Twisted Fate asya kabhi ff 25th chaptr THE END

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TWISTED FATE THREAD 4
4th thread...
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Kabir imagines himself holding zoya

But zoya has tripped nd humi has caught her everythg is paused for a while

Kabir's flashbacks and his pov

Uss din mera nikaah ka din tha...it was my wedding day...I was very happy...but a phone call comes frm tanveer tht she is going to suicide near kalhatty cliff...since she was my childhood frnd..i rushed the spot through car but the car's petrol was leaked and I smealt the danger, soon I lost my balance nd the car was speeding up near the cliff nd before the car could blast I opted to get off the car nd fell frm the cliff..and kalhatty tribal people got my body I was still alive I was still breathing Guess miracles happen and The Almighty the protector wanted to save me The tribal people used their natural herbal medicenes nd ayurvedic medicenes on me nd I was critical for 5 days latr thy got me conscious but couldn't walk for months...but aftr 2 months tried to talk nd walk I succeeded in my struggle ...it was lik a new and fresh life for me...I had come so close to death ..That I understood the value of life... but I knew someone had gas leaked my car coz I smelt the gas...nd I guess tht someone was tanveer

My so called bachpan ki dost..she only cheated me..i learnt a lesson for lifetime..never trust anyone blindly.

And I told thm I need to go back home frm this jungle...the tribal people didn't know my language...nor did I know their's...and with grt difficuly through sign- language using hand gestures I told thm I hav to go back home plz help me..And thy left me in Bhopal... when I came back here everything was changed.. The gal who I was supposed to marry was married off to my younger brother ...my destiny changed guess she was destined for him I hav learnt to accept my fate..yes i saw my home today and was abt to meet my people aftr so long but as soon as I was abt to meet my family I saw her ...I saw zoya rushing somewhere tensedly right behind her was asad so I quietly followed thm...and here I see asad beating up the goons lik an animal...and I was scared for my younger brother wht was it..was his past back.. why was he acting all mechanical lik a machine..

I have to go back home for answers and to teach someone a lesson...and he leaves ...flashback ends...

Zoya and humi see arsalan moving in the car...

Zoya : allah miya whts wrong wth asad...humari awaz tak nahi suni..remains stunned...

Humi : lagtha hai jeej zoya siddiqie ki madhur awaz ko bhool gaye.. (giggling)

Zoya :chup kar tu...aise kaise ...asad ahmed khan zoya siddiquie ki awaz bhool jaye.. yeh tho ho hi nahi sakta...abhi dekthi hoon..

Chalo ghadi main baito...zoya rushing her car fast following asad's...and the cops rushing behind zoya...

Allah miya...yeh police kya kar rahi hai ???

Humi : zarror kisi chor ke peeche hogi

Zoya : peeche tho humara hai...

Humi : aur hum asad jeej ke peeche...

Zoya speeds the car And the cops seem faster than zoya's moving straight towards arsalan's car...shooting arsalaan's car's tyre...making it flat...

Arsalan gets furious nd stops due to the flat tyre

Zoya : wht the hell are these cops doing...

Cops come out of their jeep and tell asad to surrender

Asad ahmed khan you have to come for an enquiry regarding your own studio...and we guess there is ur hand in the matter

Zoya and humi comes out: yeh sab kya horaha hai...asad aisa kuch kyon karega

Arsalan : dangerously iam not going anywhere I am on a mission nd I need to complete it...and for your kind information I hav not burnt the dam studio...yes I saw some guys paasing the red signal and breaking the traffic rules I did follow thm and beat thm black and blue...but left those morons there and told them not to repeat the sin again...orelse thy will see the worst...and scribbled my name in the glass pane so that thy remember me...so stay away frm me..search for the real culprit..

Zoya : remains amused...and utters konsa mission ??? and tumne akram and gang ko maara...

Traffic rules thodne keliye ?????

Cops : wht ??? u broke their bones for brking traffic signal...

Arsalan grabbing zoya and placing the knife on her neck...stay back orelse u'll see her dead...

Cops : cop1 :voh apne hi biwi ko kyon marega..iam telling u it's a plan...

Cop2 but he seems very determined..the cops remain still in their places

Cop 3 : hume chup chap rehna chayiye we don't hav proof abt asad...

Cop 4 : but wht mission was he spking abt ???

Humi : jeej ho kya gaya aapko chodo aapi ko...aapi...

Zoya : pagal hogaye ho kya..allah miya whts wrong wth u and whts wrong wth the cops??? chodo muje...asad chodo...

Asrsalan taking zoya as captive moves to the police jeep...smirking evily...nd moves the jeep speedingly...

Cops : we need to follow asad...lets go

Zoya : allah miya...ho kya gaya hai tume...nd tum muje marne chale thain how could u...

Arsalan : will u stop talking...let me focus...

Zoya ; focus jaye bhad main...pehle yeh bataao tum unn police se darr kar bhaag kyon rahe hon...

Arsalan : dangerously main kisi se nahi dartha..sab mujse darthe hain...simply rushes the jeep like a sports car towards kalhatty jungle

Zoya : ya allah hum jungle ke taraf kyon jaa rahe hain...arsalan gets irritated stops the jeep and pushes zoya out...

