Th#12 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Completed

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

brilliant...very well written..👍🏼

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Awesome epilogue

At perfect ending 👏

It was totally a very brilliant story and I must agree on the last statement that Zoya was a not a VICTIM but a SURVIVOR !!!

Wishing to see another beautiful story on AsYa from u again till then will wait!

Thanks for the pm😉

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

prefect nding lovd d twins.. lol suprb... nd u bettr strt new story haan Lov u sooo much... ua ma fav fabolius writer honey.. ;)

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

I so knew that the previous chapter wasnt the last update !!! 😆
But this was just sooo sooo sooo sweet to read !! ❤️
Loved Ahad's lines copied from Asad's !! 🤣 🤣
AsYa r just soo cute !! ❤️
Elwad moment was just hilarious with Asad wanting to kill him and Ahad's cuteness has no end !!!
Ahad was really super cute as the protective bro ! I so loved the way he innpcently said that he had told the boy that he would punch him !!! 😆 and Asad ready to teach him how to make it sound like a threat !! 🤣
Loved their small moment together !!! I simply loved their cuteness together !!! ❤️
LOVED THE UPDATE !! ❤️

PS: i just realized thar i didnt even talked about Nisha ! 😆

Love u Bubble sis !!! 🤗 ❤️

PSS : waiting for ur next FF !! 😉

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

res

unres ...

amazing epilogue bubble ..

BUBBLE aakhir kaar u ended this story 😭😭

oh my babies r blessed wth twins ..i love twins..

zoya ne electrical engineering kiya ..👏 im so proud of her ..

finally nishas wedding ..asad miya want 2 romance his begum ..bt bt so many kabab me haddis 😆

oh my god... ahad is damn cute compared 2 his dad ..his protective nature ..n uski german language i want 2 kiss him bass 😳😆...loved asad possessive nature

ok i vl quote my fav parts .. 😉

"Jusht one Ami." The boy pouted and Zoya sighed annoyingly. "Ich liebe dich schon."..aww hes a cutiepie..i want 2 kidnap him 😳😆 hez so like his dad..my AAK 😳

Hey Princess !"
"Wo bist du gewesen ? Ich habe dich vermissht." Ayat asked innocently as she wrapped her arms around Asad's neck. ...hahaha ...they r so adorable

I told him to shtay away from my shister."😆😆😆

Ayat all this while was busy eating and spoiling her dress with chocolate. ' 🤣🤣BUBBLE only u can write like this 😳

"Are you sleeping ?" She asked sweetly.
"No, I am skydiving." 🤣🤣
finally asad won challenge ☺️
She wasn't shy or fearful anymore. She had let go her past long time back because she wasn't a VICTIM anymore but a SURVIVOR 👏👏

the whole cute banter of the most cutest family is so adorable ..

little nawab n princess r damn cute just like u bubble ... .only u can write such a cute epilogue ..ur most d most cutest writer..bubble im gonna miss being here

thanq fr this wonderful story ..pls do write more on ASYA

till then ich liebe dich

Edited by Amulya9 - 10 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

congratulations fr d new thread bubble ..some gifs fr u ..from my side 😉

Edited by Amulya9 - 10 years ago

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annanya

@annanyaksgian

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

wooow lovely asyalicious update

loved it so so much

ayat and ahad lovely

and i love asad possessive abbu nature

i guess i learned so many german words from this story😊

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Congrats for new thread
wonderful and very sweet update
asya and their twins are very cute
thanx for pm
i m gonna miss this story
plz come up with new story soon

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

U wrote a epilogue :D
It was perfect
i love how long it was

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Aishwarya

@pumpkin.honey

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

I literally jumped in ecstacy when I got ur msg dat u wrote an epilogue.. thanks a tonne fr dis 🤗
Well did anyone ever told u.. U r 1 finest example of a desirable writer 👍🏼
coming to my most fav part...
Wow I exactly wanted an epilogue lyk dis vid asya's cute lil n deffo naughty type kids
Its totally true.. Lyk father lyk son.. he too very well know how to complement her mum in German
I loved ahad's dress a way too much.. D bow style
Hmm so its nisha's wedding.. happy fr her n its nice dat u pictured her in dis epilogue afterall shz d most imp person in zoya's lyf
Aww so our nawab khan is an over protective n possessive father too.. gud gud
I seriously found d father son convo on ayat's safety d best 1 n most enjoyable n adorable too...

Well lemme tell u these ahad n ayat names r pretty cute
Oopes asya romancing in between d ongoing function... Nt bad!! Haha d way she use to blow air on his face when he tries to kiss her is js superb 😛
So d crowd is stealing glances on them.. Poor asad
They r 1 suave couple.. js love dem
M so happy vid d fact dat finally zoya stopped brooding over her past
She deserves to b happy n b vid d ppl which she can finally call her own
Its so true.. Shz really not a VICTIM anymore bt a SURVIVOR 👍🏼
I have fallen in love vid dis story all over again after getting such a perfect epilogue ❤️
N yeah it was a long one which I enjoyed a way too much 🤗
N now m waiting fr d NEXT... 😳