Twisted Fate asya kabhi ff 25th chaptr THE END - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
aslaan and zoya funny chat...
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Tanveer game is up...

now what happen to zoya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Jillu millu MC 🤗 Super se uper duperlicious wowlicious Adventurelicious update 👏👍🏼
Arsalan toh Krish nikla 😲❤️
maza aagya read krne mein .. a is a laga I was watching movie ❤️
Zoya asad k peeche peeche bechari ko smjh nai aaying asad aise kyun behave karing
Zoya clicking Asad's pics and selfies too bwhahaha 🤣🤣
Billo rani ka murder krdo koi 😡
Kabira aage kya karega 🤔
Asad wapas kaise aayega 😳
Zoya 😲😭

Oye MC heart beat se pehle ise update kri ok 😃

ye le stars ⭐️[:*],⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️ infinity... 😉

All the best for exams 👍🏼
miss you 🤗❤️

tu zara song batayegi ya nahi
😔😔
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Haiyeen ...!!!???did u just stop there !!!???
Teriii... Ab tere exams khatam hone tak kaise rahhhooonnn !!!!!?
Nai nai.. Argh jillluuu...

Awesome updt drlng.. Love love love it...
Zoya n Sab record ki !!!! Uuumm witness tho nai bannjayegi naaa...
Argh ye farhaan.. Saale Sab k daalwado jail mein...


Aur tu... Yaha kya karrahi hai.. Papa ko bataoo kya !!!!
Exms hai tere.. Pehle uspe dyan rakhhh... Ab DEC 22nd tak yaha mat dikhaa samjhiii...
Love u baby... Tc :-)

witness nahi banegi bwhaha🤣🤣
bata jo batana hai papa ko...🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unres
Jilmil Update was simply Awesome
loveable part: Zoya keeping irritateing Asad with her non-stop balbring;Asad fighting on Thai kamfu
Zoya's dialouge were hilarious😉
Well I love It

about KSG issue
*sign*
I really don't know what the hell wrong with the people:commenting&questioning on the others character yar.
well if they thought they are so much in character they shouldn't have pass comment&question about others character on first place.
Coz no-one have right to judge others character.

yep patha nahi kya bakwas bolthe rehthe hai...now again thy started wth bips and ksg ewww kuch bhi bolthe hai media nd ksg haters ...hate bips🤢🤢
Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lub u jas puttar...
mai bohat late hogaya iss baar vt i shapath nothing to do vd kaJen 😉
lovely update jil...
tamveer ki pol khuli but otherside zoya ki air flight b nikal padi...
i want her safe landing jil...
jaldi update krna ofcourse aftr exams ... kab tak latkegi bechari hawa mai

tu tho as usual late comer hi hai🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amulya9

Jil hw ru..

Missed u..im so sry fr d delay...
Just became busy wth real life n uperse mobile pe IF open nahi ho raha ..lemme read updte

muje nahi lagtha iss janam main tu read kar payegi🤣🤣 waise bhi if main tu tho aaj kal kaha dikthi hai🤣😡😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Haiyeen ...!!!???did u just stop there !!!???
Teriii... Ab tere exams khatam hone tak kaise rahhhooonnn !!!!!?
Nai nai.. Argh jillluuu...

Awesome updt drlng.. Love love love it...
Zoya n Sab record ki !!!! Uuumm witness tho nai bannjayegi naaa...
Argh ye farhaan.. Saale Sab k daalwado jail mein...


Aur tu... Yaha kya karrahi hai.. Papa ko bataoo kya !!!!
Exms hai tere.. Pehle uspe dyan rakhhh... Ab DEC 22nd tak yaha mat dikhaa samjhiii...
Love u baby... Tc :-)

tu bass katra katra karke girna🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Twisted fate 24th chapter

arsalan dangerously don't come in btw us y cant u understand and pushes zoya ...she trips...frm the edge of the cliff... zoya screams...asaddd...everythg black nd white..

The cops arrive at the scene... yes as usual they arrive late..Thy have been following their cop jeep whch was taken by arsalan and was isolated near kalhatty jungle and thn followed some footprints to trace arsalan...

Thy say arsalan to leave farahan

Asad just leave farahan...arsalan leaves him... he is in state of shock...

Cops ask aapki biwi kaha hai asad...

