New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi am ur new reader 😳
Last night I read all the ofur parts in a go and what a beautiful story this is ...😳
The story reminds me lil bit of teri meri love story (KSG and ANITA)😳and
ASAD her reminds me of ARMAAN and KSG himself 😛😳

His dialogs are soo funny yaaarrr...and how he never shuts up and always wins the argument ,His comments...and I loved it especially whn he was angry ...I was like wow man bandee ko ghussa bhi atttaa hai... 😆

I am loving this ASAD a lott...and I would love to see their life after marriage also ...cozz after marrige tohh he would shut up na...

Great job!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Well thanx alot...but sincerely iam shocked 😲 😲...I didn't knew that...
But you deserve all the applauds for this chapt...
But atleast now i can say and conclude that whatever Zoya was doing was because of her insecurity and past that to a horrible one...and i think so it isn't going to be a easy way for Asad to finally make Zoya say yes to him...he has to win her over her insecurities and fear...and then i guess she will accept her feelings for him...
Well there are many things to talk about...so is this still a 5 or 6 part SS...as previously stated...???


Well, i can say that this story get an extantion 😆 for may be 8-10 chapters, I don't know yet, but for sure not 6 chapters, I enjoy writting it so I will keep this pleasure for the moment.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11

Hi am ur new reader 😳

Last night I read all the ofur parts in a go and what a beautiful story this is ...😳
The story reminds me lil bit of teri meri love story (KSG and ANITA)😳and
ASAD her reminds me of ARMAAN and KSG himself 😛😳

His dialogs are soo funny yaaarrr...and how he never shuts up and always wins the argument ,His comments...and I loved it especially whn he was angry ...I was like wow man bandee ko ghussa bhi atttaa hai... 😆

I am loving this ASAD a lott...and I would love to see their life after marriage also ...cozz after marrige tohh he would shut up na...

Great job!!!👍🏼


welcome to you , new reader 🥳

I also watched teri meri love story and now that you mention it, my story and the character are quite similar, I agree. KSG was really good in this story and fun too.

in the epilogue, you will see a moment after their marriage and I hope you will like it 😉

thank dear for reading my story 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

emotionally loaded part
d little cute moments made me smile in d start
like Asad bringing breakfast in d morning & reading her book
Zoya's past was very painful
finally she got d man who will love & protect her wid everything he has
great great job dear⭐️👏⭐️


I was wondering : where are my Jas? 😆, Sorry , I miss you comment when I was replying to everyone 😳

I know Zoya's past was bitter, Mayur inspired me to precise her past when he asked why is she like this? So I explain why and now many will understand why she took her time. All my heroins has sentimental problem 😆. I thought for my next story, I would have to change this and make Asad less positive and more tortuous. 😆
Nice to read you sweetheart
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Well, i can say that this story get an extantion 😆for may be 8-10 chapters, I don't know yet, but for sure not 6 chapters, I enjoy writting it so I will keep this pleasure for the moment.


Well then i am so so happy...about the extension... 😃 😃
And i guess...it deserved an extension...
And is this the only idea or i say one of the 2 ideas which we discussed on the The Runnaway Bride thread..??? , About you starting on a new story after that...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Totally amazing and brilliantly written chapter...
Everything was so perfect...
Their picnic day was adorable...
Asad and zoya's past sharing scene was emotional..
So...finally zoya will accept her love for him... Hope so...
Plz update soon..
Thnx for the pm dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Well then i am so so happy...about the extension... 😃 😃
And i guess...it deserved an extension...
And is this the only idea or i say one of the 2 ideas which we discussed on the The Runnaway Bride thread..??? , About you starting on a new story after that...


I have many idea, actually I have 4 other stories, that i write some chapters, but i'm a bit slow and I have many things to do at work those days also, so i have to manage and I only write on the weekend, that's why i like to update a long chapter for my readers, I want to spoil them 😃
And i also start writting an epilogue for the runaway (it looks like 2 long chapters). I don't what happen, each time i start to write, I have many idea and I couldn't stop until I reach 23 pages sometimes 😆.

anyway, because many has asked this, I'm happy that I turned this story to an SS
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Totally amazing and brilliantly written chapter...

Everything was so perfect...
Their picnic day was adorable...
Asad and zoya's past sharing scene was emotional..
So...finally zoya will accept her love for him... Hope so...
Plz update soon..
Thnx for the pm dear..


thank you so much 😃
in the up coming chapter, Zoya and Asad will become closer and closer 😉
I will try to update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



I have many idea, actually I have 4 other stories, that i write some chapters, but i'm a bit slow and I have many things to do at work those days also, so i have to manage and I only write on the weekend, that's why i like to update a long chapter for my readers, I want to spoil them😃
And i also start writting an epilogue for the runaway (it looks like 2 long chapters). I don't what happen, each time i start to write, I have many idea and I couldn't stop until I reach 23 pages sometimes😆.

anyway, because many has asked this, I'm happy that I turned this story to an SS


Now you are really spoiling us Rada.. 😆
And about long chapts...well there is no problem...with the way chapts are coming...and i can understand that time management is always handy while updating...but you don't worry...you always satisfies us with your updates which are worth a wait...
And coming to the epilogue for RUNAWAY BRIDE...again you can give Epilogue A , B...in 2 parts...with your ideas...anything from you is a win win situation for us...
So bring it on...and now you mentioned it...i can't wait to read them.. 😃 😉
The More the Merrier... 😃
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow what an update
It was quiet touching
I had to read a few times before comment
So Asad always the persistent one and the flirt
Preserve water 😉 and not taking no for the picnic
So their life the past was revealed
Asad pretty straightforward expected tht love the story he fed her
Action replay 😆
But zoya pass wow thr was quiet a heart jerker and tear dropper
So she have just close herself up and off all she lives for is Sarah
Oh Asad is adorable with the kids love the pics they took
So zoya saw the charmer the father then she got a look at the protector the lion
Love the way she calmed him
They r in sync to each other
So so love the last part of Asad conco with zoya asking for a chance assuring her
Telling her y he want her and Sarah he want a family
So did she agree she shook her head
So love how he was before he depart and her just wanting to go to him and him just waiting for her to come to him
Love it
Continue soon

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