Twisted Fate asya kabhi ff 25th chaptr THE END - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hei jil i am new hear lovely story
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Originally posted by: jilmil.1


yep arsalan voh cheez bada hai mast mast🤣🤣
yep fly forest hai...🤣🤣


huh... zyada mast mat bol... asad ko bura lagega jil 😛
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Originally posted by: jas91



finally meri maa ne meri kabiliyat pehchaan li😃
love u mumma❤️

i lub u too mera puttar ❤️
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Love u jil u r my first firend thank u pm me
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Aslan driving zoya nuts...

with his illusion...

so kabir survive...nice

so he needs to settle score soon...

before asad...
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Wonderful updates jil
I love it so much
You are awesome writer jil
Continue it ASAP

Can't wait to read next update
Thanks for pm
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Jil whr r u update soon waiteing
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Twisted fate 23rd chapter

Dillu : sees kabir and asks beta we thought u were dead...

Kabir ; tells the whole scenario to dillu...

Dillu gets shocked hearing tanveer's name...

Dillu : voh ladki humari dukh ki karan thi...she was behind our sorrows ...now she will have to pay for it...

Kabir : yes ammi...i'll call the cops...and put her behind bars for her deeds

Scene shifting to tanveer...

Uss studio ko tho humne jalaya tha...billo rani kyonki hume badla jo lena tha...uss asad se usne humari behen ki kushiyaan sari cheen li..

Scene shifting to arsalan and zoya

Zoya : yeh ammi ko kya hogaya phone kyon nahi uta rahi hai...y doesn't she pick up

Arsalan : seeing the phone which was broken by zoya tries to fix it...

Zoya : seeing arsalan...asad ammi phone pick nahi kar rahi..

Arsalan: ignoring zoya sees here and ther for the missing parts of the phone...and fixes thn he sees tht the sim is missing he scans the area..and finally finds the sim card...and feels elated...and smirks to himself

Zoya in her thoughts main tho bhul hi gayi thi...ki asad miya...muje bhul gaya hai...and kudko patha nahi arsalan kyon samaj raha hai...aur upar se ammi not picking up the call...

why allah miya sab kuch mere saat hi kyon hota hai..whenever i think tht everythg is gonna be alright why does things ruin...

arsalan starts to move frm the place leaving zoya..

zoya sees arsalan moving and shouts asad kaha jaa rahe ho...asad..

arsalan : moves faster...

zoya following asad : saying loudly.. This is not funny at all asad..yeh jungle hain...aur tumara yeh ganda mazak muje bilkul bhi acha nahi lag raha...are u even listening ..jungle ke kuch rules hote hain...and hume jungle main nahi hona chayiye

arsalan...checking the gps in the phone and moving towards the location of farhan hideout... well well mr farahan ur game is over

zoya sees the place..it looks horror and dense...and its already turning night...

zoya running into asad... holding his hands and saying hume aise jagah nahi aana chayiye..it looks scarey...chalo ghar chalte hain...aur hum yaha tarzan- jane nahi khel sakte...its spooky out here..

arsalan : did i ask for ur suggestion...and didn't i tell u to stay away frm me..MISS chipkali...

zoya : ewww chipkali i hate chipkali's i mean lizards and besides .iam not a chipkali i can only be your anarkali...winking at him..

arsalan : stop distracting me frm my mission...i think u r a spy sent by those cops...aint u..

zoya : spy...i am not a spy..i am ur wife dam it...

arsalan : iam getting bored...bug off ...and don't dare to interfeare in my mission...last ultimatum...saying tht he leaves to the hideout...

zoya :wht the...??? no matter what iam following u...i don't care of ur ultimatum's

zoya sees arsalan moving to some spooky cave...arrey asad waha kyon jaa rahe ho..waha katra (danger) hosakta hai...listen...and she follows him...

arsalan...enters the cave.why is this gps pointing this location ...a cave..hmm..

