5/1 Part 7: Go easy on the brain !! Pg 16, Choomantar, A Sahil ff

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii guys.. This is gonna be my first sahil ff. since now that there's sahil seperation going on.. I miss them.. so its my attempt to bring back those old days.. where the fights were filled with love.. And for the title i didn't have to think much.. Its based on their best ever song.. choomantar, though this story has nothing to do with it.. I've decided on this title cause whenever they look at each other theres that pull that makes them lost in each others eyes.
So Thats for the start.. And this story, it takes place after khaala khalu inform wakil saab (lawyer) about sanam and aahils fake nikha, wakil saab confronting them, aahil expressing all his love only to mask it yet again.

Part 1: billo raani bangaya cupid !!

Tanveer roams around the hall frustrated. She thinks "Now, aisa kaun hai jis ne ab wakil saab ko pata ya yee sab" (who's the one who said all this to lawyer) Thinking about it, she moves frantically around the hall and gets hit by a table. The very moment a pair of hands catch her shoulder and prevent her from falling down, straighten her up providing support to her. The eyes of her protector, looks at her with concern.. "Ammi, Aap teek hai ky-aan.. Aap is wakt aisee.." The voice is interrupted by tanveer..She manages herself and walks over to the sofa set beside her table with Aahil by her side.. "Haa Aahil beta.. Mei teek hai.. Im just worrying about you"
Aahil (surprised) : Mere baare me.. Ammmiii
Tanveer : Haa Aahil beta.. Saying it she puts a hand on aahils head and tells.. I know that this nikha is a hard thing for you but you have done it for me..for the word you have given to your ammi.. for the sake of our family.. But i feel despite all that you've said the wakil saab doesn't look satisfied. And i also think there's someone within our family who's informing wakil saab about yours and sanams relationship."
Aahil looks confused
but Ammi who could that be..
Tanveer : Listen, there are many people outside who want to get their hands laid on nawab saabs property.They shall try to take advantage of any small situation
Aahil: Ammi, there shall be nothing like that.. I'll handle the situation.
Tanveer: I know your capabilities but you should never underestimate others capabilities too.
Aahil doesn't speak anything. He just sits silently..
Tanveer: Aahil beta.. What happened.. If you don't want the property we can leave.. but just think.. Cant you adjust 3 months of your life for all of us.. Anyways its fine. I just asked you cause I've spent all my life in the prison for..
Aahil : Ammi, please. I didn't mean that. Fine, I'll do what ever you want but nows not the time. Sleep first. We can discuss it tomorrow over break fast and your decision shall be final. but you have to go and sleep now.
Tanveer leaves with a small smile lightening on her face.
Aahil walks up tired of the day.. He opens his door casually to find sanam sleeping on one side of his bed.. He takes a glance at her, a moment longer than the usual normal and finds her turning around by the sudden light disturbing her sleep. He closes the door back by his remote and goes to change. He returns back and gets into his side of the bed not before looking at sanam again.. "such a beautiful, innocent face" he thinks. He looses himself in all those tiny strands of her hair falling on her face. Another creak from his bed disturbs him.. he lies down on his side recognizing that this bed's accustomed only to a single person on it.. He snickers on that very thought and then pushes those images away of the bed creaking and creaking under their weights.. "Never with this woman" he murmurs as he remembers rehaan "Strange is the fate.. It takes few things away only to give them to snatch them yet again" he wonders and dozes off into sleep.


