5/1 Part 7: Go easy on the brain !! Pg 16, Choomantar, A Sahil ff - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Wynter




Lolzz... 😆
You serious about that ?!!
so far i felt aeroplanes are the only transport modes where people dont do all those..
everything else's taken.. cars, trains, cabs.. 😉 😲



What do u ppl mean by that "those things"??? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Res... :D

Unres...:D

Heyyy Anu... I am back to unres this post :D
Let me start now...:D

Part A.

Ohooo... Ahil baba is nervous!!!!

Anu I really liked this line alot yaar- "The way she stretched on the A, dropped the HI and again emphasised the L .. It was like a tune to my tears.."- its kind of funny... But its lovely...<3<3

Ahil's POV is really good.. The way he sees sanam, the way he describes her beauty... Hayeee lovely... Credits to u Anu:)

Oye hoye!!!! Sanam is jealous... ;)

Anu next part- ahil's pov as well as sanam's Pov... Kya likha hai tumne yaar, though it is short, it is wonderful... Too romantic... Hayeee *blush*

Part B.

Sanam... Lol... She is really really jealous!!!! :)
I can almost visualize Ahil's expressions, smirking... :) awww his looks<3
Lol... Sanam mumbling.. I love that...

Yeh sanam KO achanak kya Hua uhhh... Y shez caring so much fo that girl uhhh...
Ahil baba- thank god u admitted that u r not interested in anyone (except ur princess sanam...<3), all this was just to make sanam feel jealous... Lol..

Anu.. This was not at all abrupt... I enjoyed it fully dear... Thanks for ur pm dear... I really appreciate ur work...

Will be waiting for ur next update...
Lots of love
- Sush:)




Hahah..Thank you..
Thats the way sanam calls him right.. AaahiLL
Man, that carries a lot of dardh within it..
And the way it goes up, down and again up..
I have no idea how he would feel, but thats a tune to my ears !! 😳

Yeah, i want sanam to be on fire... she'd look damn sexy when she tries to be possessive of her husband... 😉

And romantic aahil ke baare me bolne keliye kuch bhi nahi hai... !! 😊

and lolzz.. i meant it abrupt cause it ended with his eyes staring at her lips..
u can imagine what the next step could be right...😉 😛
Edited by Wynter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73


Thank youu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.



What do u ppl mean by that "those things"??? 😕




Lolzz.. 😆
Those things are something which are not to be told.. 😉
They are just performed at the moment of action... !!!
You'll be knowing it when i post that part...
dunno when, maybe next to the next part? 😕


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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Hii guys, so I'm back with the part 6.
Title : "Honey, It's this way"
Hahah.. You'll get the reason for this title once you finish reading.. 😊

I stared at Aahil as his eyes wandered across my lips..
Suddenly i felt my lips going dry... Is it what being kissed feels like?
Man, He didn't even kiss me.. And I'm having all the after effects..
Wait.. These are the pre effects..So, were the pre effects same too ??
Shit.. What am i even thinking ??!
Okay okay, so here it goes.. Haya only told me how the after effects of being kissed feel like..
Not the before effects where you feel that a guy's literally undressing you with his eyes...
And Yeah, before you ask..., Now, if you were wondering how i knew of this when i just proclaimed i didn't know... Cause, thats the very same way I'm feeling right now..
I closed my eyes to give myself a little piece of mind and even peace if that was possible since I'm having an adrenaline rush and being on a plane didn't help much either...
The lips felt going much drier if that was even possible as he edged closer.. I made a vain attempt to moisten them and realized that was a very bad move, noticing the inevitable smirk on his face, as my tongue licked its way on my lips..

Allaah miyaa.. Pehgaya panga.. I wanted this plane to crash right now..
This building up tension is soo strange to me..

Sooner or later i uttered the words, the plane started to shake..
I closed my eyes shut hoping that this'd not be my last breath..
Perhaps, taking that kiss from him before dying is better...
Atleast I'd have some experience to share with my ammi and abbu when i meet them..!!
I shuddered at what I was even thinking..
Perhaps, its the plane giving me weird thoughts tonight.
Fine, that was the only blame i could work out at the moment... "Plane sick"


Aahils pov :

Damn these turbulences.. Of all the time, they had to happen now!!

