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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tamara27

Damn it! I res'd somewhere else. I finally read...

And OMFG! Dude... I have no words. Seriously speechless.
You're such a talent, you have no idea how much, do you?

Forget the story for a bit. The actual writing? I loved the repetitiveness of certain phrases - I love writing like this. It's poetry, baby! And yeah, what talent you have to possess to make a chapter about Begum Evil sound like poetry? The kind of talent you possess, beautiful!

More on the actual story tomorrow ;)

Love you!


thanks love!

i dont have as much as you guys think i have, it's all in the synonym option on Word bro 😆

haha, thanks- i wanted to make it a little poetic and kind of full of loss, because how the hell can one be so evil, without something pushing them that way?

love you too <3 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome dear...
Loved it a lottt
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

😆

Okay. I am feeling extremely funny about this, I don;t know why. When I started to write, I had this drive to write something "furious" but it turned out pretty lame I guess 😆
Please don't laugh at what I have written, specially the names I have given to them 😆
This piece has lots and lots of swearing! The best thing about it! 😛😆
I don't know HOW I ended up writing such shit, this is just ugh. Anyway, here's my piece of crap for you 😛

The Death Can Wait...

Now this looks like a job for me, so everybody just follow me,

'cause we needa li'l controversy,

'cause it feels so empty without me"

The bass in the stereo was blasting through the speakers of a sexy black Lamborghini Gallardo, cruising on a f**king high of 320 km/hr.

The headlights were flashing through the dark and narrow uphill quiet streets in the "rush hours" of late nights. The nitro oxides in the gears were turned on once again. The sporty machine was on fire, literally! The number plate at the back of the car, read a blurred-in-smoke A Raz - 909 as it zoomed through another lap.

A pair of black gloves with knuckles turning white, holding on to the steering for the dear life. The watch on his wrist was dying, it stopped showing time. Not that he cared about it! His sea-bluish glares were reflecting the navigation screen in front of him. "Wrong route" The navigator beeped and warned for the third time. A little smirk was all he gave.

His Gallardo was in the final lap." The radiators at the back were emitting fire. The alarm in the machine reached a red alert. "Carbonators damaged." The needles in the clock have stopped working. The car was suddenly filled with weird beeps and alarms all over. He can't lose now. He just CAN'T.

"F**kin' shit!" He cursed. The strong tanned muscled arms holding the steering were clenched all the way to his neck with a throbbing pulse. His perfect jawline tightened as the rage and rush took over him. Small beads of sweat started forming on his forehead, dripping through his temple, making their way down his jaw towards his neck, disappearing in his half bared tanned chest. "Damn! The f**ked up breaks! Ugh!" He was enraged. And he pulled up the last nitro in his ammunition as he crossed the last hurdle of the path.

A Royal Blue Bugatti Veyron Grand came crashing across him, swirling and twirling his Gallardo at a 360 degree spin pushing it down towards the edge. The car hit the rocks across the laps as he ejected himself out of the car, only to come rolling towards the end of the lap. "Son-of-a-..!" He muttered under his breath as he hit his chest hard on the road.

The Veyron rushed through another one km ahead, blowing out the smoke on his face. As he tried to get up, his blurry eyes saw the back plate as it read Sanz AK - 545. He groaned "Arggh! This ain't funny San!" He cursed as he saw the car drove ahead him.

A pair of big black eyes rolled at his declaration as her lips curved up in a sexy smile. She popped her head out of the window of that car and looked at him."f**kin' awesome!" She yelled, gloating in pride, as she winked at him.

She turned back her car and drove back towards the line where he was still lying, recovering and groaning from heavy blows. She put on the breaks as the car screeched to a halt just in front of his face.

Big black knee-high long boots started approaching him in slow motion, as he lay there beaten. A tight black short skirt covering her up to her mid thighs sexily hugging at her hips, showing off her gorgeous long legs. Her navy blue body hugging tank top fitted perfectly at all her curves. Her thick black hair mussed up with the wind blows.

He lay there on his stomach as he pushed himself up with his hands and looked at her. His sexy raven ruffled hair, ruggedly spiked up with small ends falling on his forehead. His penetrating big black eyes , hiding all possible rush inside him. His firm well crafted cheeks displayed some scratches and bruises. His sexily sculpted jaw with a two day old stubble tightening and relaxing at the same time. His delicious lips smiled a little as he wiped some blood off a gash at the corner of his lips.

