Beautiful Chaos Thread ll - Pt 6 (a), Pg 74 - Page 29

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Aliya...

I am not updating till Thursday..😆

I need some more votes to post the next part.😛

Extremely greedy I am

Plus you must be bored I made you read such a long update.😲 Surely!

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Alrght everyone. How are you guys? 🤗

Yaaay, for the awesome updates! 🥳

To Farz_Parachute: I have posted my comment on your beautiful and touching update, on page 25, in case you haven't seen it. 😳

To Juliet: I've unres my comment on page 35! It was beyond words! 👏

And.. To my lovely people here on this thread...

I need to pay a huge thank you to you all - wonderful writers - and specially those who came up with this brilliant idea of having this place to dominate. Damn straight this is our Adda!

I'm feeling so loss of words to express. 👏

Thank you so much guys! You all are so talented and wonderful.

I love you so much! <3 All of you. And I mean it from the bottom of my heart. ❤️

*Wipes a bundle of tears away from the eye - sniff sniff* and *Happy tears* 😳

OH sniff* Sniff* same pinch. 🤗

Juliet... As nice as you were for the partial lengthy update, and as grateful as I was, I need a second dose please...

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Juliet... As nice as you were for thepartial lengthy update, and as grateful as I was, I need a second dose please...

I'm willing to offer you anything realistic in return 😊

Name your price

Haha!

Very good offer.
Sing some songs for me please. My play list sucks
Haha!
Tomorrow love. I have a late shift today.
Kal with some songs okay.

; p

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

What this?

OMG! OMG!

Originally posted by: mahwash22

UnRes!

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"If you plan on kissing, go for it, I swear I am sleeping."

I will come back to that later...😳

..I'm crying for some reason after having read the update. I don't know how to express just beautiful this was. It was so heartfelt! 👏

The emotions, the promise, the love was just so heart touching. I literally cannot get over this beautiful piece of writing. I know for a fact that I would never truly get over this - ever! I really mean it.

Well Juliet! You had be clinging to the phone AND laptop when I read the update THRICE, because I just couldn't put it away from me.

""AND YOU ARE HURTING ME! HOW DARE YOU?" He roared. Her lips quivering, her eyes wide with alarm."

- What even.. My mouth was wide open when I read this part.

"Aahil's lips cut, his own teeth suck into his inner cheeks, blood filled his mouth. "MORE! MORE! MORE!" his mind demanded."

- I absolutely loved this scene. It was filled with action and I could so feel his inner turmoil on wanting to be punished for what he did. Poor Aahil!

I was touched by the conversation between Aahil and Sanam when she came to patch him up after the fight. The words which you used were so apt.

I laughed out loud at the scene where they were watching the movie. Oh god, I could totally imagine Aahil behave like this.😆

"Aahil could not let this go." You okay there Sanam. You seem very hot and bothered." He snorted. Her jaw dropped, did he say that. She grabbed the same pillow flinging it at him running out of the room utterly crimson red. Aahil caught the pillow laughing harder. The best laugh he had in years."

"If you plan on kissing, go for it, I swear I am sleeping."

- God! I have no words to express just how beautiful this is. ❤️

AND that passionate night after they confessed! I'm turning crimson over here.

""MINE! Just mine! I love you Sanam!" He said before he captured her lips."

Juliet - my darling! You are something! So dear, so pure and so damn talented! I fell in love with this and I am so glad that I got a chance to red this.

I love you, Juliet! You are so utterly wonderful. 🤗❤️

Awww Love,

Ohhh.. This is super awesome... Loved it sooo sooo very muchhh.. Like seriously..
Thank Godd Aahil finally decided to come around.. So happy..
The pre separation days... Hmmm... So good... I feel that there is more to their separation than what Sanam sees.. I don't know what.. Really loving it... Awesomeness.. HA!
The next part needs to be sooner.. Please.

wow...

Wow that was superbly written