AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Read all story & comnting here 1st time
What can i say
Asad is seriously dump
I mean why he went 2 stop Zoya if he's guilty
than tells her he didn't believed her cuz she had no proves
& than when he goes 2 talk 2 Billi he trusts her story widout any prove
agar thoda bhi dimag hota toh he would have thought ki jo gunde Billi ko utha ke le gaye woh usse chod ke kyun chale gaye jabki he was unconscious. but he's tubelight
& than saying her 2 still stay in KV
this man is plain stupid here🤢
I wish he gets doubts & wid clues which i said above unmasks Billi's truth😡

first of all welcome to story! ❤️
yes he is dumbo! But what can we do?*sigh*
well he is tubelight which is already on verge of breaking so can he has time to think all that? Especially a stupid tb like him?
Well you have to wait for that
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaa4ever221

nyc updte

thnks for pm
asad needs to find the truth behind tanveer
feel bad for zoya
do pm me

thanks!
No prob!
Yes he need to but iff he did so!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cale

He again believed Tanveer... Idiot 😡

yes*sigh* he did it again
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice
Stupid as ad
Hope he gets to knew truth soon

thanks sasir!
Hope so but if it hapened so! Depends on writer😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Awaari-

Seriously...can i kill him???

yes you can😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dude!
Behari Zoya!
Pelli baar, nahi actually doosri baar, nahj theesri bar meri zindagi mein mujhe Asad par gussa aarahi hai!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

Awesome update dude!

Behari Zoya!
Pelli baar, nahi actually doosri baar, nahj theesri bar meri zindagi mein mujhe Asad par gussa aarahi hai!

thanks!
Awww, there is more in store to hate Asad
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry-sky

thanks!
Awww, there is more in store to hate Asad


Nahi!!!
I can't bear hating Asad!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579



Nahi!!!
I can't bear hating Asad!!!!

hahaha that's depend on you!
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Posted: 10 years ago


Credit to Sameera_12


Chapter 4 - Shocked

Zoya looked at the Asad picture in her Ipad. A lone tear escaped from her eye and fall on Asad photo

"Akhir itna bara dhoka kyun Asad? Akhir kyun toda ap ne mere yakeen ko? Agr ap Tanveer k sath na bhi the aur ab attraction feel kr rhe the to phr ap hmary shadi tod skte the! Itne bare dhoke ki kya zroort thy Asad?"Zoya asked looking at his photo

She wiped her damp cheeks and stood up. She need to go for dinner, she didn't went for lunch in morning but now she need to go atleast because she need to tell them something.

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Zoya looked at the shocked face her Api.

"but Zoya tum wahan akeli hogy! Atleast mjhe to apne sath hotel mai rehne do!"Zeenat said in disbelief

"Nhy appi! Ap ko yahn se jana hoga! Aur mai bhi hotel ja kr rahungy bs ap kisi ko batayen mt k mai new york ki jaga hotel mai ja rhy hun!"Zoya told

"magar Zoya, aise kaise?"Zeenat was still in shock on her sister demand

"Please appi! Mera ye krna zroori h!"Zoya told with determination

Zeenat looked at her sister face trying to see pain but there was nothing other than determination. She felt afraid that she might lose her sister in this city but she can't do anything knowing the gravity of situation. She let out a sigh as both walked towards dining table

"Mai aur Zoya subah ja rhe hain!"Zeenat told with fallen face

Dilshad noticed Zeenat fallen face. She was confused but she thought it to be because of her dearest sister condition so she ignored it

.

"akhir Humaira ja kahn skty h?"Ayan said as he sat on sofa in hall

Razia again launched on him

"It's all your fault that my Humaira left the house! What was the need to get angry with her? I should have understand it before when she agreed to meet relatives that she is going to leave house!"Razia said with her fake anger and sadness

Ayan head shot up towards Razia. In morning she was screaming that Humaira left without informing and now she is saying that she was going to meet relatives! This shocked Ayan

"Magar Mumani, ap ne to subah kaha tha k Humaira bina bataye kahin chly gye h aur ab ap keh rhy hain k wo kisi se milne gye thy ap k kehne pr!"Ayan asked

