New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED - Page 62

Hey Rada...
Thanx for the PM...
Well this was an Exceptional , Brilliant & Wonderfully Written & Concluded part...
Well I have always felt this...ki How & From where to start on your stories..., what to comment about and what to Leave...You always now a days makes spell bound...
Well but one thing is for sure...your love for sadist Climaxes and Loving end...I don't know why you have such obsession with This Paingiving Climaxes...but none the less they always makes the end worth all the sad and pain...we and AsYa goes through during that time.
Starting from this part...
Well their lives were going off well and steady after that deal incident...
The morning after...the kitchen part...and then their Moments...all was wonderfully written...
Its was nice to read the family parts...
Then after a year the pregnancy...came..with so much happiness and readers...were very delighted...and I was still in a shock ki Rada didn't do anything yet...can this be the day...
Soo yeah I loved the way Zoya teach Asad about the arrival of a new student...and loved the Hospital checkups also...
But , But... Rada strikes againnn...
We got to know a even more shocking past revelation about Ayat's demise...
Well it was a tense and worrying situation for AsYa..even more for Asad...as he was going thorugh this again he felt...
But they were through this...as a united as stronger as ever...I just applaud you for such a track here...
Rest...their time during pregnancy...was normal with some ups..and down.
And I thought the delivery will be now normal without any glitch...but again...I was proven Wrong...Again a very very tense , horrifying situation...
In this whole story I guess all the fear which Asad has...were proven true..but he fought back against them..and came out victorious and even more stronger than before...
I loved the whole part...of their Babies...
Nice and unique name...
And then the after life...it was well written...
AsYa still go cozy infront of their Childern...Ha.Ha.Ha...
Lovely & a Beautiful story Rada...with all its heart attacks...we still managed and Loved this story...
Brilliant story...Loved reading and being a part of it...
Continue soonish...with your other stories.

Radha its brilliant update as usual77

Awesome update
Asad fear of losing zoya & his emotions were well written. Happy family of Asya with 4 kids. Something never change & their kids know as well. It was a wonderful story. Thanks for pm

Loved the Whole Story to bits!!!


Wonderful One!!!

asad protactive nature..asya nd their 4 kids

beautifuly story..
u end it so soon 😉
love ur writing 😊

lovely chapter...
whole pregnancy thing n the crucial moments of delivery for zoya...too painful to read but yet it was awesome!

last part was fun n i just reminisced how young asya too argued like that...

hope u r up for ur next story...
already waitin ;-)

Beautiful end dear

Can't never get enough of this story

Originally posted by: anopama

Can't never get enough of this story

Thank u

thanks to you to make it alive again 😃

Sorry wrong post😳