Beautiful Chaos Thread ll - Pt 6 (a), Pg 74 - Page 28

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

Juliet!!!

Waitinggg!!!

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

Tick Tock...Tick Tock!!!!

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

The BEST dialogues award goes to this story!!!!
"You seem hot and bothered sanam"
"If you kiss me I swear I'm sleeping"
"I've never done this before so does it have to rain before I tell you I love you"

Your story was sooo good

Ok now what do I reply here. I am short of words. Let me try😳

The fight btwn ahil and the guy -I could feel ahil asking for more beatings, poor guy!

Then sanam coming to do her nurse/wifely duties -he thought he was dreaming and then boom realised it was real. Reminded me of the feeding scene in the show but with firstaid box instead.

I had exactly that scene in my mind. The whole Aahil pushing the spoon away and Sanam retrying remains one of my very favorite ones till date. The whole expression of their eyes in that scene was dreamland-ish.

Then the huge change in their relationship -ouuuhhh finally I kept thinking

Wasn't it the same even in the show.😆

The whole movie rain watching by sanam twice while ahil watched -wow! That is adorable!!! Sanam's expressions and ahil sneakily watching her. I think I just love any scene where ahil is mezmerised by his sanam.

ME TOO! ME TOO!😆

Then the dialogues following like I said at the beginning gotta win the best dialogue award of all time
Thank you! Too big a compliment. I don't know where to hide my head, it getting so very big.😛

Only part I didn't like was the ending, sorry. Don't understand why you added the whole ahil going to places where he was supposedly with other women. I don't like when a guy does something so wrong like cheating but the wife forgives him because she can't control herself from loving him and worse is he knows it and takes advantage of that. Anyways I think ahil was just liking her being jealous and pretending but not cool there are other ways.

I like your hypothesis. Now, if you remember, Riddler hints, Rehan asks Aahil why you go to clubs hire girls, you don't even sleep with them. There is Sunehri who is being planted by Begam Sahiba somewhere, she is spotted by Rehan.

Then Analyzer narrated, Sanam was framed to be seeing a guy from the Support Group. there is evidence to say, Sanam was with this guy, implied by Begam Sahiba that Sanam is cheating on Aahil.

So I have just created grounds for the big reveal, Did Sanam cheat on Aahil, highly impossible. Did Aahil just give away his trust for a woman he passionately loves over an accusation made by his Ammi Aka Begam Sahiba. Come On! Aahil can't he that dumb now,or can he?

So he has been going to clubs, meeting girls. What do you think he is doing? Did you find out there is a doppelganger in town.

Trust Me, I can't wait to tell the next part.. I only hope No one hates me after that.😕🤢

Anyhoots back to your amazing amazing story and writing
Thanks!!!!


Ps all the pics that ppl are pairing with dialogues are sooo perfect

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

When I got a PM from Sage, I opened it intending to read the latest update! Never thought it would be THIS? Just loved it so much. So passionate, cheeky and sexy! Classic you Juliet. Loved it.

SAHIL famine is in, the only way we can have them is to write our own! :) Thanks for this. Yes it was long, but I couldnt stop reading it till I got to the end! Sexy Aahil. He is such a great seducer! :)

Originally posted by: ChamakChallo91

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!

Love the way you wrote!

Ahil and sanam are too hot!

Please continue soon !!!!!

Originally posted by: Tannakstar

HOLY SHIT THIS WAS BLOODY AMAZING!!

I don't know what i found hotter, the idea of Aahil fighting, or when you wrote this: "THAT STUBBLE"

I love stubble. It's so f**king sexy.

I really like how brave Sanam is. She's no shy flower, she just goes for it. What a lucky girl.

Looovvve it.

Tannu

Originally posted by: kyph21

i read all the 5 parts in one go.. all of you'll are great writers..love it all
sage thank you for the PM..
juliet... pls update soon.. loved it so much..

Alrght everyone. How are you guys? 🤗

Yaaay, for the awesome updates! 🥳

To Farz_Parachute: I have posted my comment on your beautiful and touching update, on page 25, in case you haven't seen it. 😳

To Juliet: I've unres my comment on page 35! It was beyond words! 👏

And.. To my lovely people here on this thread...

I need to pay a huge thank you to you all - wonderful writers - and specially those who came up with this brilliant idea of having this place to dominate. Damn straight this is our Adda!

I'm feeling so loss of words to express. 👏

Thank you so much guys! You all are so talented and wonderful.

I love you so much! <3 All of you. And I mean it from the bottom of my heart. ❤️

*Wipes a bundle of tears away from the eye - sniff sniff* and *Happy tears* 😳