Razia was startled. How can she say that? Yeah you don't remember lies na

"umm wo"Razia stammered

Gaffur looked at Razia

"Batao Razia! Ayan kuch poch rhe hain!"Gaffur said

Rasheed and Badi bi looked at Razia suspiciously as she tried to find words

"Han wo mere kehne pr gye thy magar mjhe un ki call aye thy k Humaira unse mily hy nhy! Isiliye to mai keh rhy hun k wo bina btaye kahin chly gye h!"Razia finally managed the situation

Ayan was frustrated and somehow convinced by Razia words because the truth was Humaira was missing.
Rasheed and Badi bi exchanged glances as they doubt Razia

"Sabr kijiye bhabi! Humaira mil jayegy!"Shireen said

"Kya sabr krun Shireen? Meri beti subah se gayab h aur ye sb kuch tmhre is manhoos bete ki waja se!"Razia said

"ek minute Razia! Ap Ayan pr aise ilzam nhy lgaye skty! Kyunke Humaira ap k kehne pr gye thy to ho skta kahin raste mai kuch..."Badi bi said

"Ap ka mtlb... Kid..nappi..ng?"Ayaan said chocking on his words

"Ho skta h!"Badi bi said eyeing Razia

Ayaan felt his head spining

"aise kese kidnapping? Agr koi kidnap krta to paison k liye phone krta! Abhi tk koi phone nhy aya h badi bi!"Razia said

"you can't be so confident, Razia!"Badi bi said giving him warning through eyes and Razia quickly looked away

"ye budhiya bhi na! Mjhe kisi trah yahn se nikal kr Billo rani se Humaira k bare mai pochna hoga!"Razia thought

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Tanveer looked at the phone and found Razia calling her. She recieved it and greeted her with teasing smile

"Han Bi, bari bayman nikly ap! Kidnapping ka kaha aur Humaira ko ghr mai bitha lia"Tanveer said

"Kya bakwas kr rhy ho? Humaira tmhre pass h na?"Razia voice reached her ears

Tanveer frowned

"nhy to! I send my goons to kidnap her but she never appeared!"Tanveer said

Razia felt her breath stopped like someone strangled her. She cut the call without saying anything

Tanveer looked at phone with disbelief

"Ye kya tha? Phone kat diya! Aur agr Humaira ghr nhy pohunchy to gye kahn? Uff us ne mera sara plan flop kr dia Razia ko apna gulam bnane ka! Magar agr wo mere ps nhy ghr nhy to phr gye kahan? Akhir hmara kam kisne kiya? Kon h jo Razia ka naya dushman h? Jo bhi ho mjhe Humaira ko dhoondna hoga aur Razia ko apna gulam bnana hoga!"Tanveer said

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Asad paced in his room to and fro

"why are you not listening me Zoya? Whatever hapened was due to drug! Just listen to me once or atleast stay here Zoya"Asad murmured

Asad saw Tanveer entering in his room

"Tannu?"Asad exclaimed in confusion

"Jammy hum wapis ja rhe hain! Hum apko aur Zoya ko aise nhy dekh skte! Hum Zoya ko ja kr keh dainge k hmare darmiyan kuch bhi nhy hoa! Hum ja rhe hain jammy!"Tanveer said faking sadness

Asad looked at Tanveer motionless as Tanveer start to go Asad called her back

"Tannu"

Tanveer smiled evilly but soon changing her expression looked at him

Asad hold Tanveer hand while Tanveer smiled inwardly

"Tmhra bhut bhut shukriya Tannu! Mjhe khushi h k mjhe tum jesy dost mily jo mere bare mai ye sb soch rhy h! Thanks Tanu"Asad said and hugged her shocking Tanveer to core

"Ye kya hogya? Asad to..."Tanveer thought shocked

As Asad thanks her, she stood absentmindely

"How can Asad be so selfish? Is his love so big?"Tanveer thought as Asad broke the hug

"It's okay Jammy! Ap fikr mt karain hm ap donon k beech kabhi nhy ayenge chahe jo kuch bhi ho jaye! Chahe hume us din ka saboot bhi mil jaye!"Tanveer said throwing hints of pregnancy

Asad completely ignored her hints and thanks her again

"Asad itna khudgarz kese ho skte hain? Unhone to hmare hint ki bhi prwah nhy ki! Whatever it is, am not gonna let them be together!"Tanveer resolved

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Finally I completed writing! I know it's small but school is opened so can't help.
Aahhh am senior member! Finally I will be able to post as much as I want
Tada!!!!!

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