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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dude!
awesome update!
aww...my poor babies
my AsYa & AyRa! :(
thnx for d pm
update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

hey dude!

awesome update!
aww...my poor babies
my AsYa & AyRa! :(
thnx for d pm
update soon!!

ohh asya thanks!
How come asya baby name is asya?😛
haha sorry jokes apart!
They will be fine soon sweety!
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update ,but it was sad
hope everything becomes fine between asya soon
waiting for the next update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice update ,but it was sad

hope everything becomes fine between asya soon
waiting for the next update
thanks for the pm

thanks dear
it will soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly all the best wishes for ur xams
update was emotional

pls update soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys!
I have updated story the next part will be late!
My exams are coming nearer so will be not able to update soon!
Edited by Asshi... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 6 - Hope

Zoya sat on the bed of her hotel room. She ran her fingers through the photo album and opened it up. The first picture that she saw was of Asad Ahmad Khan, looking at her worriedly on their mehndi day. She leaned on the bed headboard and remembered her conversation with Asad sometimes back

"What does Mr. Khan meant by that is that the reason I didn't believed Tannu? Was he there when Tanveer came but then didn't he heared anyother things or was it Tanveer plan?"Zoya asked herself opening her eyes

Flashback

Tanveer came in Zoya room and found her sad, she smirked

"Zoya, hm ap se bat karna chahte the!"Tanveer said very innocently

Zoya head shot up and so does her anger. She quickly stood up

"What the hell does you want now?"Zoya lashed at her in anger

Tanveer tilted her head little to see Asad standing near the door

"Zoya, hum apko btana chahte the k, jo kuch bhi ap ne us rat dekha wo sb jhot tha! Mere aur Jammy k beech mai aisa kuch bhi nhy hua"Tanveer said innocently

"oh shut the hell, Tanveer! Don't show me that good side of your's, atleast not infront of me!"Zoya warned Tanveer

Tanveer start to act like crying

"Am sorry Zoya! I don't know why you hate me but believe me, I didn't do anything!"Tanveer cried

Zoya was confused and shocked seeing her doing all this. She thought that she is mocking her

"please Tanveer, leave me alone!"Zoya said trying to control her anger

Tanveer wiped her tears and walked towards door but stopped and turned

"wese Zoya, wo sab kuch sach tha! Jo tumne dekha!"Tanveer said with evil smile and walked away

Flashback end

"if it is so then didn't he heared her last words or was it all Tanveer acting to show up infront of Asad?"Zoya asked herself

"Asad, Tanveer se muhabbat nhy krte magar mjh se karte hain to kya..."Zoya trailed as she remembered Asad horrified expression seeing Tanveer on bed with him

Zoya hold her head as things start to fall on places

"Asad was so shocked to see Tanveer when he woke up! Even Tanveer was behaving embarrassed, when she herself called me there! I need to find the truth, there is more than what meet eyes!"Zoya said sitting straight

"wait! Why should I? Asad did the mistake even if unknowingly, he will be the one to solve it. I cannot distract myself from my mission now, not for him again! He always taunt and scold me and threw me away why should I ran behind him? Never mind, he is going to believe Tanveer over me so why should I waste my time!"Zoya told herself

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Ayaan looked at everyone, gathering around him for answers. He gulped his worry as he answered in broken voice

"Bato bhi sahy, Ayaan, ab hua kya h?"Razia asked little angry

"Humaira...has met with an accident! She need to be ope...rated and we are needed to fill the formalities!"Ayaan told

Shireen hold her chest

"hayee Allah! Kesy h ab wo?"Shireen asked

"Shireen kuch to socho? She need to be operated so it means she is not fine na?"Razia openely showed anger for Shireen dumbnes but no one botherd as they knew her situation

Before anyone could understand they found Ayaan rushing out

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Asad caressed the photo of Zoya smiling face.

"I am happy! Am happy that you didn't believe on Tanu! I realised my mistake late that on your words trying to test Tanu, I was going to break you too by rising your hopes and then breaking them off! But am happy that Tanu prove herself too and you also didn't feel bad"Asad said as he remembered how he walked away sighing in relief as Zoya shouted on Tanveer

"but was you right? Why will a girl, after what hapened call me Jammy? Is this her understanding or a plan?"Asad asked himself as the seed of doubt cloud his mind

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Tanveer paced the room frustrately

"I need to do something solid before I got exposed even yesterday night I would have been exposed if I had not saw Asad! Shukar h k maine Asad ko koi shak krne nhy diya! But, if it goes on I can be exposed! I need to do something to get Asad completely!"Tanveer said

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Ayaan looked from outside as Humaira was been operated inside the OT. Tears escaped from his eyes as he remembered her all wounded when he came.

Everyone wait impatiently for doctor to came out. Seconds changed in minutes and minutes in hours. Finally doctor came out

"Doctor... Humaira... Doctor wo kesy h?"Ayaan asked

"don't worry! The operation has been successful but..."Doctor stopped to look at them all

"but what doctor?"Razia asked

"she was badly injured so next 48 hours are very critcal for her! She may slip in coma too if she didn't gained her consious!"Doctor told

Ayaan felt like a lump formed in his neck but he gulped it

"No! Nothing will hapened to her!"Ayaan told himself

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Hey guys sorry for bad update but believe me I wrote it two times and my cell suddenly got off so I lost it completely!
This update gives much hope and even dash it off! Next update will be late as my net is going to end and I don't know when I will get it again sooo till than
Tada!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well Fabulous Update Aaish
glad to know that Mis.Tubelight brain has started working finally
and Aaish can U please make a team of Mis.Tubelight&Mr.Dump to expose Billi(it would be interesting)
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you for the pm

A good update

Tanveer should be exposed; AsYa both of you please switch on those light bulbs and see Tannu's darkness for what it is

I want to see happy AsYa and a rotting in hell Tannu

I hope Humzi will be alright Feeling bad for Ayaan

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Posted: 10 years ago
aww... my bechara AsYa and AyRa!
sab kuch theek kar do na yaar!
TANVEER!!!!
All the best for ur exams again
and thnx for pm dude!

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