Arsalan gets scared for the first time..as though he lost his own life...as though he lost somethg precious ...his hands shake..The flashes of him pushing zoya appears.he gets scared the sweat appears in his face..arsalan mpd spks to his thoughts ..."run frm here arsalan" your mission is accomplished..he says to the cops :.its none of your business... and flees frm ther...lik a robo farahan says usne usse yaha se neeche giraya..he pushed her down...cops call the rescue team there... and as arsalan is fleeing fast the flashes of zoya comes...she screaming asad...The name asad... she falling from the cliff to the water...deep water...The cold water...what will her condition be...even the cops don't know wht happened to her...

Arsalan just stops...whts happening to my system...y cant i stop thinking of tht gal...she means nothing to me...The flashes come again of the same gal zoya...she tripping...he pushing...she falling he pushing...its his fault...The fault.. The guilt..

Arsalan closes his eyes...shouts loudly stop it...just stop it...but the flashes keep coming...

I don't know her plz just leave my thoughts...again she screaming his name...asaddd

Somethg in him says she is your soulmate...go save her...arsalan mpd personality tells him..nah she is not...dont bother she was just a pain in your butt..

The same thing repeats over and over again ...save her ...go save her...she might die..dont be the reason of her death you cant let arsalan win r take over your body you are not weak...dont be the reason of ur beloved's death...dont...u are not arsalan u r asad..

Arsalan mpd: no u r arsalan..just leave don't bother

His mind's struggle wth all these thoughts bursts and his arsalan mpd turns into asad ahmed khan.. The power of love wins..but wht the fate has done.The flashes of zoya screaming his name appears he pushing and she falling appears

Asad gets scared...panics...maine zoya ko neeche giraya...i cant do this..main aisa nahi kar sakta...he starts to sweat and runs back to the cliff...

(jaane nahin denge tujhe

will not allow you to go away


jaane tujhe denge nahin)

will not let you go

asad sees the rescue team...going in search of zoya in the water...asad too jumps down the deep water in search of zoya...he screams zoya...awaz do..plz...plz zoya..rest of the cops r amazed..ek tho kudh ki apni biwi ko iss bade se khai ke neeche phek diya..aur ab wapas usse doond raha hai.. how weird can this be ??


chahe tujhko rab bulaa le

whether God calls you


hum na rab se darne waale

not going to be afraid of that god even


raahon mein dat ke khade hain hum

standing firmly in a way

chahe jitna dum laage le

or put any kind of force


jaane na tujhko aise denge hum

will not let you go away this way

asad shouts zoya...kaha ho...plz how can this fate of mine turn so bad...asad swims underwater without safety i.e without oxygen mask... and yells zoya..



jaane nahin denge tujhe

we will not allow you to go away


jaane tujhe denge nahin

will not let you go



do kadam ka yeh safar hai

it (life) is the journey of two steps


umr chhoti si dagar hai

life is a small/short path


ek kadam mein ladkhadaya kyon

and how did you get stumbled in just one step

jane nahi denge tuje

humi calls khan villa residence: dillu picks up.. humi says aunty i tried to call u on ur mobile but it is unreachable so called on landline... aunty asad jeej ko na jane kya hogaya hai...unhone zoya aapi ko cops ke saamne zabardasti kahi leke gaye and tells the whole matter tht took place,..

dillu gets shocked.and thinks..kahi asad arsalan tho nahi bana wapas...ya kudha aur mere mobile par tho zoya ka last call tha...ya kudha rehem kha meri zoya aur asad ko teek rakna bass

The cops arrive the place...

Cops: aap logo ne hume bulaya tha...

kabir: haan bulaya tha cops are surprised to see kabir ahmed khan ...The businessman alive...muje aapko kuch batana hai...and says the whole sceneario...tanveer iske peeche hai...chalo uske ghar...and the cops reach tanu's place...

haseena opens the door..kabir is shown along wth cops

tanveer : gets shock of her life to see kabir alive...she goes to touch his cheeck kabir tum zinda ho...tum zinda kaise i mean..i... she starts to stammer...

kabir : arrest her...yahi voh ladki hai jisne muje maarne ki full proof sazish ki thi...but thanks to god..voh kehte hai na..rab sab kuch dekta hai..usske dar par der hai lekin ander nahi..yes iam late but iam here to puish u for your sins...

tanveer :kabir kya bol rahe ho hum tume maarne ki saazish..hum tho bouth kush hai tume dekkar...u have no idea how happy iam...aur tum yeh kya bol rahe ho...

