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Posted: 10 years ago
im realy sorry fr d delay baby ...i know sry isnt enough ...bt really sry ..*kaan pakad ke *
really got busy wth studies,health n relatives ...uperse sasural trip fr 10 days ...
i vl read update now ..n comment karungi ...
n i hope u had a blast on new year
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Posted: 10 years ago
power packed update jil...
kabir is back n hes soo good 😊
omg mera asad busy in fighting n frgot his anarkali ..
chipkali anarkali ..only zoya can crack jokes like this ...
farhaan pakadgaya 😃
ohoo mere arsalan cum asad pushed zoee...my baby save her jilluuu...

continue soon


jil ..hope ur fine ..abhi kaisa hai ...
wats up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

im realy sorry fr d delay baby ...i know sry isnt enough ...bt really sry ..*kaan pakad ke *

really got busy wth studies,health n relatives ...uperse sasural trip fr 10 days ...
i vl read update now ..n comment karungi ...
n i hope u had a blast on new year

its okie waise bhi tu kaha dikthi hai forum main🤓🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago

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thanks for the pm...


thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
waise tho sabko thank u nahi bolthi...so thank u all🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

25th chaptr TWISTED FATE... The end

The union of 2 brothers...takes place last update..and now the current story...

Asad : completely in pain guilt and says bhaijaan...its me.. maine usse.. uss clif se neeche giraya.. and i get these glimpses...of pushing her...I don't really remember pushing...but these glimpses...I just don't understand

Kabir :shuu aisa kuch nahi hai..asad its not u...infact u were the person who saved zoya...

Cops : abhi abhi tho inhone mana ki its him..who pushed his wife

Gaffur : asad tumne meri beti zoya ko dhakela...how could u...?? voh tumari biwi hai...aur tumne ussiko ???

Rashid: aisa kuch nahi hai..aap suniye asad aisa kabhi bhi apne kwab main bhi... apno ko maarne ki soch nahi sakta hai...asad will never do this he never hurts his loved ones

Kabir : asad apnokeliye jaan de sakta hai... na ki jaan lena...he can giv his life to the people he loves but cant even imagine taking their life

Dilshad : tum sab chup hojaao..kudha keliye...main bathathi hoon..yeh sab asad ne nahi kiya...usse mpd hai he is suffering from multiple personality disorder..aur voh uss waqt asad ki personality nahi tha voh kuch aur ban gaya tha..

Siddiquies gets shocked ??

Asad himself gets shocked...he remembers his childhood trauma...but never knew he was suffering frm MPD...coz his ammi said it was just a check up..going to psychiatrist coz he was stressed up and in depression...and the doctors will give him stress buster pills..and injection..tht means ammi lied to me...

Gaffur : kya matlab hai iska...

Dilshad : says the whole matter to thm abt asad's past ayan's death nikath's death.. abt his personality disorder ..and how he becomes arsalan due to sorrowful situation and says I thought it will never lapse..but it did lapse...

All r shocked and disturbed

Asad : thinks main iss mpd ke saath jee raha tha...I was living wth this disorder..

Cops : hmm Tho inne yeh bimari hai..

Gaffur : asad ko yeh bimari tha aur aapne batana zaroori nahi samja...

Dillu : I thought it will never lapse...kyonki asad 1 saal ke baad pura teek hogaya tha...

Asad: gets irritated and moves frm ther thinking...he has this disorder how can anyone live wth him...muje kaise koi jhel sakta hai..meri kudh ki ammi ne mujse yeh baat chupayi and flashbacks of him pushing zoya appears ..it keeps on haunting him...he hurt her...Tht means he can hurt her more...

After 20 minutes

He sees kabir praying there for zoya...nd thinks I was never perfect for zoya..she deserved the best not me..

The other part of his mind is not ready to let go...But I love her...I just cant live without her...but how can she live wth a person like me..how can she be happy wth me..