I noticed Sanam closing her eyes and murmuring something.. Perhaps some secret prayers..

I slid away back to my place.. 'Great.. My moment's ruined now and i very well know that if i try anything now, all I'll be getting is a slap from her..
I sat back, trying to hold my tripping cappuchino in place.. I tried holding them together (mine and hers) and i felt a gentle pair of hands hold them together enclosing mine.
I looked at Sanam smiling.. But she smirked at me as she picked up her cold coffee from my hands and started to sip on it.
Was she smirking at me.. I rolled my eyes..
Wait, if she just took her drink, then whose hands were these..
I tilted my head to the opposite side, following Sanams gaze, to find the attendant.. Yes, that very same one whose-whatever she scribbled in that paper, I just threw down !!

She gave me a wink as i looked at her and i found myself giving her a weak grin.. And trust me, that indeed was such a weak one that i even found sanam stifling her laugh..
Still, this woman couldn't figure that out.
I tried pulling my hands away from the enclosure as i felt her rubbing her palms on mine and drawing some god-knows-what things on the back of my palms with her nails.
"Want any help, sir.. Sorry for the turbulence" she spoke, about the same time i managed bringing my hands out.
"Nope" I shaked my head and closed my arms across my chest to prevent her from giving me her damn silly rubs., totally forgetting that i have an audience beside me and they were getting quite entertained with my act.


Sanams pov :

I bursted into laughter after noticing that she walked away.
Unsurprisingly, now i didn't feel offended by his glare., If any, i felt like bursting out more.
"Whaa-att" He rolled his eyes..
I shaked my head, trying to stifle my laugh. "Thanks for making me jealous. What a pity, she left soon" i chuckled., holding my hands across my mouth to suppress laughing again.
I held my stomach and panted as it pained from all the laugh.
I didn't know when was the last time i laughed soo much.
The rest of the journey we were silent, except for an occasional chuckle when the attendant walked past him and he became alert.

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"Well, I'm surprised" I heard him say from behind me as we made our way out from the plane, towards the luggage section.
"What.. " i asked turning towards him and arching a brow.
"That you weren't actually much afraid of planes" he smirked "I thought..."
"What did you think?" I added before he completed his sentence, folding my hands across my chest. "That I'll shout oh no, drop me from the plane..Aahil please rescue me and that I'll beg of you, lean on your shoulder, catch your hands, grill my nails into them" I spoke out, enacting the piece of me being afraid and shouting..
He stood infront of me eyes-widened..
It was when i realized that what exactly i just spoke.
"Whatever.. I didn't mean all that" I added hoping that it'd make things any better and started walking.
I stopped walking after going a little distance ahead to find that he's still standing there, now leaning on to a wall, hands folded, eyes focused on me and a smirk making its way on his lips.
I shaked my hands across his face as if to wake him up from his gaze.. There was no reaction. The same old face with that infamous smirk embedded on it.
Shaking my head, I walked back the distance and stopped a little short, placing my hands on my hips, head held high staring back at him.
He stood straight, and closed up the little gap left.
I noticed the posture i stood in and noticed that it wasn't much of any help and if any, it was more provoking.. But he already closed up the gap, so i moved a step back, regaining my posture back to normal but head held the same way high, and an air of business tone in my voice.
"The exit's this way, honey" he grinned tugging a strand of my hair backwards.
I could still remember my jaw dropping downwards at that statement. And from the look on his face, i was sure that i would have been the breeding place for all mosquitoes and flies had i opened my mouth this way in a local indian train.
I followed his foot steps the way out, staying either beside or behind him, but never an inch ahead.
I don't even remember the number of times i cursed under my breath as we made our way to the hotel.


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How's that.. Well, i for one had loads of fun while writing this piece.
I know its short but i still wanted to start the actual honeymoon stay with a new start.
And as usual, please leave your likes amd comments.. I feed on them.
They are the ink to my pen,
The eraser to my pencil ( to change myself for the better if i made any mistake, through ur comments ofcourse !!)
And last but not the least, the treat for sacrificing my sleep !!!

Well, that was lame.. I know 😳
But hey.. Its 12:00 over here and i had a kinda tired day..
Whatever.. Yeah.. Enough of my ranting.
So here i conclude..
I know it's small but the next one will be longer.. And any typo mistakes or grammatical errors.. Spare me. (I told you it's 12 and i just yawned around 7-8 times while writing this conclusion speech.. !!!)