Zoya : shouts wht does all this mean asad how can u push me lik tht...god dam it answer...aur yeh tho jungle hai...tum muje jungle kyon le aaye ho..

Main kya cheez hoon tumareliye..jise jab marzi use kiya and jab marzi phek diya...

Arsalan : gets down frm his jeep and moves towards the jungle

Zoya remains shocked...asad muje ignore kar raha hai...whts the matter wth him starts crying tears flow frm her eyes... ... Zoya hears the tigers sound...hearing this starts panicking runs fast towards arsalan and collides wth him breaking his cell phone

Arsalan gets furious and mad: wht the hell did u do...

Zoya : wht the hell matlab...tum mujse aise behave kyon kar rahe ho...ek cell phone hi tho toota

Arsalan : ( angrily )This is not just a cell phone it was the way to find farhaan ...but u fool just destroyed everythg...

Zoya : (shakingly) fool main nahi stammering tum ho asad..suna tumne tum ho...mujse aise baath kar rahe ho jaise main koi stranger hoon.

Arsalan : main asad nahi arsalan hoon samji...stop calling me asad

Zoya : asad tum teek tho ho na...checking his temperature...asad hume tume psychiatrist ko dikana hoga..chalo...ghar chalo...

Arsalan : stop ur nonsense( creepily)...and don't try to follow me...yahi accha hai tumareliye or mereliye..

Zoya : main tumari humsafar hoon. aur main tume kyon na follow karo..i'll follow you everywhere lik a puppy aur mera haq bhi hai making pouts...aise kaise tum muje kudse alag kar sakte ho..i demand an answer for ur creepy behavior..

Arsalan : I don't talk to strangers...aur mera koi humsafar nahi hai..main zindgi main akela tha hoon aur rahoonga and moves

Zoya thinking somethg is really wrong wth him zaroor asad pay kisine kala jadu (black magic) no

Ya fir asad ke sar ke peeche danda mara hoga...ya fir asad ghajni ban gaya..ya allah wht am I thinking ...calls dilshad...

Dilshad sees zoya's name flashing

Dillu is abt to pick the call but sees kabir...and drops the phone

Remains shocked and startled her legs remains rooted to the ground

Kabir comes infront and calls ammi

Dillu's eyes starts to well up listening to his voice the voice tht she was craving for...the lord has brought her son back ..

Kabir and dillu face to face ...both of their eyes moist( bg score)

Jee chahta hain gale se lagaun
Palkon mein rakh loon main, nazar mein chupaa loon
Paas hai, door hai
Kitne majboor hai
Ro raha hai dil, meri aankhen hain nam
na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhie gham...
Yeh hai tere karam
Kabhi khushi kabhie gham,

Both hug each other tightly

Both crying...

Dillu :kabir beta...kisses him everywhere on his face

Thts it...no precaps...

ps :thanks for bearing this chapter gonna end it soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
padne de😆

unres
Dillu Kabir ka milan hua
Kabir ko aadiwasiyon ne bchaya
Zoya ke saamne Asad ki paglpan ki pol khuli
sab khulasa issi part main Jil😆
Asad wapas kaise aayega Arslaan mode se thapad marke😆
Humi aur Zoya ke dialogue hilarious the😛
Tu end karne wali hai meri pyarri ff ko😭
Me no likey
yeh successful story thi

Btw Congarts 4 d new thread yaari🥳🤗
yeh sabse sawal story thi see 4th thread😉
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ress 4 our Gang😃 Heenu moma, Amu, Goti, Affu, Aloo, Abi,😊

Heenu moma Kal mujhe lazy bola lo sabke naam likh dey😉
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Update👍🏼


Arsalan version of Asad 😉

&
CONGRATULATIONS for the 4th Thread
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tu tho pad chuki hai...bass comment mar😡🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jilmil.1

tu tho pad chuki hai...bass comment mar😡🤣🤣


mujhe laga kuch change hoga edit na kiya ho tune so check kiya😳😆
unresed ja pad😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part
Zoya and arslan face to face
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

res

padne de😆

unres
Dillu Kabir ka milan hua
Kabir ko aadiwasiyon ne bchaya
Zoya ke saamne Asad ki paglpan ki pol khuli
sab khulasa issi part main Jil😆
Asad wapas kaise aayega Arslaan mode se thapad marke😆
Humi aur Zoya ke dialogue hilarious the😛
Tu end karne wali hai meri pyarri ff ko😭
Me no likey
yeh successful story thi

Btw Congarts 4 d new thread yaari🥳🤗
yeh sabse sawal story thi see 4th thread😉

hmm patha nahi success thi ya nahi..me confused😕😕😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jilu jhalli thode readers ke bawazood 4 thread koi choti baat hai kya😡
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Originally posted by: jas91

Jilu jhalli thode readers ke bawazood 4 thread koi choti baat hai kya😡

bas main tho ab kam hi aaungi qh thread main will end this...waise bhi asya readers iss forum main kafi kam hai...
and if u see arushi ther r so many readers...bapre...

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