ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143 - Page 87

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Hey Sadia 🤗
Hey Dipty 🤗

How are you?

update is just Awesome...perfect on each level...
Aah thank you so much...you are always kind for me

Asya's inner monologue...so beautifully written...
well wanted to give a detailed insight of their thought..glad you liked it

Zoya's state at the end...she was so happy but no one is there with her at that moment to share her feelings...& he is there...I like it when he said "No, it is not a dream this is as real as you and I"

This is a special part I write with thoughts..yes maybe she has no one from her childhood but she always feel the gaps. Sorrow and happiness both needed to share, otherwise it will be worthless. And without him actually she has no one to call her own. Ans as for Asad, he is taking steps to what he promised himself.
& the way he said "Breathtaking"...loved it...

I kinda love use different words to define Asad's emotion for Zoya..because I want to avoid usual words used to describe his feeling..like divine or something 😉
so beautifully written...& it give me a strange feeling of happiness...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊

Glad you loved it this much...and you became happy and it made me happy...

Will try to update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Haa...that is also fine Swapno...catch up all you want...because You need little bit of a relax time also...that will be kind of a little good for your Busy MInd shayad..
Will wait fo the Next part..

Originally posted by: ayeshalove

Awesome update

Originally posted by: sasir

Awesome..
Amazing..
It is really worth waiting...
U portrayed emotions beautifully..
Thanx...
Plz update soon

Originally posted by: jas91

Brilliant updt Sadia👏👏

I enjoyed it very much😃

So preparations were in full swing

Ayaan was handling it

seeing Ayra romancing some thoughts came in Zoe's mind😉

Loved how she takes care of Asad went KV 2 make Sandwiches 4 him how cute

their short msgs wala scene was lovely😛

finally Asya got engaged yippee🥳

Liked d tiny winy details u mentioned which Asad noticed in her look😳

He was absolutely mesmerised & couldn't hide it this time😃

she gave him her home's keys oye hoye & I liked d double meaning which Asad thought😉 it was so hilarious😆😆

I loved d last part when he came back & she said her hearts feelings widout hesitation & their hug❤️

It was fantastic👏👏

hope u'll b consistent this time 2 updt on time😳

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

Originally posted by: Avie

That was a really beautiful update! 😳

You just portrayed everything so well.

Their feelings, their emotions were penned beautifully!! .

Continue soon.. Thanks for the PM..

Originally posted by: nilusoni

wonderful part

finally asya got engaged

asya feelings and their emotional turmoil

amazing moments of asya

excited for next part

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: Persiko

Itne muddaton baad update aaya!!!!!!

Beautiful update Di...

AsYa ...

inki love story kab shuru hogi?!!!!

Pljjj jaldi karo

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

she is busy ignoring ankie mama 😡 😆