New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED - Page 58

Hey Rada... 😊
Thanx for the PM... 😛
Well the update was Very Very Good👏 and Brilliantly Written.. ⭐️
I don't know from where to start...because you updates are so in emotions and feelings...ki I will myself write an update...in reviewing your part..
First of all the connection, comfort and bonding between this family of AsYa & Kids is shown in a very good manner...
The Zoya's & Sailm's part was also very good and finally we saw a closure their also...with Salim calling her Ammi in the end of a very intense dramatic situation...
The office worries , problems and then the seperation shown was very realistic in a way...still it had the Rada's touch of liberty to make its Pair Crave for each others Love ...and the scene in the 2nd part of the update was very very excellently done...
Loved the update Rada...
Kudos to the thought process you goes through while writing all these parts...
Continue soonish. 😃

Aewsome and amazing update...👍🏼

Loved it!

Hey nice👏

That was so emotional. ...and beautiful. ..loved it to bits

Thanks for the pm...sand me another when you update again

A wow factor here were the kids
i love them
such a long tym passed nd ur story moved forward amazingly
lovely update dear ;)

Woow...omg!!..

M simply speechless rada!!...loss of words...how should I describe...
Every damb inch, phase of the chapter was sooo perfectly narrated!!...

I cried
I laughed
I smiled
I got tensed.
I felt relieved...
I felt various emotions ...through out the chapter...

Entire chapter has special moments...

Already started missing the next update...

Wow what an update

lovely as always.. Waiting for next one.. Thanks for PM