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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Love the gifs

I love how strong their love is

If only it happened in the show

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sanarujub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#562

Amazing one
This is too cute
They are in danger but still were bickering
Continue sooner now
Not after a month

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#563

Awesome chapter

Loved reading it

Was a proof of how strong their love is

And also in danger they can't get enough of their bickering

Was a treat to read and also had a full roller coaster ride of emotions

Eagerly waiting for the next part and also some more romance

Please continue soon 😊

Please not after a month or two😉

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 10 years ago

#564

it was beautiful work..
Asad savEd Zoya from fire..
Keep Writing...
Will love to read more...

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#565

wonderful part

omg zoya is in danger but as usual asad saved her

asya bickering lovely

both understand each other a lot

i hope everything become right soon

excited for next part

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#566

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#567

Awesome update
Zoya was in danger & asad felt it. She prayed for help to almighty & remember asad. Only Asya have taunting fight in the difficult time. Those light moments was wonderful. That showed the strength of their love. Zoya felt exhausted & slept. Asad took her to her hotel. After first aid, he left her with note. Hope he will prove himself soon. As for the note, I m ok whether u want to give long update or short. It's upto u. If u get a chance, give us long update otherwise short. Thanks for pm

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#568

Loved it

Just completed reading all updates

Can u please send me pm when you next update

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#569

Yippee so finally an updt & that too so long...I like it😃

1stly Love u 4 d dedication that was so sweet of u🤗

I loved d start with Zoya & Asad's monologues😛

Agree Zoe should forgive him but wid her self respect intact

Asad side was very touching as he's going though emotional phase & he do realise its his fault

Ek taraf Zoe se judaai dusri taraf this guilt of not trusting her & than having 2 see Billi infront of his eyes must b too much

Billi is happy dreaming 4 her wedding hope nxt part pe use uski kaminepan ka inaam mile😈

So Zoya decided 2 go in d factory 2 know truth about her nightmares & its connection wid her Abbu

Raziya OMG she cae & burnt d factory again evil women😡

Thank god Asad reached their 2 save her...Loved d Dil se dil ka connection 1 musibat main tha dusre ko khabar ho gayi

Their bickering was also entertaining 2 read felt so good 2 read it after sad phase😊

them calling names was so funny...Burnt kabab was epic🤣

Loved d end scene's when they were in garden & Asad taking sleeping Zoya 2 hotel😳

He himself was shaken & knew Zoya will also b that's why he took her 2 garden otherwise he has 2 leave her in hotel where she will b alone & think about d mishap again...that was realy touching😛

Asad seemed too casual wid her I guess that's 4 removing thoughts of d incident & indulge her in those nonsense bickering😉

Btw I expected Zoya 2 hear when Raziya was confessing her crimes cuz that way Both Raziya & Billi will b revealed removing all problems from Asya's life in 1 go

Anyways I m really happy wid this MAha updt Ashi😃

& as now u r gonna get busy I think we have 2 b ok wid short weekly updts that's my view

Good luck 4 new year in college

Take care dear

we'll miss u 🤗 keep coming when u get some free time😊

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: Asshi...
^^yeah they ruined it but now everything is settled and I just wish everything goes well now!

Your points are truly right jas! Zoya didn't think of billi threats we accepted Asad didn't knew about billi truth and trust him like fool but he was unknown of those threats to be careful but zoya knew it still she was not caution! Okay let's leave them Zoya has learned hard now😉

I am glad to know that you are liking it but I promise I will not leave this story like this yeah you are right long time wait kills the interest but I will not let that happen with this story because it is my first AsYa story and it is really very near to my heart

I m glad everything is fine now😃...& DOn't worry Ashi aise logon ki baton o seriously nahi lena chahiye😊

Absolutely just like Asad learnt d hard way same way Zoya did too...That was my point exactly when u know a dog is on d street that can bite u, u can get cautious of d consequences but Asad was like a unaware passer-by so he got into trouble.

I m gald u understood my point & just like u this story is very dear 2 me too I got u as frnd & d Story too was based on concept which was not widely explored by many writers.