And now, i really conclude hoping you'll like it.

THANK YOU AND HAVE A GOOD DAY..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Its a lovely chapter
This chapter reminded me of when sanam used to
smirk but now she onlybsries anyways the update is quite funny
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Wynter




Hahah..Thank you..
Thats the way sanam calls him right.. AaahiLL
Man, that carries a lot of dardh within it..
And the way it goes up, down and again up..
I have no idea how he would feel, but thats a tune to my ears !! 😳

Yeah, i want sanam to be on fire... she'd look damn sexy when she tries to be possessive of her husband... 😉

And romantic aahil ke baare me bolne keliye kuch bhi nahi hai... !! 😊

and lolzz.. i meant it abrupt cause it ended with his eyes staring at her lips..
u can imagine what the next step could be right...😉 😛



Awww such a cute reply... 😳

Anu I agree with u... The way sanam calls Ahil I really cute... 😳

And yeah I have heard that when girls get angry they look very sexy it seems... 😆
Oye hoye!!! Ahil baba... Kya maqsat hai aapka...!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Wynter




Lolzz.. 😆
Those things are something which are not to be told.. 😉
They are just performed at the moment of action... !!!
You'll be knowing it when i post that part...
dunno when, maybe next to the next part? 😕




Arrey yaar... App logon Ki baton se mujhe yeh lag raha hai Ki Mein abhi ek choti bacchi hu 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Res...:):):)

Unres ...

Heyyy Anu... !!! Hows u??? ;)

How was ur Christmas celebrations???

I think I am too late this time.. Sorry for unresing it now... :|
Shall I start my reviews!!!
Before that,


Everyone's Life is just like a opened book,
Every second is just like a new word,
Every minute is just like a new sentence,
Every hour is just like a new page,
Every day is just like a new chapter,
Every month is just like a new book,
And every year is just like a new series!
May your book of life has less of drama,
Horror and tragedy, but a lot of humour,
Love, peace, prosperous and action
Happy New Year 2015! (advance wishes)

Let me start now..:D

Yeh title mujhe kuch ajeeb Sa lag raha hai... Hmm let me find out what it is..!!!

Sanam's POV:

Lol.. What's wrong with Sanam.. After effects!!!
(Anu yaar.. Her lips dried matlab she wants to kiss right!! Mujhe nahi pata tha Ki yeh sab after effects hai.. )

Lol haya is very smart u know.. She is younger than Sanam but she still guides Sanam about all these things.

Yeh sanam ka tabyat toh teek hai na.. Y she wishes to go to heaven now itself.. Ammi abbu se milney ka ithni jaldi kyun? Urghhh!!!

Ahil's POV:

Oye hoye.. Ahil miya toh inn sab baaton Mein kaafi sensitive hai. He can almost detect what's going on in sanam's mind.

Arrey Ahil baba, don't worry, she'll not slap u, ek baar try toh karo aap. ;)
Anu.. Ur awesome yaar.. U never forget to include that "trust me" word in ur updates... And whenever I read that, it obviously reminds me of Ahil.. Hayee his way of saying that word is different..!!!

Rofl.. Audience!!!!!! Anu this was superbbb yaar... Lol

Sanam's POV:

Haha.. Sanam.. Ur an amazing girl.. Pehle ahil ne tumhe jealous karvaaya, aur abh tu usse pareshaan kar rahi hai.. Lol.

Omg!!! The way u described ahil's posture was lovely.. I mean I imagine him in that way, hayeee I'll fall off to the floor blushing..

Ahil and his killer looks!!! <3 love u ahil...

Awww... This was such a cuteee update.. But it was short indeed.. I love to read lengthy updates yaar Anu.. Next time se plz lengthy updates likhna yaar...

Awww Anu.. Ur so sweet!!! <3
And that was not lame!!! Urghhh... 😡

Love u Anu 🤗
Edited by .Muskhaan. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
I was keep laughing until this chapter finished...😆
Now my stomach is painful...😃
Nice update..actually cute update...Aahil was scared he will get a slap if he tried again...🤣
Do pm me the next update...😳

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