Th#12 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Completed - Page 15

very beautifully written..👏👏👏

Awesome epilogue
All the chapters were beautifully written with each emotion captured correctly..
Awww the have twins wow aren't they really cute and sweet..
Specially ahad the way he was trying to get his way by saying "I love u beautiful" 😆
Asad is soo possessive about his kids specially ayaat the way he is teaching ahad to protect her and ahad doing all that was cute
Really loved asya's convos with the children and alone as well..
Loved that part where he says mind your own business it was funny love birds were caught again romancing..
This story was one of the special story with meanings, reality, and love..
Loved the flow of the story how from a meeting in the forest it lead to friendship love and marriage with kids.. The whole journey was beautiful
Loved each and every bit of the story
I really wish u could have continued coz I really reallly love it.. Isn't there any way with which u can continue?? If u can plzz do.. And write more..
Thanks a lot 4the pm

I love asad 's possessive side
m happy for asya and d story
but I hope this. happy standing is the beginning or a new story
m holding my heart and sell m waiting
bubble
thanku

I loved ur story
Dry for nt commenting from so many days
Actually my wifi is not working properly dats y
And awesome story
U r rite she is the survivor and the special one
Nt all have the ability to survive the storm BT she did
And asad is really naughty and possessive too BT really understanding
Loved ur story to the core
It was dark BT u don't always get sweets
Darkness is a part of life BT its on u whether u want to live with it or find the torch to light ur life
Thanks for dis awesome story
U r an awesome writer
Keep writing

Jadoo Teri Nazar, Khushboo Tera Badan
Tu Haan Kar Ya Naa Kar
Tu Hai Meri Kiran
Jadoo Teri Nazar
Tu Hai Meri Kiran
Jadoo Teri Nazar

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha yeah couldn't resist I guess 😆

aww but their r so many stories or maybe OS-es at least !!

I am not sure though 😛

Thanks !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

will deffo start a new story sooon !!

and I love ur siggy of deepika ,, tell me what movie is it ??

Its from her new movie Happy New Year. Its coming out next month, I think.

Awesome... that was a fabulous ending love it <3

Originally posted by: potternerd

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Very very beautiful epilogue 👏👏👏

Ayat and Ahad ❤️

Loved it very much

Couldn't have asked for more 👍🏼

So happy for Nisha 🥳

Loved Asya bickering 😆

Chemistry still intact !!! Power couple ☺️

Originally posted by: Amulya9

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amazing epilogue bubble ..

BUBBLE aakhir kaar u ended this story 😭😭

oh my babies r blessed wth twins ..i love twins..

zoya ne electrical engineering kiya ..👏 im so proud of her ..

finally nishas wedding ..asad miya want 2 romance his begum ..bt bt so many kabab me haddis 😆

oh my god... ahad is damn cute compared 2 his dad ..his protective nature ..n uski german language i want 2 kiss him bass 😳😆...loved asad possessive nature

ok i vl quote my fav parts .. 😉

"Jusht one Ami." The boy pouted and Zoya sighed annoyingly. "Ich liebe dich schon."..aww hes a cutiepie..i want 2 kidnap him 😳😆 hez so like his dad..my AAK 😳

Hey Princess !"

"Wo bist du gewesen ? Ich habe dich vermissht." Ayat asked innocently as she wrapped her arms around Asad's neck. ...hahaha ...they r so adorable

I told him to shtay away from my shister."😆😆😆

Ayat all this while was busy eating and spoiling her dress with chocolate. ' 🤣🤣BUBBLE only u can write like this 😳

"Are you sleeping ?" She asked sweetly.

"No, I am skydiving." 🤣🤣

finally asad won challenge ☺️

She wasn't shy or fearful anymore. She had let go her past long time back because she wasn't a VICTIM anymore but a SURVIVOR 👏👏

the whole cute banter of the most cutest family is so adorable ..

little nawab n princess r damn cute just like u bubble ... .only u can write such a cute epilogue ..ur most d most cutest writer..bubble im gonna miss being here

thanq fr this wonderful story ..pls do write more on ASYA

till then ich liebe dich

Originally posted by: Amulya9

congratulations fr d new thread bubble ..some gifs fr u ..from my side 😉