SaHil AU SS- The Meeting - Chp 1-11! Completed!

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evedallas1

@evedallas1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

OMG HE PROPOSED ! SO Romantic !! I can't wait to see the preparations and all the rituals 😉 Thank you so much for this chapter I love it

PS: Seher game was a good attempt lol 😆 it failed but I like the way Aahil could make the difference btw the twins! ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE AND PHYSICAL ATTRACTION !😳

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

This part was just fabulous! Everything about it! The surprise proposal, the reaction by Sanam! The engraving! That was SO sweet! "Your only ARI!" Cute!

Also loved how Seher was super excited her sister is marrying a Nawab, and also how she tried to pretend to be Sanam. I sort of knew when Aahil came to the door that it was Seher not Sanam! (Just got the feeling!). The BEST part? When Aahil said "I know the women I slept with...Seher!" TOO good ARI!

As usual Foot in Mouth Seher said something totally naughty! Do you scream his WHOLE name in bed? Naughty girl! Lol. Just loved this part and cant wait for the conclusion! It's always sad when a story ends right? Even for the writer, not just the readers! I know how you feel! Looking forward to the conclusion!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Hey!!! Sorry I am so behind with all of these wonderful stories n updates! College is superbusy before finals lol But now I am caught up! My favorite line has to be "damn u Ibrahims" lol you know whats funny one of my bffs from high school recently got a ring on her finger (her bf proposed) n my reaction was exactly like Seher! I was literally reading this with my mouth open lol same reaction lol But I love the way their relationship is progressing. Its so beautiful n emotional! Aahil's unique style of proposing and how he is actually nervous about doing things right! Its really cute! I also liked the little confusion in the previous chapter over the twins and the convo between Rehan and Aahil. I have one in my SS too. I also loved how Aahil apologized n didn't want her to let go. This is another beautiful story after MTEJZH! You and MrDarcyFan are my favorite writers on the forum! I may not get to comment often but I read each update as soon as I can and try to remember everything to write in my comment. Unfortunately I forget lol cuz its so much good stuff to discuss! But awesome as usual and hope u write more SaHil stories after this! I know I'm greedy lol but thank u so much for writing n updating for us! These stories are the only SaHil we have now lol Cant wait to read the final part tho I will miss this story! Cant wait for u to write another and I am sure it will be just as awesome! I will def reread this entire story once its done!

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Ohhh loved it
As usual great update

I loved your creative proposal. So full of confidence mr Ibrahim :)

Thanks
Excited for next looong update but story coming to an end so little sad

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Love the pics on the first page
Thanks!

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ANNA

@ANNA90ALEX

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Omg !!!!!!! It's sooo beautifulll dear !!!!!

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kayathre_sahill

@kayathre_sahill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

awesome update... :) 😛😛

loved the way aahil proposed her...😃

i just miss them sooo much !!😭

thanks for the update !!😊

do pm me the next update !! 😳

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

awesome update...what a unique way of proposing from ARI...seher is too cute...😊

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Loved it 😳 Beautiful unique proposal..

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Mahhu darling!! Okay yes yes I know I know! I am sorry man for not being around this story! I know I was being a jerk, just like Aahil is gonna be for some days now 😆

Sorry man for drifting away again! Yeah you can lash all you want okay!

Its just that, I was not feeling like reading ya know? There is this thing with me, when I don't get good things in the show I can't enjoy the stories too! I read it for just the sake of reading. And so I din't wanna comment for the sake of commenting only, ya getting?

So from last 2 days I have this feeling like their magic is drawing me in and I am back to the stories, I was watching some old scenes and felt its still there in me! 😆

Sorry for rambling. Some good stories do that for me like I rambled yesterday on Mandy's story 😆

Okay fine enough! Coming to the piece finally.

I just read all the parts I have missed, I don't even know WHY I stopped reading in between! Ugh,. This is gorgeous man! Can you imagine I missed their hot night too?! 😆

Just caught up with all of that. The encounter, the constant push and pull, the feeling they have, the jealousy? Ah thats just so freaking awesome to read! And of course the last part when he slipped the ring! Awww, LOl Totally ARI-ish 😆 Almost like "sedhi baat no bakwaas" 😆

Loved the story man! I know the comment is more about my excuses and rambling than the actual comment for the piece 😕😆

So the next part is the last one?! Aw damn! Well its good to end it on a good note! So waiting! Love! <3