5/1 Part 7: Go easy on the brain !! Pg 16, Choomantar, A Sahil ff - Page 5

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Btw.. I didn't get ur name...:)

I'm Anusha.. 😊

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Exciting like where this is going

Ahil cute and hot and sweet yup thas him
Sanam sweet and naive thas her. I wished she was a little more confident in her looks but otherwise love her character

Mmm honeymoon here we go...
Thanks!

Thanks for ur review..
Actually wearing such a dress is kinda new for her.. so she was a bit shy when she had to face him.. Deny she might, still her heart beat fastens when she sees him.. and hence all the worries !!

I wanted her character to lighten up slowly cause all she did till now was argue with him.Her first normal conversation with him happened just now at the airport where her ammi and abbu proposed to each other.
And I thought that if they had to start living together facing each other all the time in their honeymoon.. why not start it from the airport..
Infact yeah, you were right... She was even tensed when he catches her hand in hand, partly because of the newly erupting feelings within her which she's trying to submerge yet somehow they make their way when he's nearer to her..and secondly, they're heading to their honeymoon.. and naturally even a normal couple would feel nervous.. her nervous-ness just hiked by a 200% when she realized that she's going to there, with ARI.. and wait.. hand in hand at that !! 😉

Its beautiful yaar, plz do continue fast...Loved it so much

Originally posted by: Wynter

woot.. i have to admit firstly that this was the lengthiest comment i received soo far over here..
And yeah.. thanks a lot for that..

Hahah.. Sanam.. she looks great enough..
And umm.. i was a little confused between shazia and nazia when i wrote it..
so nazia's the supposed to be evil one right?!!I guess i intermixed them there somehow.. but anyways they both are good noww..
Sanam's her bro's wifey and she accepts them.

And lolzz.. Even i love it when Aahil or KV for that fact, runs his hands through his hair.. 😆 😉
he looks darn sexy and i literally drool over that.

Thanks again for your comment dear.. <3

Anusha...
Can I call u Anu!!??? Plz plz plz... 😃

I think its naziya who plays an evil role...
And u deserve this... Yeh ithna bhi lengthy nahi hai...
Next time se aur bhi lengthy likhungi..
But don't forget to pm me okayyy... 😉

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Its beautiful yaar, plz do continue fast...Loved it so much

Thank youu loads.. 😊 😳
yeah will continue for sure..

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Anusha...
Can I call u Anu!!??? Plz plz plz... 😃

I think its naziya who plays an evil role...
And u deserve this... Yeh ithna bhi lengthy nahi hai...
Next time se aur bhi lengthy likhungi..
But don't forget to pm me okayyy... 😉

Hahah.. Anu's good.. Thats what my friends call me btw 😊 Yeah.. i remember it now.. Nazia's the evil twin.. Similar names naa.. i was confused.. seriously Next tym see aur bhi lengthy likhungi?? lolzz.. now i have to write my story even better then.. 😉 but jokes apart... next part's going to be more good as far as i framed it up in my mind... yeah and will defo pm you 😊

Originally posted by: Wynter

Hahah.. Anu's good.. Thats what my friends call me btw 😊Yeah.. i remember it now.. Nazia's the evil twin.. Similar names naa.. i was confused..seriously Next tym see aur bhi lengthy likhungi??lolzz.. now i have to write my story even better then.. 😉but jokes apart... next part's going to be more good as far as i framed it up in my mind...yeah and will defo pm you 😊

Anu.. I promise that it will lengthier than this post... 😉
Thanks... 😳

loved it. great job. please update soon.

Originally posted by: castlebones

loved it. great job. please update soon.

Thanks 😊 ..
will update it today .
Have to recheck it once...

Okay guys.. here it goes ..
Chapter 5.. Its titled break the ice.. cause i actually wanted to break the ice between both of them..
and i hope i succeeded in it..
Lolzz.. Things did go a bit far than just breaking the ice.. 😊
Fine.. you'll be reading it anyways and don't hesitate to tell me your reviews.
This comes in two parts too just like the 4th..
So, this is a long update too
(cause when i sit down to write.. i end up getting into mood and keep on righting.
The only difficult part is sitting down to write ..
hahah.. Yeah.. i know, I'm lazy !!)
And also I hope you'll like it just like you did with the last part.
And thanks again for all your likes and comments regarding the last part..
That was really sweet of you all.