to find the way to enter.

"Zoya from where you are standing is this possible to save you from window or should I try from gate?"Asad questioned

Zoya eyed the window and then at the gate calculating the distance.

"Win-dow is small Mr Khan and we will be not able to ge-t out even if you entered you shoul-d try from the gate"Zoya told while trying to get her breath

"ok then you don't worry I am coming"Asad said

As Asad was about to move he thought something and looked at the window then he looked around and taking a stone from the ground he threw at the window almost smashing it.

"wha-t are you d-oing Mr khan"Zoya asked perplexed

"it will allow the fresh air to enter inside and will help you to regain your breath"Asad told briefly before throwing another stone completely breaking the window

"Mr Khan the fire is increasing, please do something Mr Khan"Zoya shouted worriedly

Asad frozed for a moment to hear it but he regained his composure

"am coming Zoya don't worry am coming"Asad shouted before rushing towards the gate

The lock was out of Asad reach so he keep on throwing the big stones on lock so that it broke down and finally he succeed. He kicked as it was consumed by fire mostly. He looked at Zoya standing at the distance of some feet, while Zoya too turned towards him. Her face stained with tears. Asad tried to reach Zoya but a big pillar fall between them blocking their way. Asad tried to pass from the fire but fail miserably.

A huge fire erupted behind Zoya that makes Asad eyes go wide in scared.

Zoya turned to see what is Asad seeing and she was scared to see the fire just about to touch her, she shield her face by putting her both arms on her face and closed her eyes. She felt scared as the force pushed her and hotness radiate on her body.

As soon Asad saw that Zoya is going to fall he ran without caring the fire that brushed against his body, he ran and holding her hand he pulled her towards him and hold her weight on his hand before she fall. He looked at Zoya face. Her lips were trembling while her eyes were closed.

Zoya waited for the moment to fall on the floor and burnt herself but that moment never came instead she could feel that she was in mid air for her fall and something holding her in air.

"did I died?"She thought as she felt like being in heaven

She opened her eyes slowly and saw Asad holding her in his arms. She looked in his eyes which were holding a lot of emotions some of which were relief and fear.



"Asad"The name was like a fresh breeze between this hot fire. Asad felt like heaven on hearing his first name from her mouth with so much relief and love

Another blast of fire erupted. Zoya hold Asad tightly while Asad held her close to his chest with his both arms securing her like shield. Asad fall down with Zoya on top of him. Slowly, Zoya looked up from his chest to see him looking at her.



"Asad, are you alright"She asked softly

Asad noded and both stood up slowly. Asad hold Zoya near his chest and tried to get his way out of the place. Zoya could hear Asad's heartbeat, she looked at him all concentrating to get her out safe and sound. She smiled slightly even at that moment of crisis she felt delight to see his care. Asad felt Zoya's gaze on him and he looked at her. He could see many emotions in her eyes that he couldn't point out. Asad left Zoya and then took out his jacket and wrapping it around Zoya, he took her in his arms. Zoya circled her hands around his neck and keep on looking at Asad.



Asad make sure to not to be distracted by Zoya's intense gaze because right now her safety was much more important for him.

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Zoya closed her eyes as soon she felt the cool breeze brushing her face. Finally, she is out of that hottness Asad has saved her.

"you are safe now. We are out"Asad told softly looking at her face

Zoya opened her eyes and looked at him

"Thank you Asad, thank you"Zoya said softly

Asad put Zoya down and placed his hand on her cheek. Zoya revelled his touch.

"was you scared?"Asad asked caringly

"uhun"Zoya noded in no "I knew you will save me. I trusted you to safe me"

Trust! The one word that Asad wanted to hear from her the time he start to repent. He was delighted to know that she trusted him for her safety. Atleast, she still has that belief on him.

"but why did you came here?"Asad asked now curious

Zoya looked away and bit her lower lip - "Mr Khan please it's something I don't want to tell"

Asad closed his eyes and noded understandingly. She may trust him for her safety but still she doesn't trust him completely to tell her secrets and he need to earn that trust and wait for her to tell it herself

"ufff the fire was so much better atleast you call me with my first name that is Asad"Asad said dreamingly

Zoya looked at him and raised her eyebrow - "Jahanpana six packs dreaming to be called as Asad really? But if am remembering right then you was all okay with Mr Khan before"

"oh hello musibt magnet you are forgetting you should be thanking me for helping you not make fun of me"Asad told looking away annoyingly

"oh really? Did I asked you to come and help me? You came yourself, I didn't ask for your help"Zoya said putting her both hands on waist

Asad frowned on her reply and his jaws dropped - "you are forgetting it was you only who was screaming for help! And you are truly musibat magnet I gave you a right name which girl in her right mind will came in a crumbling building all alone without letting anyone know and if I wouldn't have forced you to tell me then today you would have become a burnt kabab"

Zoya opened her mouth in shock - "Mr Khan how could you? I went through so much and you are here scolding me and making fun of me. You wanted me to become a burnt kabab how could you Mr Khan?"