Saying so he takes his phone nd texts zoya..i'll giv u happiness zoya...I cant be selfish... my love cant be selfish I know I hav this disorder and I have hurt u but anythg can happen with me nd if I hurt u now I can hurt u later in future... ...u don't desrve a beast lik me ...u deserve The best ...nd tht best person is bhaijaan..

The doctor comes out and says she is out of danger nd absolutely fine..just minor injuries nothing to worry...

Asad gets relieved...but steps back nd thinks I need to disappear...iam not the perfect guy in her life...main uskeliye sahi nahi hoon..maine sirf dard diya hai usse...main bimar hoon..maine usse kai se dakela..i pushed her...I can do anythg wrong to her due to my disorder..and she only deserves happiness...muje yaha se jaana hoga...I am sorry zoya...but I don't wanna giv u any pain in life...

And disappears frm ther like forever...

1 week passed... 1 week leap

News abt aak The Rockstar missing is being flashed everywhere in news channels...and those who find him will be rewarded with cash prize...

Zoya passing.. asad- missing- pamphlets ...everywhere...aak fly nd zoya's fly in mission doondo asad..

Zoya : kaha chale gaye tum asad...muje chodke...kaise sochliya ki main tumare bina kush rehloongi...a tear drop escapes frm her face...

Kabir in convo wth cops:...railway station main nahi mila... airport main nahi mila bus stand main nahi mila...tho kya zameen khaa gayi asad ko...

Zoya near Bhopal bus stand...giving aak-missing pamphlets...

A call comes frm wig store stating that asad ahmed khan was here ordering for wigs and beard and he was booking tickets of train in his phone...

Cops inform zoya and make way towards railway station...zoya too heads for the station

And cops reach the spot...zoya too reaches the spot...

Zoya: yaha par tho 2 train hai...nd she runs inside each compartments to check on asad..The cops too search in different directions nd in train compartments

zoya: asad kaha ho...??

ANd the other train is abt to leave in 3 minutes..and zoya enters nd searches the compartments...she screams asad

and in 1 of the train's compartment she sees a old lady screaming maine apni purse uss pani ki dukan main choda hai...koi plz lake do plzz..

Zoya thinks only 3 minutes left...and I didn't search all the compartments...muje asad ko doondna hoga..but asad ko tho cops bhi doond rahe hai...thy are also in the train..

Par iss bichari old lady ki bhi madat karni chayiye nd leaves the train and runs back to the stall to get lady's purse...

And half breathingly reaches the stall...Bhaiyaa jaldi kijiye uss buddi aurat ki purse aapke yaha choot gaya hai...and the owner gives the purse...

And soon she realizes tht the train starts moving ...zoya runs arrey maajee..aapka purse ...areey train ko koi roko...maajee.

Tht lady shouts: koi tho madat karo uss bachi ki...uss bachi ke paas mera purse hai plz koi tho??

Passenger : aap kudh kyon nahi karthi madat..???

Old lay : mere pairo main kamzori hai badi muskil se train pakda hai...insaniyat ke katir tum log madat karo...plz...

Zoya : maajee...The train gains speed...zoya runs with all her might towards it...she is just abt to miss it...when a hand comes out of the train...he looks lik some yogic baba..wth long black beard..long black hair and black glares and all... and he spks...fast make it fast jaldi hath do apni..listening to him she gives him her hand nd he pulls her in towards him nd thy trip down.. ...and for a moment she seems to be strangely connected to him...mitwaaa..nd he gets up nd makes her get up all his gestures remind her of aak...The lady sees the gal zoya..

Old lady: shukriya beta..tuj jaisi bacchi aajkal kaha milthe hai...

Zoya : koi nahi maajee...kisiki madat karna matlab allah ke aur kareeb jana... and the cops are also in the same train ..The cops ordering to stop the train..chain keecho...jaldi...Thy hav enquired wth some passengers abt some person wth fake beard nd fake long hair..and the train seems to have forcefully stopped...the person moves speedily...zoya sees him and gets suspicious nd moves behind him areey ruko...and he increases his speed nd runs out of the train but this time cops are fast not late like always...They see him and surround him from all the sides..kaha bhaag rahe thy nd removes his fake long beard, fake hair nd glares ..MR ASAD AHMED KHAN...