zoya huffing and half breathingly...r u gone nuts...yaha parjungli janwar hosakta hai...a bear a tiger...

arsalan as usual ignoring the chatter of zoya moves towards the signalling gps...and the signal stops here...right in middle of this cave strange...

zoya : muje tho koi bhi admi ya parindha dhoor dhoor tak nazar nahi aa raha...i guess hume wapas ghar jana chayiye home sweet home..

arsalan : guess there is an underground passage...like some tunnel which leads to their hideout...saying so he starts knocking the ground...

zoya : Is this some joke...underground tunnel bwhaha this happens only in movies...saying so she steps into some rock and rock turns left and there is a secret underground tunnel...

arsalan : woohoo...thts just grt looks lik the whole universe is siding us...and he slides down the tunnel...

zoya : And i thought it happened only in movies...she too slides behind arsalan

and looks like they are not alone...there were full goons with weapons cctv camera's attached and his men waiting for arya welcome

arsalan slides down the end of the tunnel and starts to do thai chi with the goons

zoya slides the end of the tunnel and sees asad doing Thai chi a "martial art"...and gets surprised asad Thai chi champion bhi hai...omg...wow kya ladtha hai...how cool does he fight...hayeee

I guess muje uski photo kichni chayiye...ya fir recording karna chayiye...takes her cell phone out and clicks pics of asad.. muje apni bhi ek selfie leni chayiye

arsalan kicks a goon up in the air...he jumps and kicks anothers butt... and thn drags the other goon on the ground and swings him on the ground circular motion..

zoya captures it in the cell phone camera...wooo kya jet packed performance hain..yeh gaya...neeche voh gaya upar...

and farahan sees the cctv camera...sees asad ...nd heads towards asad with his gun...

zoya sees farahan coming with the gun...and shouts asad...

arsalan ignores zoya's shout...zoya runs and pushes farhaan's gun and it falls...arsalan sees this nd grabs farhaan's neck tighly not allowing him to breathe...ab tere khel katam...and bata uss din tumne imraan ko kyon mara tha..tell me u moron are u his crime partner you both planned najma's rape am i right...

farahan : no you r wrong.. voh humara aadmi tha working for us...aur voh pakda gya tha...nd police use enquiry karne wali thi and usne yeh secret abt us trafficking gals to goa..isse leak kiya tha uski so called galfrnd tanveer ko..yeh baat humari gang ko patha chala whn he was conversing in phone with tanveer...aur iss cheez ko leke humare gang ke saat uska kuch lafda huva tha..and jab pakda gaya..agar usne humare gang ke bharemain info reveal kiya tho hum sab pakde jaate..issliye usse mardiya...

arsalan : ab tum gaye kam se...he tries to strangle farahan

zoya comes in btw yeh kya kar rahe ho...ruko yeh marjayega...dont do this tum cop nahi ho..kanoon apne haath math lo..asad..

asad chod do use..plz..just leave him

arsalan flees frm ther taking farahaan...he takes him outside the cave...near some cliff...he flees like a robot...

zoya too follows but unable to catch the speed of arsalan...

nahi muje asad tak pounch na hoga...and she runs like its the last race of her life..she sees arsalan trying to push farahaan

zoya comes running to stop asad no...stop..isse police ke havale karthe hain..just stop..and she is on the edge of the cliff

arsalan dangerously don't come in btw us y cant u understand and pushes zoya ...she trips...frm the edge of the cliff... zoya screams...asad...everythg black nd white..

ps: since its weekend and tomo sunday so I got time to post.. my exams r going on till dec 22nd...aftr tht will update faster and finish it...

If there r mistakes just ignore.😎🤣

no precaps🤣
Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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res 4 d gang😛
Heenu, Amu, Goti, Yumi, Affu, Mayur

Heenu mumma love u😃🤗

Love u Jils 4 hanging in here🤗 when all other's left😭

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