"what are you? Sometime back you was scolding me and now all this melodrama and pointing finger at me wow Zoya Farooquie you are such a genius"Asad said rolling his eyes

"ohh thank you Mr Khan, finally you accepted am geniues"Zoya said with huge smile

"I thought that mood swings are only experienced by pregnant woman but never knew that great Miss Zoya Farooquie has that ability even without being pregnant"Asad said sarcastically

Zoya glared at him - "should we go? Where's your car?"Zoya said angrily

Asad pursed his lips trying to control his smile. - "behind that building"

Asad and Zoya journey towards the SUV was not silent they both were bickering, making fun of other, taunting, troubling and laughing too. Zoya stood infront of Asad's SUV and looked at him.

"Mr Khan why did you parked it here so far?"Zoya asked "anyways let's g"Zoya stopped seeing the car door already opened and the key inside she looked at Asad incrediously

"why did you left the keys inside and car open?"Zoya asked

"because the car stopped so I left it here opened and ran for you"Asad told softly

"what? Allah miyan what's wrong with you Mr Khan? You left the car all open for thieves and also make me walk so far without telling that car is not working"Zoya said angrily

"what is your problem? Why are you angry? For not telling you and make you walk so far or for leaving the car open?"Asad asked confusely

"both! You shouldn't have left the car open for thief and also should have tell me to not walk uselessly"Zoya said rolling her eyes

"it was better I left the car that's why I was able to save you and about not telling then we were needed to come here by hook or by crook cm'on my car was unsafe"Asad explained

Zoya was touched that he came for her instead of thinking of his car. She felt happy.

"should we talk something else?"Zoya asked not knowing what to say

"sure! Let me see what's wrong with car"Asad said and Zoya nodded


Zoya peeped her head from the window. The fresh breeze caressing her face. She feel fresh, her mind also refreshed feeling the cool breeze against her face. Asad looks at her time to time while driving his SUV.

"miss non-stop is silent! That is shock"Asad joked smiling slightly

Zoya turned and looked at him over her shoulders. She sit straight and looked at him.

"you hated my bickering"Zoya point out

"I hated you too"Asad pointed

"haww so you hate me?"Zoya said angrily

"oh cool down Miss hot head I said hated not hates you know the difference right? Or you don't know english?"Asad teased

Zoya opened her mouth in shock - "Youuu" Zoya start to beat him on his arms

"hey Zoya control am not able to drive properly"Asad said trying to control the car that start to move in zig zag manner

Zoya stopped beating him hearing that. Asad have a sigh of relief

"yar kiya ho tum? Abhi humara accident ho sakta tha and if you are not forgetting we just got save from that damn fire"Asad said

Before Zoya could reply Asad interrupted

"oh yes I forgot you are musibat magnet and always attracts the troubles"Asad joked grinningly

"what do you think of yourself huh? And Allah miya what's wrong with you Mr Khan? Why are you giving me so much horrible names today?"Zoya asked annoyingly

"musibat magnet?"Asad looked at Zoya"that name is given to you from the time you entered in my life you forgot?"

"ughhh Mr Khan am talking about this Miss hot head and-and what was that yeah Miss non-stop"Zoya countered remembring the names

"and Miss beautiful"Asad told while grinning

"huh? When did you call that?"Zoya said trying to remember that

"ab to keh rha hun na"Asad told smilingly

"and what's up with you Mr Khan you call me Zoya and add Miss in my so called nicknames"Zoya asked throwing her hands in air

"musibat magnet"Zoya looked at him confused and he smiled "I didn't added Miss in musibat magnet"Asad pointed

"does that change the fact you added in other three?"Zoya said rolling her eyes

"hmm so that means you accepted my new nickname Miss beautiful too"Asad said taking a turn

"no yes I mean if I will stop you will you stop?"Asad nodded in no "now answer my question"

Asad stopped the car and look at her

"I used to call you Miss Farooquie too and that too for a long time so there should be equality na"Asad replied with a smile adoring his face

Zoya rolled her eyes and that's when her eyes fall outside the car. She looked back at him questionly

"why did you stop the car we are not at hotel"Zoya questioned confused

"yes and we are not going at your hotel or at my home! We are going to spend some time under the sky in cool breeze all alone"Asad told softly

Zoya felt delighted hearing it. Spending time with Asad at this time of night is what she want after such a horrible incident.

Zoya and Asad came out of the car and Asad hold Zoya's hand for which she didn't denied instead she let him lead her. Both entered in a park.

Zoya left Asad's hand and walked on the wet grass bare foot. She opened her hands and twirled feeling the cool breeze and wet grass. A wide smile adored her beautiful face as she keep on feeling the nature.