He turned himself on his back and straightened up. Grabbing her arms he pulled her onto the standing position. She gasped as her flat palms hit his half naked tanned chest and rested there. He glided his arms around her waist and held her closely.

She grabbed his neck and traced a finger down his jawline towards his lips. He hissed at this painful pleasure. He grabbed her face from one hand and pushed her against the bonnet of her car behind her. She grabbed the collar of his jacket as her fingers dragged through his hair. They leaned into each other and kissed like no tomorrow.

Their hands were all over the place. They kissed, sucked and bit at each other mouths as the hunger for each got the better of them..The ruckus around them gave the way for the noises of their throaty moans and groans at each bite and lick.

His hand grabbed her waist squeezing it. She was panting as she pulled at his hair. Her one hand grabbed the back of his jacket pulling at it, her nails raking through it taking him, drinking him. His mouth left hers as he licked and sucked his way down to her cheek, neck, biting at her throat, earning himself a satisfied moan from her.

She yanked his head in her direction and bit at his neck. She turned him and pushed him towards the bonnet of the car leaning on to him. Her hands trailed down his smooth chest unzipping his black-ish sleeveless jacket further all the way down. She roamed her hands through his chest, his perfect abs, his belly button towards his perfect V. He shuddered at her touch, giving a loud grunt in pure need. He grabbed her hips and pushed her even more onto him, feeling her. She sucked at his throat, his strong shoulder blades, pushing the jacket off him.

They were panting and breathless and...burning. He grabbed her face and pulled in front of him. They stared into each other's eyes with an equal rage and rush.

They were breathing heavily. His hair ruffled, sexy as hell. Her hair mussed up and lips swollen. She whispered huskily staring into his eyes. "How's it..Boyfriend?" She smirked a little as she wiggled her eyebrows at him.

He stared into hers, eyes blazing and glazing in the heat of the moment. As he said in his sexy raspy voice "The best defeat ever..Girlfriend" She smiled at him as he pushed her down to the bonnet of the car for another kiss.

The death can wait...

Tada!! Here you go! Its about 1020 k words! I don't know how I wrote this long 😆

😆😉Whoopy...
Boyfriend..girlfriend...Hai... kissing like there's no tomorrow... wait there could have been no tomorrow😲
How hot it was and I don't mean the radiators in Lamborghini ...
The only things un-original was swearing...tee hee...Such hot pieces of Shit😆...these 2. I can swear too..
fast and furious does this to us. Isn't it?
And their number plates..O EMM GEE
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Posted: 10 years ago
Where are my Naughty Nine?

And who didn't read Octopussy's brilliant, poetic update?!
GO READ NOW!

Miss you all!

Let's bring this thread alive again 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Red one signing in... aye aye Red leader. ..

Wazzzaaa ...

I think Octopussy has been "petrified" by her own wand!

Still waiting for her next awesome installment! !
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read ya, Red One!
Woo hoo!

Sudsie baby... when you're free, we need to know what happens next, okay?
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Posted: 10 years ago
What does that make me?


Red 2?






Or simply RedHotChilliPepper?






Octopussy hurry home...hurry back to the manor. You've been summoned.




There's a demand for ya...





And really.





I need a part (b)!




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Posted: 10 years ago
OH LORDY LORD!!!! Words can honestly not describe how good it feels to be back right now, and really guilty as well. Guilty like leaving your child in child care for too long guilty, and I don't even have kids... But never the less I just wanted to say I missed all my ladies of the manor.
Farru you're a godsent for always keeping me updated and Suds, prags and alooo where the hekk are you guys... come back :(
Also you guys have written so many new fics I'm so excited to read them all. Which will be extremely soon hopefully once my insane need to watch series and eat pizza/junk food all day long stops consuming me and my time. 😆
Lets get this train going again beautiful people :*
*chooo-chooo* (I think that's the sound a train makes😆)
Much Love
xoxo
Edited by Dhanesh27 - 10 years ago
saruu. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
i'll be here in two minutes yo
saruu. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
the two minutes turned into twelve hours whoops
hey faruu

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