AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Dilshad did right👏
Asad deserves only his Tanu😡
Zoya sud not tell him anything so easily n sud not forgive him
He had no shame in forcing her to apologize to any1 n calling her words as childish😡
I hate Ayaan for still doing pooja of his brother😡
Zoya is right wid her bhaad me jaa attitude for Asad👏
Asad sud not get Zoya easily cuz he needs to pay for wat all he did to Zoya 4m day 1
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
dilshad wants asad to marry tanveer
hope he finds about tanveer soon
wish ayaan and zoya team up to find the truth
will be waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm
Edited by ksen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

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what the
hell yar
Asad&Tanveer nikaah? Seriously?
HELL NO!!
Aashi U
cannot let that evil b**ch win

anyways

Interesting Update
Continue Soon

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hey abi calm down dude. don't worry abi I will not let her win
thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
do punish billi severely
also let asad slog really hard for forgiveness
zoya should not melt easily
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

<font size="2">Awesome Part Dear👏😊</font>

<font size="2">Dilshad did right👏</font>
<font size="2">Asad deserves only his Tanu😡</font>
<font size="2">Zoya sud not tell him anything so easily n sud not forgive him</font>
<font size="2">He had no shame in forcing her to apologize to any1 n calling her words as childish😡</font>
<font size="2">I hate Ayaan for still doing pooja of his brother😡</font>
<font size="2">Zoya is right wid her bhaad me jaa attitude for Asad👏</font>
<font size="2">Asad sud not get Zoya easily cuz he needs to pay for wat all he did to Zoya 4m day 1</font>


hey juhi after a long time huh?
You will know everything soon dear just keep reading sweety
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaa234

do punish billi severely

also let asad slog really hard for forgiveness
zoya should not melt easily


first of all welcome to my story❤️
yes she will be punished dear
asad will also pay hard and only then zoya will forgive her
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

amazing update

dilshad wants asad to marry tanveer
hope he finds about tanveer soon
wish ayaan and zoya team up to find the truth
will be waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm


thanks dear
yes dilshad wants so but let's see if it hapeneds
he will find but when?
Nope not ayaan and zoya team as ayaan is mesed up with in his life
your wwelcome
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...


hey juhi after a long time huh?
You will know everything soon dear just keep reading sweety


I read all ur parts. Now I will again comment on all parts😊.


Ur story is rare where Zoya is acting normal instead of abnormal who forgives Asad in a second wid a sorry n just 2 tears 4m Asad. Ur story is really rare, Ashi(if dats ur name😆). I actually hate Ayaan for saying saying unke dard aur gusse me pyaar chhupa tha. Gussa? Does Asad has license to show gussa on anyone he claims to love? In d show if u remember, wen Nikhat said she can't believe Asad bhaijaan can do like dis(betray Zoya), Ayaan said a very disgusting thing. He said dat he knows more than bhaijaan knows himself. He then said dat bhaijaan may be in tension cuz he did not wanted to marry Zoya so he did dat🤢😡. Really? Does he think its okay to sleep wid another woman wen one does not wants to marry a woman?😡 And here, Ayaan is contantly emotionally blackmailing Zoya n doing pooja of his bhaijaan.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Daaammmnnn
Powerful update dude
Loved the Maburt moment
AWESOME
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04



I read all ur parts. Now I will again comment on all parts😊.


Ur story is rare where Zoya is acting normal instead of abnormal who forgives Asad in a second wid a sorry n just 2 tears 4m Asad. Ur story is really rare, Ashi(if dats ur name😆). I actually hate Ayaan for saying saying unke dard aur gusse me pyaar chhupa tha. Gussa? Does Asad has license to show gussa on anyone he claims to love? In d show if u remember, wen Nikhat said she can't believe Asad bhaijaan can do like dis(betray Zoya), Ayaan said a very disgusting thing. He said dat he knows more than bhaijaan knows himself. He then said dat bhaijaan may be in tension cuz he did not wanted to marry Zoya so he did dat🤢😡. Really? Does he think its okay to sleep wid another woman wen one does not wants to marry a woman?😡 And here, Ayaan is contantly emotionally blackmailing Zoya n doing pooja of his bhaijaan.



ok reading your full coment I will say that your anger is justified. Ayaan did wrong in show it was really weird to see that from him even knowing how he is! But in my story if he is telling all this to zoya then it has only one reason he is opening what is in his heart but not doing pooja of his bhaijaan! He said all that because he want them to come out of the mess and after knowing muhabbat ka dard he somewhat know from what they are going so he tell what can be halpfull and may bring them out of all that pain.
So am saying Ayaan is not forgiving his bhaijaan mistake but somewhere he felt that he is trapped so he tell this to zoya and zoya is not going to forgive asad so easily. Asad will surely pay😊

Thanks for your awesome coment it somewhere stopped me from doing mistakes thanks👍🏼

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