Twisted Fate asya kabhi ff 25th chaptr THE END - Page 23

Originally posted by: gowtu

Teri saanso se hi mere saanse chaliii...
Tu hi dikhe jab bhi aankhe khule...

Dekha falak.. Dekhi zami...
Koi naiii... Tumsaaa haseennn...

Fir bhi ye pyar ki silsile nai rukhe..
Marrgay mitgaye par kabhi na jhuke...
(I know.. These two lines r from another version.. But I loved these lines a little too much ;-) )

Kaise kahe Hume kitniii mohabbat hai... Mohabbat haiii...



Aaahhh I m in kmh world now


Wow... That was very nice ending jilllu.. Loved it 😛
Though I m not fn with u r ending dis stry but its k..
Studies comes 1st.. And u ll gt bsy wd exams...


Asad ko tho rashis and Kabir n mahaan baba diya 😆
Aaaww asad... Koun usko samjhaye he was d one who actually saved her..
And he was thinking cz of him zoya was in that stage...

Ending superb thaaa.. Asad ko baap banadiya tune !!!! 😲 😳
(lolll I meant in d ff.. Zoya k bache k baap)

Gggrrr did I sound different... 😆 😆

Arey wah yaar.., what a shayri.. It was really very gud 😛
I really liked it...

Hhhmm yaha cops bhi joke maarrahe the.. Isliye ye jilmil k ff hai :-P 😉 😆

I totally loved nd enjoyed dis ff jilluuu... Thnk u so much for it...


P.s- ye le meri maaa... Teri meri cmmnt :-P 😆
Mere cmmnt k pyasiii.. Muwh... I loveee uuu aaalllooottt ❤️

Originally posted by: gowtu

Long cmmnt kiye hue bahut din hogayyy

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

</div>awesome last chappy pay last commenter🤣
<div>and those lines...kmh 2 version...I too loved those lines...but story tho first version ki superb thi❤️

nd ending ek dum kmh style bwhaha🤣

love u too gowtuuu🤣❤️

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