AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 29

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Daaammmnnn

Powerful update dude

Loved the Maburt moment

AWESOME

Originally posted by: Mvinfff

Very nice part!

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I read all ur parts. Now I will again comment on all parts😊.

Ur story is rare where Zoya is acting normal instead of abnormal who forgives Asad in a second wid a sorry n just 2 tears 4m Asad. Ur story is really rare, Ashi(if dats ur name😆). I actually hate Ayaan for saying saying unke dard aur gusse me pyaar chhupa tha. Gussa? Does Asad has license to show gussa on anyone he claims to love? In d show if u remember, wen Nikhat said she can't believe Asad bhaijaan can do like dis(betray Zoya), Ayaan said a very disgusting thing. He said dat he knows more than bhaijaan knows himself. He then said dat bhaijaan may be in tension cuz he did not wanted to marry Zoya so he did dat🤢😡. Really? Does he think its okay to sleep wid another woman wen one does not wants to marry a woman?😡 And here, Ayaan is contantly emotionally blackmailing Zoya n doing pooja of his bhaijaan.

Originally posted by: Asshi...

ok reading your full coment I will say that your anger is justified. Ayaan did wrong in show it was really weird to see that from him even knowing how he is! But in my story if he is telling all this to zoya then it has only one reason he is opening what is in his heart but not doing pooja of his bhaijaan! He said all that because he want them to come out of the mess and after knowing muhabbat ka dard he somewhat know from what they are going so he tell what can be halpfull and may bring them out of all that pain.
So am saying Ayaan is not forgiving his bhaijaan mistake but somewhere he felt that he is trapped so he tell this to zoya and zoya is not going to forgive asad so easily. Asad will surely pay😊

Thanks for your awesome coment it somewhere stopped me from doing mistakes thanks👍🏼

Originally posted by: Asshi...

hey abi calm down dude. don't worry abi I will not let her win
thanks dear😊

Originally posted by: -ABI-

well Juhi agree with U
but if U remember it well then U might have to agree when Ayaan said Asad doesn't want to Zoya at that time Ayaan was hinting it towards Humera.
(His&Humera switution)

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Actually, I had forgotten abt wat Ayaan said to Nikhat abt sleeping wid woman thing but one of d members brought dat later after some months while teln how immature Ayaan is who said such things thinking its okay to sleep wid ur friend if u don't want to marry a girl. Then I remembered dat thing. In dat scene, I expected one of d girls especially Humeira to say wat he said was disgusting but Gul did not showed it. Glad dat u r not showing Ayaan as Asad's chamcha as min many stories. Ur story is like a fresh air after getn up of many stories where Zoya always forgave Asad for however grave his mistakes were in just a second along wid giving an idiotic speech dat she understands how he feels, he don't needs to feel guilty, she is not angry wid him...blah blah blah. As for AyRa part, memory loss is better than dat Rajni thing. In AyRa, I was never angry wid Ayaan as he never loved Humeira n it does not means dat if Humeira loves him he sud love her back. He was forced n blackmailed by Razia many times including fake SR, Razia offering him to get his abbu released in return of him marrying Humeira, blackmailing wid him Imraan's car burning video n so on. Ayaan was frustrated beypnd limit but he sud not have taken all his frustration n anger on Humeira. Humeira never forced Ayaan to love him. In fact, she saved him 4m getn engaged to her for d 1st time by sending fake SR video to Nikhat. Initially, I hated Ayaan for being a jer to Humeira but later realised but Ayaan was never really a jerk wid Humeira.

I hope u don't get irritated wid my blabbering. I love dis story so I said a bot too much😆.

Originally posted by: -ABI-

I guss someone is highly pissed-off of Asad😉

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Actually, I had forgotten abt wat Ayaan said to Nikhat abt sleeping wid woman thing but one of d members brought dat later after some months while teln how immature Ayaan is who said such things thinking its okay to sleep wid ur friend if u don't want to marry a girl. Then I remembered dat thing. In dat scene, I expected one of d girls especially Humeira to say wat he said was disgusting but Gul did not showed it. Glad dat u r not showing Ayaan as Asad's chamcha as min many stories. Ur story is like a fresh air after getn up of many stories where Zoya always forgave Asad for however grave his mistakes were in just a second along wid giving an idiotic speech dat she understands how he feels, he don't needs to feel guilty, she is not angry wid him...blah blah blah. As for AyRa part, memory loss is better than dat Rajni thing. In AyRa, I was never angry wid Ayaan as he never loved Humeira n it does not means dat if Humeira loves him he sud love her back. He was forced n blackmailed by Razia many times including fake SR, Razia offering him to get his abbu released in return of him marrying Humeira, blackmailing wid him Imraan's car burning video n so on. Ayaan was frustrated beypnd limit but he sud not have taken all his frustration n anger on Humeira. Humeira never forced Ayaan to love him. In fact, she saved him 4m getn engaged to her for d 1st time by sending fake SR video to Nikhat. Initially, I hated Ayaan for being a jer to Humeira but later realised but Ayaan was never really a jerk wid Humeira.

I hope u don't get irritated wid my blabbering. I love dis story so I said a bot too much😆.

Originally posted by: -ABI-

what😲
Clam down?
are U kidding me?
after so much have happend,U r still asking me to CLAM DOWN?
Okay I'll but only after U show that eveil b**ch her truly deserving place,out of K.V&AsYa's life