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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#841

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Missing You,Friend.😭

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#842

Yes, this update was really worth it.

More later on

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#843

Worthwhile? This was cuddle balls amazing, update sooner than soon.

How are you doing?

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I'll reserve this for a befitting comment.

Edited by -SilverSparkle- - 10 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#844

Originally posted by: -SilverSparkle-
Worthwhile? This was cuddle balls amazing, update sooner than soon.

How are you doing?

she is busy ignoring ankie mama 😡 😆

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#845

OMG...after so long..dotted line sparks,...!!

lovely update..finnaly they are engagrd..

plz continue soon...

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#846

So nice to see u back

Plz don't leave us for so long

Love the update

Every bit of it

So asya engaged

And finally the first touch with both knowledge

First hug too wow

So they r feelings thing strange feelings new to them

Glad they share to each other

Aww she give her keys to him he can come whenever 😉😆

Wow she had his keys for the past 7 years

Aww she went and made his lunch so sweet

U look breathtaking I don't ever think in all the stories I read asad ever use those words

Love it

Can't wait for more

Glad of their thoughts and their growing feelings and they r sharing

Glad they r making an effort

And asad is willing to reach her all the way to make her happy

Continue soon

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

Originally posted by: azsumay
Finally you updated 😉

Amazing update 😃

I loved this story 👏

Asya finally got engaged 🥳

Every seen was perfect 👍🏼

Thanks for pm 😊

Lots of love to you too 🤗

Thank you so much...

Glad that you love it...

keep loving...Love you too 🤗

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman
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Wow it was awesome!
Loved it..
Asya are slowly inching toward eachother and love..
Hope they develop it with time more strongly..
Continue soon
thanks for pm

Hey Nayab,

thanks for your comment dear...

Glad you loved it...

Will try to update soon 😳

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: kaju27
they are discovering new feelings for each other...
bt are way too practical...
when will love story begin...
he didnt play guitar on her insistense too...

Love story is running ...don't you feel it?

Thank you so much

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#850

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hello Swapno..
Well how have you been...
I have read this part...and let me tell you this sincerely...I haven't felt this this satisfied with a update in so sooo many days...
This was Simple Yet BreathTaking ( Both AsYa* are in this )...Update was well written , Wonderful and Fantabulous..
AsYa's monologue at the starting.., their way for realising and finding the reason behind their decision , about the possibilities in future and the last part , it was all dreamy and Blissfull Swapno.
I just don't want to pinpoint any because every part about it was Best..and screaming perfection..
Loved Loved this part..and worth this wait.
Continue soon.

Hello Shello...

How are you? Hope well.

I am okay..busy with other stuffs...

Errmmm...thank you so much for the comment...

I am feeling ecstatic...

Glad at least one satisfied with it..

ha ha ha AsYa were breath taking...

Will try to update soon...

your comment made a proud smile on me...

Thank you again 😳