Zoya sees aak aftr a week...1 whole week..asad too sees her..his eyes moist and in pain and she comes running and smacks him hard nd slaps him twice...kaha bhaag rahe thy tum mujse dhoor..apni kismet se dhoor...1 week hogaya.. ek hafta tumne kaise jeeliye mere bina...tum aise kaise mujse dhoor chalegaye..how dare u ??

Asad : zoya I just didn't wanted to giv u anymore pain..and a tear escaped frm his eyes

Zoya : stupid bewakoof gade ...without u I would be in pain...ek hafta patha hai kya kya huva...sniffing nd crying

Asad : just look at u...all I do is make u cry..

Zoya :slaps him lightly again.. kabardar aisa socha tho and thank god tum muje mil gaye..issi baat pay sher arz hai...Tume miss karna roz ki baat hai

yaad karna aadat ki baat hai

jhelna himmat ki baat hai

magar tumse dur rehna kayamat ki baat hai

and ab tho tum muje chodkar jaa bhi nahi sakte... patha hai kyon ???

Asad : patha hai...I just couldn't stay away frm u... meri permanent FM mirchi... aur har raat ko tumari need main ghane ki bhimari...I missed tht so much...actually I missed u .. each second each minute each hour was like thousand thorns...I tried to go away but my fate always took me to u..

Zoya : yeh baat nahi hai...ab tho humara rista aur bhi solid hogaya

Asad : I know...I will not go away again...

Zoya : areey dafur solid hogaya matlab... tum mere bacche ki baap banewale ho.. smiling

Asad : kya ?? pause ...i am gonna be a father...matlab ki junior zoya on the way and he instantly carries zoya nd twirls her round nd round nd round nd drops her down nd kisses her forehead nd cheecks happily...

The cops smile...

All the family members reach the railway station...

Siddiqies::: akir asad mil gaya...

Dilshad : sukar yeh kudha ka ki tum mil gaye ab chalo Dr sofia ke paas voh tume hypnotize karke poori tarah se teek kardegi...aur yeh bimari tumse humesha keliye dhoor hojayegi...aur iss bimari ki tension bhi katam hojayega

Kabir : All s well that Ends well ...aur asad tumne zoya ko mere barose chod diya ???...aisi soch tumare dimag main aaya bhi kaise...and playfully hits him on his head...zoya sirf tumari hai aur tumari rahegi..

Rashid : thanks the cops for their help...

Gaffur :thanks the cops...nd says waise tho filmo main humesha cops late hote hain...par aap log iss bhar sahi time pay aagaye...

Cops : hume ek aur kaam karna hai... and goes to asya and handcuffs asad nd zoya...

Asad : yeh kyon ???

All shout thaki tum doobara zoya ko chodne ki gustaki nahi karoge...

All smile asad side- hugs zoya tightly😉😉😉

Ps : assume this...Aftr few days najma junaid wedding takes place..asad gets himself back to normal due to hypnotism done by DR sofia... and thy all live happily ever aftr...

The end...tomatoes chappals not welcomed🤣

Hehehe frnds this is The end ...voh kya hai na muje zyaada stretch karna pasand nahi...chewing gum ki tarah so I ended wth a happy note...

Thts it folks... cya and abt my other story just removing it...coz its confusing for most of the readers

mistakes just ignore folks nd enjoy the update🤣
Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome happy ending ⭐️ zoya did the right thing to slape asad hehehe n plz continue u r other story or start a new one 😳
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu143

Awsome happy ending ⭐️ zoya did the right thing to slape asad hehehe n plz continue u r other story or start a new one 😳

other story not continuing🤣 and new one aftr lot of gap...😎❤️ thank u for reading❤️
Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome blossome ending❤️🥳
zoya slapping asad hahaha🤣
love it love it
railway station and handcuffs cute❤️
plz continue ur other story also...or start somethg new...😳
Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
That's awesome loved it
Wow asya are together
Zoya slap asad Wow
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for your other work

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