Beautiful Chaos Thread ll - Pt 6 (a), Pg 74 - Page 26

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Reserved :)

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"Completely Compromised " Haayeee

ME too Me too. Yes!!

Julieettt. What was that!! Fantastic update.

You lived upto your own standard and beyond.

Every scene, every part and every dialogue was impeccable.

Loved your take on Home. Amazing.

The confession was beautiful!! And what followed was breath taking.Haayeee again. Oh my gosh the beard burn thing was bloody hot.

Aww that film and rain scene and Sanam was damn cute.

Aahil the seducer... I am stumped. Wow. Wow and I wish.and dream...😆

You know how much I admire your story telling and its great. So I am eagerly waiting for next part. :)

This thread has been a great experience for a reader too with so many shades of story telling and twisting. Cheers to you guys:)

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Juliet !!

Juliet !!

This !!

OMFG!!

Originally posted by: sageflower7

" Sanam, I haven't done this before so I need you to tell me if I am not doing this right. Okay!" His voice was soft but a little nervous, his breath on her fae

Sanam nodded in a daze. "What is it?'

"Does it have to rain when I tell you that I love you."

Originally posted by: sara7iris

thank you for pm...beautiful and hot and superb update ...I love it ...the chemistry between ahil and sanam is very strong ahil knows sanam love him and she belongs only to him 😳 ...very nice ...also he will do anything to be with her again ❤️...I can't wait to read the next part ...pls update soon

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

Res ... :)... ... I shall read once I've completed stuffing my face with pizza

Unres

This. Was. So. Damn. Hawt!!!


BANG BANG she shot me down... I meant literally the Bang Bang sent me off the rails.
I started reading this yesterday morning and everytime it finish a paragraph I'd get interrupted
But eventually I finished


"Of course He did. I was his most favorite person in the whole wide world. I don't remember him much. But Badi Ammi tells me, and I feel it too." Sanam said charged wiping her tears, pulling his attention back to her, talking about her parents was her happy place always. "Did you know Abbu had six packs too. Just like you." Sanam blushed looking at Aahil from the corner of her eyes. Aahil couldn't help smile.


Juliet your writing is so amazing. That I actually read this six times no lie and I smiled/giggled/laughed at Sanam talking about his sex packs. Man that past scenevw of their uhm sexy time was just ... Yeah. It basically reminded me I shouldn't have stopped wearing purple haha.

Seriously I can't wait for part two. Aahil being all sexy sitting at the breakfast counter - take me now! Stubble and chest and oh my god. I think I should stop here and regroup before I lose it again 😆

Much love doll
Xx

Originally posted by: sageflower7

"If you plan on kissing, go for it, I swear I am sleeping."

Originally posted by: sageflower7

" Mrs Ibrahim, I am hopelessly compromised for life." He said with throaty sated mischief that churned her insides almost immediately. His finger playing on the outline of her bottom lips.

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Amazing

Thanks for pm