New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: arpita14godara
wow .no word for this update. thanx yaar.

thank you so much, i 'm happy that you like it now and you change your mind 😃

PS: i start to write the epilogue for the runaway bride, my inspiration for this story came back and i will try to update as soon as possible , be patient with me, please.

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Superb part loved it
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

thank you so much

I will 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: siyasharma94
Superb part

amazingly writeen

Asya's past.. Their emotions nd fellings

Hope zoya recognize her felling

thank you so much, it means a lot to me as a writter

Soon, zoya and asad will become closer and closer 😉

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: EMOksgian
thxx rada fr presenting asya vd kids :) luving dis story ,..awsum update again balance dose of humour and emotions ... dillu mom and zoya ka encounter kaise plan kiya hai ;) update soonish don't take much time plzzz

it's a new concept for me to write Asy with kids, but i'm happy that I did it 😃

My last story was full of drama and I wanted for a change to write something light and i'm happy that you notice this.

I didn't plan yet when dillu and Zoya will meet but i will try to figure out and thanks for the idea 😉

i will try to update soon

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: kajenilious
tat was emotional part...
zoe past was so touchng can understnd her plight nw...
feelng bad fr her
lve hw asad handling her nd suportng her❤️
cntnue soon

Thank you

yes i wanted to precise her past as many didn't understand why she was like this? But anyway, it was painfull for me to write it and i wanted to be intense past.

I write Asad's character as sensitive person and good listener and I'm happy many love this man (and me too 😆)

i will try to update soon

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: surbhikano1fan
its mind blowing love it..

thank you 😳

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

thank you Mayur😉
it's you who inspired me this chapter, when you ask last time : why is she so insecure about Asad? and I wrote this chapter according to your question, so I wanted to thank you😉
I'm happy that you like it and it was also a pleasure for me to write it and painfull in some part, but thank you so much for your words😃

Well thanx alot...but sincerely iam shocked 😲 😲...I didn't knew that...
But you deserve all the applauds for this chapt...
But atleast now i can say and conclude that whatever Zoya was doing was because of her insecurity and past that to a horrible one...and i think so it isn't going to be a easy way for Asad to finally make Zoya say yes to him...he has to win her over her insecurities and fear...and then i guess she will accept her feelings for him...
Well there are many things to talk about...so is this still a 5 or 6 part SS...as previously stated...???

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
Woow yaar...such a lovely and emotional update...

Asad is such a perfect fit for zoya...

I always used to think y u take so much time to update... Now I got it...its takes time to update such an brilliant update...

I loved asads story cooking about action replay..
All the small cute moments...

hi dear, how are you ?

yeah , I know it was emotional one, i even cried when I write it 😭

Thank you so much for understanding me, I agree , it took me a lot of time to write every chapter and because i want to be good, i spent a lot of time and i'm happy that each time, my readers appreciate all my effort 😃

I wanted to balance between happy and sad part (runaway was to much drama for me) and I really love this movie , i thought to make a small dedicace in this chapter 😆

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: 1788shreya
Finally u revealed thier past
Felt so sad about zoya's past
On the road n picnic part was superb
Ha ha ha ha asad irritated zoya so much while reading the novel
Loved their convo so much
Awesome update
Update next chapter soon
Waiting

yeah , finally I talked about their past and zoya was the worst one, but it help to understand her better and her action.

asad such a naughty boy but I love him like this 😆