5/1 Part 7: Go easy on the brain !! Pg 16, Choomantar, A Sahil ff - Page 7

Originally posted by: fanraya

So lovely, romantic Aahil, looking forward to the next one..please do update soon..

Thank youu... 😊

wonderful update...

Originally posted by: heena24

Lovely update

Loved the jealous sanam too much

But I doubt an aeroplane is a good place

to do all those things😳

Waiting to see what happens next

Update soon

Awesome loved thechapters miss cliffy

Originally posted by: Santee

Enjoyed reading it, please update soon.😛

for sure 😊

Originally posted by: rakshaanra

Haha, you haven't seen what most people do on flights, not that I watched😆but so obvious man

Lolzz... 😆
You serious about that ?!!
so far i felt aeroplanes are the only transport modes where people dont do all those..
everything else's taken.. cars, trains, cabs.. 😉 😲

Originally posted by: ashiii333

wonderful update...

loved it...

thnxxx for pm...

cont soon...

do pm me...

Thank youu, you're welcum and for sure !!! 😉

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Awesome loved thechapters miss cliffy

roflzz.. Miss cliffy?!! 😆
Well, there needs to be a balance right..
one shouldn't get too many good things in a day.. 😛
suspense is good for health !! 😉

Res... :D

Unres...:D

Heyyy Anu... I am back to unres this post :D
Let me start now...:D

Part A.

Ohooo... Ahil baba is nervous!!!!

Anu I really liked this line alot yaar- "The way she stretched on the A, dropped the HI and again emphasised the L .. It was like a tune to my tears.."- its kind of funny... But its lovely...<3<3

Ahil's POV is really good.. The way he sees sanam, the way he describes her beauty... Hayeee lovely... Credits to u Anu:)

Oye hoye!!!! Sanam is jealous... ;)

Anu next part- ahil's pov as well as sanam's Pov... Kya likha hai tumne yaar, though it is short, it is wonderful... Too romantic... Hayeee *blush*

Part B.

Sanam... Lol... She is really really jealous!!!! :)
I can almost visualize Ahil's expressions, smirking... :) awww his looks<3
Lol... Sanam mumbling.. I love that...

Yeh sanam KO achanak kya Hua uhhh... Y shez caring so much fo that girl uhhh...
Ahil baba- thank god u admitted that u r not interested in anyone (except ur princess sanam...<3), all this was just to make sanam feel jealous... Lol..

Anu.. This was not at all abrupt... I enjoyed it fully dear... Thanks for ur pm dear... I really appreciate ur work...

Will be waiting for ur next update...
Lots of love
- Sush:)

Anu... Unred on this page itself...:)