Next day

Beams of sunlight fall into the room through the gaps in between the curtains..Sanam wakes up with a start and looks at the time.. Its 6 already and she sits up. She looks around the room and finds Aahil crouched up in the other side of the bed. She couldn't hesitate but smile. " If only he could be such cute always" she wonders and stashes her thoughts away thinking as to why she is even thinking that way. She gets up murmuring.. The only fact in this false marriage is that there's none!! She gets up from the bed and walks over to the door and stops a footstep behind it "Damn, This remote" she utters under her breath. She looks across the room for it frowning. And there it is, she sighs as she finds it by his head and walks towards it. She takes a breath as she walks by his side of the bed.. giving herself mental strength.. " Listen Sanam, just take the remote and get away.. Whats the big deal in this.. You can't be afraid of every single thing now" she tells herself. Just as if the lord has listened to her prayers and mocking her more.. Aahil turns face ahead. The bedsheet moves down under his movement revealing his bare chest.
Sanam stops there the very moment and gasps. "Alla Mia, pehgaya panga.. I've slept this whole night beside this guy who doesnt even have a shirt on him" She turns away cursing herself " Now what do i do?? There's no other option. He's sleeping.. You take the remote and go away. Done.. simple as that. Yaa Allah..If only it could be simple as that she wonders and walks ahead towards him. She tries to focus on the remote and stretches her hand to reach the remote.

Hmm.. Soo that's it for the day guys. heheh.. There shall be some sweet and hot scenes ahead. And then its breakfast time!! Thanks for reading and please please post your comments good or bad. This is my first os and your comments can help me improve. The coming up plots are sure to get excited and yes, there'll be less of tanveer. so no worries

Thanks again. please give your reviews and ideas.

INDEX :
Part 1: billo raani ban gaya cupid ... above

Part 2: Games of destiny..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4200678&TPN=2

3: Ajeeb Dastaan hai yeh..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4200678&PID=116466569&#p116466569
4A and 4B: Kaise Bataayein
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4200678&TPN=5

5A and 5B : Breaking the Ice and Beyond !!http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4200678&TPN=9

6 : It's this way, honey..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4200678&TPN=12

Part 7A, B and C : Go easy on the brain..http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4200678&TPN=16
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ouh la la this sounds great

Really excited for the next part

I'm surprised this is your first writing, it's really good, great job!

Love remembering them at this time
And ahil sleeping topless uff uff Sanam's reactions too cute

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing!!! Poor sanam, she is going to have a tough time taking the remote.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey i really enjoyed it...
missing saahil these days...
thnxxx for bringing it...
do cont and pm me plzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all.. I'm back with part 2..
Yeah.. I know.. It was quite a time since the last part (the only part eh??!! Anyways I'm back now and shall equally focus on this one too.. I just finished updating my another os yesterday and now on this today..

Part 2 : We all are players in the games of destiny..