afreen comes to the picture...sahi bol rahe hain...kabir bhaijaan...aapi aap issi layak ho...

tanveer : wht do u mean afreen...tum humari choti behen hoke humare kilaf kyon zeher kol rai ho...

afreen : zeher tho aap khol rahi ho aapi sabki zindigiyon main...uss din maine aapko kisi se baat karte huve suna tht u have burnt down asad's studio...how could u even think lik tht...u thought of killing my frnd...you?? you even wer behind najma's rape being imraan's partner in crime and spiking her drink.are u shocked how i came to know this..coz u hav attended the same holi party whch najma had attended and i have got some nashili drugs in your closet and aftr tht i checked on your personal diary..whch stated all your dirty games..i am ashamed to call u even my aapi...and yes in your personal diary u even mentioned kabir bhai's death plot...how sick do i feel..yes asad didn't accept me...somewher he was not destined for me..yes i was upset and sad and even restless but that doesn't mean u plot his death ...he still remains my frnd i cant stoop so low...shayed aap kabhi dosti ki value karna nahi samji but main zaroor karoongi and hands over the personal diary to the police

kabir : kash tum samjthi tanveer ki frndshp is a beautiful relationship..frnds ek dusre ke saat dete hain na ki ek dusre ko dard.. frnds kushiyan dete hai..na ki kushi cheente..u just made a mockery of frndshp...

afreen : ab aap kisiki nahi rahi aapi...ab aap akele hai... The cops arrest tanveer

scene shifting to asad

zoyaaa... asad screaming and swimming.. The rescue team at 1 hand and asad on the other...and finally he spots zoya completely unconscious under water...floating lifeless dhak dhak tish tish dhak dhak...asad swims harder to get more close and finally he grabs the floating body...he gets panicked scared and simply shouts loudly plz call the ambulance...i got her plz...he grabs her tightly zoya...kisses her forehead...gets her out of the water rubs her hands ..rubs her legs she is cold he starts crying his eyes moist starts kissing her cheecks hugs her tightly giving her all his warmth..bg music mitwaa ishq pay zor nahi sad music...hears her heart beats dhak dhak...

zoya kuch tho bolo answer me plz...dont leave me...i didn't do this.. i cant do this..

and the cops call the ambulance..the ambulance arrive the spot and thy head towards the hospital...asad in the state of shock sitting lifeless...Himmatein Ataa Karo
Grant me strength
O Madadgaar Maula
O benevolent (helper of all) Lord!
Ali Maula, Ali Maula, Ali Maula... Oh Maula
Oh Lord!
Ali Maula, Ali Maula, Ali Maula
Oh Lord Ali!
Aap Hi Ho Quwwate, Parwardigaar Maula
You are the most powerful God, O sustainer of all (humanity)!
Ali Maula, Ali Maula, Ali Maula.. Oh Maula

They take zoya to the ICU

Cops surround asad and start bombarding him wth questions...kya yeh sach hai ki aapne zoya ko uss khai se neeche dakela..(is this true tht u pushed ur wife frm the cliff) answer us

Asad just sits lifeless and disturbed...the cops call the khan fly and zoya's fly...najma kabir dillu rashid first arrive along wth zoya's family...razia gaffur humi nuzzi...

Kabir sees asad ...who is sitting with his head lowered in the bench motionless...bg music tari..ra re...

razia ya allah humari bacchi iss condition main kaise aayi...

gaffur : kissne kiya yeh sab angrily

cops say its all becoz of rockstar asad he has pushed his own wife frm the cliff.. all remain shocked and confused

kabir : no never mera chota bhai yeh harkat kabhi nahi kar sakta voh kudha bhi aake bolde yeh baat tab bhi nahi manuga...

Asad hearing this sees kabir...eyes moist says bhaijaan and hugs kabir...ohooo..bg music in slow sad version

humse haseen humse khushi...

hain humise zindagiii

taarein hum zameen par le aaye

hum laaye hain roshni,

hooo dil jahaan hum wahaan

aisa manzar aur kahaaan

hugs kabir tarira ra ri ra...

precap: asad sees kabir praying to god for zoya...nd thinks I was never perfect for zoya all I did was give her pain...kabir bhai is just so perfect

PS :ignore the mistakes folks...galthi se galti hojathi hai🤣🤣😎 and critics not welcomed

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