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aachal20

@aachal20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

I love this ss or ff of asya.your amazing writer seriasly have read all your parts .its very funny and also very romantinc love this asad and zoya.I have watch qabul hai till asad and zoya was there and I love it.but loving your story more than the actual show.you are amazing plz update fast.eagarly wait for all your updates.

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canoodle

@canoodle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Chapter 17 was amazing, you are really good at writing Anjali. Your descriptions are so vivid and you find the cutest things to write about. And that dream 😳

Update soon please, I am so addicted to this story.

-Meera

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

I've already read Chapter 1-17 again, I loved it more this time around because I noticed the little details. UPDATE KARO NAA PLEASE!

(I hope that makes sense, I can't speak hindi to save my life)

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astonm

@astonm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Res, I knew you'd update today! 😃

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Unres!

Imran is such an asshole. Wow. And Zoya still cares for him, she's such a nice person!

"Because Asad knows right from wrong, because he's a good person, because I love him." I said affirmatively, because it was the absolute truth and I wouldn't have him question it.

I know everyone always fangirls over things Asad says, but that one line says a lot about Zoya's feelings for Asad, SO PERF.

Awww, Ayaan stepping in front of Zoya like Asad does, I love Ayaan in this story man.

YES. FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! Lmao, Zoya broke the Billi's nose. YAY!!!!!!

Uhmmm, how do you think of these things? Asad's worry for her is so in line with the show (before they messed up), they could have done so much with this angle but they didn't!

AHHH. The way Asad freaks out, the way you show his anger and Zoya calming him down is so beautiful.

AND THE TATTOO PART. AHHH.

"This isn't exactly how I imagined this."

"Oh and what exactly were you imagining?"

"That we'd be rolling around in bed, making out and you'd pull off my shirt."

Te-he-he.

HAHAHA. I love this chick.

Omg, so hot! But I love how it's so caring at the same time, it gives me so many feels I just can't!

OMG HE MAKES HER TEA. CAN I HAVE YOUR ASAD PLEASE JUST PLEASE?

I nodded not wanting to speak since I was already brushing my teeth. She smiled gleefully before starting to brush her teeth herself. I looked in the mirror and smiled, it was such a mundane thing but it made me happy to have her beside me. It felt as if she was now an actual permanent part of my life, her clothes were hanging next to mine in the closet, the bookshelves were now filled with battered copies of romance and mystery novels, her toothbrush lay beside mine, the shower now housed her different things - I didn't understand what half of them were for but they smelled good. It was such a nice feeling to see her stuff dispersed and organized among my own, it made all of this feel that much more real.

Just kill me now, that is so sweet. AHHH! Yes, overprotective Asad is my fav. Can't wait to see what you have coming up! UPDATE SOON LOVEEE.

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Mine 😃

Hey Anjali, amazing update again.

Ohhh I loved the way Zoya punched Tanveer 😆. I must say a scene worth watching... Reading it was good but watching would have been so much better. Lol 😆

Am in love with this Asad, so protective of her. Hay I want him 😳

I liked how Zoya whispered into Tanveer's ear and warning her for doing against Asad and herself and even about hurting Imraan. Shows how she still considers them all as her family even if Imraan doesn't reciprocate her feelings.

Oh and how can I forget their little make out session. So so hot. Anjali if the make out session is SO hot, what will their actual deed be like ☺️. UFF am hyperventilating .

Loved the update 😃

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Abi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

unres

Absolutly

update

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@ChamakChallo91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Edited :)

Imran gets more and more annoying with each update!!

Zoya Vs Tanveer was awesome 😛😆 Well done Zoya 👏

Asad's caring and protectiveness towards zoya is so adorable!!

Asad and Zoya's moment was hot!! You wrote beautifully!!

Can't wait for the next part :)

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

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Unres

Nice update dear
Tanveer zoya fight was good. Zoya punched her & warned her abt asad & imran also. I like the protective asad as he didn't want anyone to harm her. He knew that if zoya was not relative of siddiquis, she was killed by that time. She loves her family & wanted to protect it. Now if anybody try to harm zoya, they will have to face asad. Their romantic moments were wonderful. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Heyy...Anjali...thanx for the P.M dear...well again a excellent update...the Catfight...though only tannu is cat here was...funny...Zoya is a strong girl...Asad's apartent scene was adorable,hot and good...liked the whole update...you know it is always funny that how through Zoya you always mention that Everybody else other than Zoya... knew that ASYA had something going on...continue soon..