ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143 - Page 96

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Wowie ka zowie 😆
It was so much wonderful ypdate nd more
M in love with this one seriously
The way u write with those beautifully written lines
Nd then in between the dotted lineslines 👏
Truly appreciable
Nd I just love the song sequence
Enjoyed their convoconvo 😃
All in all it was keenly pennedpenned 😛

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Originally posted by: krati5

its raining in delhi too!! and on that this chai wali update... plus its weekend!!!!!!!!!!!! now i am twirling...😆

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Loved it.
Asya r falling for each other.
Hope they realise their feelings soon.
The rain sequence was lovely n serene.
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update aww asad ask her for dance love asya moments n rain sequence also continue soon😊

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

I am elated that you loved it..😳

Absolutely beautiful

Thank you so much

So love asya growing towards each other

Yeah! they are...soon will realise it

Their text they don't talk much but text at least anything

The text is romantic according to Zoya...coming in next part 😉

So learning slowly abt the other

Trust me they are...😆

Aww the feelings can't stop it glad he took her to his parents grave

He brought her lunch but didn't interrupt too much fun he didn't want to be the solemn one

But boy when he loosen up he sure does

Well I kinda changed his character !!

So the dinner omg the complement the man has a way with words

So he danced can't believe it he danced with her

Love the rain the chai the football game his personal cheerleader

Aww he twirled her

And they hugged each other and walked home

Great advice Zoya give him let it go

All the burdens forgive the past and move forward all has suffered

Will he take her advice he said he will try

He will follow it

Continue soon

will try...

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Very beautifully written.

I think this update will be the most favourite and i don't think even them confessing verbally will be as beautiful as this because somewhere unknowingly they have accepted each other.

Originally posted by: kaju27

loved this update...they are getting close nd realising it too...
loved their texts to each other...
rain part was amazing...especially the song...

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

MY CHILD IS BETTER THAN ME 🤣

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Now this chapter was serene

I loved the Rain scene

I could just imagine everything

❤️