Sanam approached Aahil, fear enveloping her mind.. Her mind played games with the bare torso, right infront of her eyes, despite the number of times she controlled herself.. She held out her hand, gave a help me Allah look and bent over to take the remote..
And with great tactility she did pick the remote back smiling to herself.. "Yee dekh, hui naa baat.." She thought closing her eyes hugging the remote gently as if she has just done an achievement.. Yep.. It indeed is !! She just managed to take away the remote without stirring the Jallad jinn awake.. "Thank you Allah.. At least not a bad start for the day.." She spoke to herself, little knowing that her day had not yet started and Allah has more things for her !!
She held to the remote and barely walked a few steps when.. she felt something else.. Her expression changed into horror as she saw her duppatta entangle in his bracelet and fall down.. "Alla mia, peh gaya panga.. Looks like my day never starts without Jallad Jinns taunts.. Well, serves me right for being his wife !!" She uttered satirically bending to untangle her dupatta.. Very gently she tried to remove it but the more careful she tried to be, the more her fingers trembled and the more she touched him.. The gentle was probably not enough...for Aahil Raza Ibrahim stirred around, much to the shock of Sanam, she just let the remote fall flat on his tummy.. She closed her eyes instantaneously hoping it wouldn't wake him up.. but wake, he did.. She watched his reaction through the corner of her eye as he put his hand (the other one) against the sunlight in an attempt to get some more sleep.. And eyes semi open like a child, refusing to wake up early and go to school.. And right then he began turning himself totally unaware of the situation.. The remote fell towards the other side of him under his turns.. But it wasn't the remote bothering Sanam anymore.. Her instantaneous reaction was to get that damn duppatta out.. She screamed out a little sigh as he stretched his hand entangling it more in the process.. thereby bringing Aahil into his senses.. "Tum?? Tum yaaha kya kar rahe ho?" He demanded seeing Sanam kneel beside him.. "Don't you just have any other business rather than messing up with me?" he spoke, much to the shock of Sanam
"Mujhe bhi aapke paas rehna ka koi shouk nahi hai.. "She spoke back with an equal amount of frustration.. "I.. I just am here to take the remote and ... " her voice trailed off as she recognized how she was.. Her instantaneous reflex was to shield herself.. She crossed her arms as she realized that her dupatta just fell down and tilted her head away shutting her eyes as close as she could.. Aahil realized the situation and stood up, still fascinated by the way she reacted.. His eyes searching for what was soo fascinating in her.. He stepped towards her as she kept backing away inch by inch.. till there were no more inches left and all what was left was the wall behind and Aahil Raza Ibrahim infront of her.. She opened her eyes gently to meet his burning gaze.. Tears rolled up her eyes as Aahil knealt towards her, his eyes forcing her to see into his.. See what he wanted her to see really.. To see what the words couldn't express.. He saw her eyes swell up.. "Ofcourse they would.. She should be having all these moments with Rehaan miya.. And what am I.. Just a person whom she sought after for a nikha to make some money for god knows what.. Perhaps to secure her life with Rehaan after this brief stint.. " he removed the Dupatta with a force and draped it against her.. Briefly touching her back. Sanam closed her eyes at the touch.. She opened them again to find him already gone.. The remote now on the table..
Tears rolled down her cheek and she suddenly felt her legs go weak.. She knelt down at the very spot weeping some silent mourns.. Little did she know that from behind the door, Aahil was seeing her cry and littler did she know that there was also another visitor witnessing it.. Rehaan !! Aahil felt bad for a minute but when he saw Rehaan staring at Sanam with that Devdaas look.. He walked away with a huff...

Scene 2:

"Bhai Jaan.. Aap teek hai na? You look upset.." enquired Nazia
"Yes, Bro Jaan? Is every thing alright between you and Sanam?" asked Shazia
Nothing's alright.. He wanted this to happen.. But never this way seizing what had to be someone else's property.. He thought
Upon another series of questions posed by Shazia and Nazia.. Aahil finally spoke..
"Yeah.. Everythings fine Shazia Nazia.. Its just you know the world changes after marriage.. I'm just in the process of adapting to it" he lied blatantly..
Yeah !!! Right.. I need to adapt myself now.. To see my wife giving all those i miss you looks to Rehaan! Darn f***ing shit he spoke to himself..
Sanam just reached the hall and heard over the conversation.. She was about to leave as if nothing had happened just when Shazia saw her and called out..
Yes.. Shazia is no more angry with sanam.. Now that she is her bhais wife !! She let go all the problems they had in the past..
"Sanam bhabhi.. When did you come..? Bhai was just speaking about you" Sanam hesitated and Nazia signed Shazia that she must have come searching for Aahil and signalled that it's time for them to leave
"Its okay Sanam.. I and shazia have a little work.. Will catch you both laters" Nazia spoke smiling at her as she dragged shazia out.
"Have fun guys!!" Shazia shouted stifling a laugh as she walked out..
Sanam and Aahil looked at each other with shock at those last words of Shazia..
"Shaziaa.. Unbelievable!!" Aahil said, shaking his head
Fun ofcourse was the last thing they could think of at the moment..
Aahil looked at Sanam.. And walked past her out of the hall..
Sanam closed her eyes.. She misses Haya and Badi Ammi more now.. She finally made it into the kitchen to check the days preparations..