Asad stood at little distance folding his arms and looking at Zoya with admiration. A smile spread across his face as he kept on admiring her. As Zoya keep on twirling, Asad walked towards her. Zoya bumped on Asad and he hold her. Zoya looked at Asad and was drowned in his intense gaze. Asad carressed her cheeks. Zoya closed her eyes revelling Asad's touch.



"you are so childish but so beautiful"Asad complimented

Zoya could feel the heat on her cheeks. She looked down smiling.

"I never knew you can look so beautiful while blushing"Asad stated, trying to look at her face that she tried to hide

"ok take a chill. By the way, Zoya we came here to spend time with each other not you to only enjoy"Asad stated

"Allah miya! what's wrong with you Mr Khan? I have went through so much I was about going to di"Asad placed his palm on her mouth stopping her from saying that D word

Zoya looked at him intently.



"don't! Just don't think like that Zoya I can't live without you"Asad said with a tint of desperation on his face

Zoya hold Asad's hand and bring it down without breaking the eyes contact. Zoya smiled as she think something

"Mr Khan you are forgetting that some time before you was speaking same something like burnt kabab"Zoya pointed

Asad looked away smilingly

"I was talking about your confidence not your life"Asad said laughingly

"jo bhi sunta wo life hy smjhta"Zoya pout

"you are looking cute"Asad told

"you are just complimenting too much Mr Khan no now you have become Mr Flirt"Zoya said looking away

Asad hold Zoya shoulders and make her look at him

"sorry for all that and now come let's sit there"Asad said pointing towards the bench

Zoya noded and both sat on the bench.

"it's so calm here"Zoya said softly

"yeah! And look at the moon it looks so beautiful"Asad said looking at sky

Zoya looked at moon and smiled - "yes it is. Everytime!"

Asad looked at Zoya - "just like you"He said in his mind

Zoya looked at Asad looking at her and gave a what happened look for which Asad shook his head and smile.

Zoya placed her head on Asad shoulder while Asad placed his hand around her shoulder. All that trauma tired Zoya mentally and physically and it start to take a toll on her and soon she slept with her head on Asad shoulder. Asad looked at Zoya, sleeping peacefully on his shoulder. He carressed her messed up hair. He keep on looking at her face, there were light black marks on her face due to being in fire still she manage to shine under the moonlight. Asad smiled sadly, his all fears and thoughts returned he tried to be normal all that time for Zoya but now thinking of all that incident gave him goosebumps he could still feel the fear in his heart and that's the reason he brought Zoya here so that he could be hundred percent sure that she is fine and alive with him.

"kitna tang krty ho na tum. Mujhe itna pareshan kar k khud sukoon se so rhy ho"Asad said with smile while his eyes welled up

He hold Zoya head so it didn't fall and look down with tears in his eyes.



They remained in the same position on bench for an hour or so. Zoya start to cuddle due to cold though she was still wearing Asad's jacket but it couldn't stand against cool breeze that was blowing with it's glory. Asad knew that Zoya is deep in slumber and he could feel that she is feeling cold so he thought for sometime and then decided something. Carefully and softly Asad took sleeping Zoya in her arms and took her towards car. He make her sleep on back seat but when he did so his eyes fall on her hand that was all red and had some scratchs too. That's when he realized that they both are hurt too due to fire.

Asad drove the car towards Zoya hotel. He keep on looking at Zoya time to time to make sure she is comfortable. He stopped the car when he reached his destination. He looked at Zoya and then safely closed all doors of cars and making sure it is safe he walk inside the hotel. Being a big buisness tycoon he got all the informations of Zoya room and also another key as he didn't have of Zoya room and Zoya didn't had any purse maybe it was fallen in fire too. He went back to his car and opened the back door. Again, Asad took Zoya in his arms ever so gently like a glass doll that will be broken by his mere touch.

Gently, Asad placed Zoya on her bed.



He covered her with blanket and sat beside her. He caressed her forehead admiring her sleeping peacefully. His moment was disturbed by a servant who came to give him a first aid box that he asked for. Asad took the first aid box and first aid Zoya hand, Zoya winced at first and Asad looked at her with pain then carefully he gave her first aid treatment and then placed the box near the table and then left a note on it. Giving Zoya one last look he went locking the door from key he threw key inside from the small space present below the door.

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Did you guys like this maha chapter? I hope you guys are satisfied with it! I did my best to make this chapter which is after so much months seems best so I add pictures too. Now please for my all this hard work leave me a long honest coments, I will really like if you leave your suggestions for what you want next or what would have you guys liked in this update.

Waiting for all of your thoughts.

Thanks,

Bubye!!!!!
Edited by Asshi... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres..
Ke mai hu hero Tera...

Asad should definitely sing this for her...
My hero saved her again...

True love...

It was all so sweet their cute moments..
After the escape their scene was too cute...

Thanks for mentioning me dear... Love u so much for the longgg updates...
N yes the light moments were fantastic..

Will be waiting for the next one soon...
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago

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