Th#12 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Completed

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Awesome epilogue
Perfect ending
Asya with their twin kids. Possessive ahad & cute ayat
Zoya is really a survivor.
Waiting for new story soon
Thanks for pm

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

Fluffy, feathery and fuzzy! *sigh*

AsYa's babies - Ahad and Ayat - such beautiful names! [Never get tired off them]

This was a perfect end to an exceptional story. Despite AsYa's contrasting personalities the little moments with their children were really very charming and fluffy. You wrote those children so damn adorably, their parents were far off either [So would you consider writing another fiction in which they are parents? 😳]. Brazen Asad's very captivating, the romance was a wonderful balance.

This was really an amazing fiction with a social message beyond the fairy tale end. Three cheers! 👏 👏 👏

Until next time!

❤️

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Hi...Bubble first of all thanku for the P.M...since afternoon only i was thinking of asking you about your future works...and you updated this epilogue...well what can we say about this update...i have to read it 2 times to get and absorb all the happiness and cuteness this update had offered...i adore you for your writing skills...starting from nisha...well she is is getting married ...good for her...Asad getting jealous of her was obvious..but he should respect and grateful to nisha...that if not for her courageous attempt..zoya would be still rottened in that hell...now coming back to their twins...they are way more than adorable ...Ahad like his father...is smart, intelligent...and knows when to use german also...hahahah...and Ayat she is her daddy's princess...and so like her mother...messy and dramatic...the whole kids and asya scene was good...and coming towards the HEART of the story ASAD/ZOYA because you considered the plot as the hero of this story...well what can i say about this couple...liked how zoya has transformed herself into a good working and smart business woman and Asad was also her pillar of support..all the time...she got over her fear...and is living a beautiful...life...ASAD this man amazes me...by being overprotective for his daughter...being proud of Ahad's antics..being jealous..of nisha...still blessing her...and lovinG Zoya ...all he does makes him stand out from all the other ASAD'S in your work, i think like that ...this update ended with a beautiful scene at the end...like that too...thanx again for all of this...and Plz...continue soon with other works of yours...will be waiting .. :-P

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Neeluaaro2009

@Neeluaaro2009

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Was Avery good read. Loved all of it. Do continue soon with something new. Will be eagerly waiting for it.

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

amazing update loved it

please do continue writing soon

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tashie

@tashie

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Lovely surprise. I have been dealing with withdrawal symptoms 😭 with the end of this FF. And I love the names Ahad and Ayat and the baby talk just love it.

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rakshaanra

@rakshaanra

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Finally a beautiful ending, twins, happily married

Wow

Please give us more

This time suspense, mystery, lots of corpses...but a good ending

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Awesome epilogue
Perfect ending
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Wow a new thread just for the epi

I missed seeing u in my inbox bubble

Plz come back with a new story soon

Love the epilogue

So 6 yrs went by of happiness,love and hardwork

Twins ahad and ayat 4 yrs old so she for pregnant a little after a yr of her marriage

But she still study and became the engineer and joined zosad

So nawab and nawab begum works together

So nisha is getting married and asad Miya is all protective of his princess from boys

Can't believe he is teaching his choti nawab to be the protective brother

Oh an as always all hot and bothered and ready to be with his wife

Love him telling the guest to mind their own business

2 hrs late zoya for ur appointment not nice

Love the way she for his attention

Never back down from a challenge

And always win

Love it

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

I'm so glad you decided to write one more! It was adorable and AsYalicious update 😆 Awww, the twins <3 I think this is the first time I have read Asad and Zoya having twins. I really hope you start a new FF soon. I love reading your work. Your ideas are unique and something new to read.