Scene 3: Breakfast :

The whole family assembled for breakfast.. There was Tanveer in the centre followed by Aahil to her immediate Right and Rehaan to her left..
Khala and khalu were seated in the far off right looking at all the dishes infront eagerly ready to gobble all of those given the chance.. Shazia and nazia were beside Rehaan having their own conversation.. Azhar and Asma were infront of Khala Khalu lost in their own little world..
Sanam entered the hall carrying some more dishes along with lateef..
"Begum sahiba wo aa gaayi" spoke Khala..
"Khana " replied Khalu..
"Khaana.. Heehheh.. Khaana tho aayi hai.. Mei wo ke baare me bol raha hoon.. Woo joo woo aap bole hai na.. Woo sab leeke aarahi hain"
"Saanam" spoke out Khalu..
The rest of the house by now were tired of khala khalus nonsense..
But today the last word they uttered made 3 people look up.. Aahil, Tanveer and Rehaan as they watched Sanam walk towards the dining table and serve each dish (ofcourse excluding Tanveer in this case 😉 )
"Sanam beta.. Sit down.." She said catching sanams hand as sanam was about to serve her.. Sanam nodded and sat beside Aahil looking into her plate. Aahil noticed Rehaan and Sanam exchange a small nod and shouted at khala khalu instead to behave themselves..
"Aahil beta.. "Tanveer said searching for Aahils hand.. Aahil extended his hand.. She put some sealed envelopes in Aahils hand.. "Ammii.. Ye kya hai" asked a surprised Aahil
"What else.. Your honeymoon tickets !! To Maldives "
Sanam almost spit her food but managed herself
"Woot.." Shouted shazia nazia..
"Ammi.. Ab uski kya zaroorat hai?" enquired Aahil
"Zaroorat?? Aahil beta.. You shouldn't speak like this.. Sanam beta.. Aapko yee teek hai naa.."
"Jii begum sahibaa.. Woo" spoke a shocked Sanam
Rehaan looked at the whole situation with looks of horror
"Jii..woo.. Aisa kuch nahi.. Aahil aap aur Sanam kal Maldives jaayengi.." tanveer spoke out
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aahil looked at Sanam who was already looking af him with a shocked face
"Ammi.. Tomorrow??" Aahil let out a weak sigh
"Haa.. Tomorrow and you better get yourselves packed.. I booked a honeymoon suite in our Maldives hotel.. So go prepare yourselves.. " Tanveer spoke and left from there..
"Look at Bhai Jaans face.. Hes already tensed" mocked Shazia followed by a chuckle from Nazia
"Mai toh hui chui muyi.. Arree sanam.. I'd have danced if i get such an opportunity" Lateef grinned
The whole crowd dispersed slowly Aahil first, followed by Nazia shazia, lateef, leaving Rehaan, Sanam and khala khalu..
Aahil watched Rehaan staring at Sanam and sanam looking down into her plate obviously not eating it.. Aahil tightened his fist, shaked his head and walked away.. Rehaan too retired from the area heads low.. Khala and khalu had nothing left to eat.. So they resigned out.. Sanam was the only one left sitting there still playing with her food!!
From a distance Shazia Nazia and Asma noticed this and they gave each other a silent nod..

End of part two !!
Hope you guys like it.. The next part has many more interesting things and a turn of events.. And motivate me by your likes and comments..



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for updating !
Very nicely written
Hope the misunderstanding ends soon
Ahil and sanam going for honeymoon that too Maldives😳
Hope to read a romantic update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for writing this.
This is nice. Exactly,like how i thought their story would progress post marriage,with Ahil's family around.
Good to read in your writing.👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran_singh_24

Thanks for writing this.
This is nice. Exactly,like how i thought their story would progress post marriage,with Ahil's family around.
Good to read in your writing.👍🏼

Yeah.. i hoped back then that the story would go this way too.. but there were rumors that qh's gonna end soon and their sequences... i don't know if it was intentional but i felt them all rushed up.. And a sudden reduction of characters.. to cut down costs.. Thank goodness, writing doesn't have to deal with all those financial issues !!! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting and awesome update
Loved it.
Thanks for updating

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