ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#821

flawless was the only word that came to my mind when i read this...
right from the beginning every emotions of asya were brilliantly written

last scene was out of the world! kudos to u...

continue soon

p.s- i am so happy...i thought u dropped this midway

p.s2 - i didn't get pm for the last update...really...

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#822

Hyyy swapno..
After a long tym huh !!!!?
How r u... Hp u r well...

Dat was so beautiful updt swapno..
More beautifully written..
Loved it so much...
Thy gt engaged nd thy r discovering new feelings fr echother..
But when ll love a try begin !!!

Continue soon

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#823

Hey Sadia 🤗
update is just Awesome...perfect on each level...
Asya's inner monologue...so beautifully written...
Zoya's state at the end...she was so happy but no one is there with her at that moment to share her feelings...& he is there...I like it when he said "No, it is not a dream this is as real as you and I"
& the way he said "Breathtaking"...loved it...
so beautifully written...& it give me a strange feeling of happiness...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#824

Awesome..
Amazing..
It is really worth waiting...
U portrayed emotions beautifully..
Thanx...
Plz update soon

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#825

Brilliant updt Sadia👏👏

I enjoyed it very much😃

So preparations were in full swing

Ayaan was handling it

seeing Ayra romancing some thoughts came in Zoe's mind😉

Loved how she takes care of Asad went KV 2 make Sandwiches 4 him how cute

their short msgs wala scene was lovely😛

finally Asya got engaged yippee🥳

Liked d tiny winy details u mentioned which Asad noticed in her look😳

He was absolutely mesmerised & couldn't hide it this time😃

she gave him her home's keys oye hoye & I liked d double meaning which Asad thought😉 it was so hilarious😆😆

I loved d last part when he came back & she said her hearts feelings widout hesitation & their hug❤️

It was fantastic👏👏

hope u'll b consistent this time 2 updt on time😳

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#826

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#827

That was a really beautiful update! 😳

You just portrayed everything so well.

Their feelings, their emotions were penned beautifully!! .

Continue soon.. Thanks for the PM..

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#828

wonderful part

finally asya got engaged

asya feelings and their emotional turmoil

amazing moments of asya

excited for next part

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#829

Itne muddaton baad update aaya!!!!!!

Beautiful update Di...

AsYa ...

inki love story kab shuru hogi?!!!!

Pljjj jaldi karo

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#830

well written update

loved it

i like the ending part

asya hug

thanks for pm

update soon

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