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Originally posted by: Tamara27

Res for part 3 (you gotta be specific on this thread)

😆

Unres (second attempt in 3... 2... 1...)

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Ok, forgive me... the first comment I typed up was so much better than this is going to be, but I will try and remember what I wrote.

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Sagey! You were nervous about writing this, but OMG, you've done it justice - and I know what short notice you had to pull this off before Sudsie's birthday

I loved the story of how they met. Sanam is a spitfire, indeed.

In any case, the beginning totally had me drooling. Mostly because I pictured him like this - in motion *thumpthrobpulse*

I mean, that Aahil that didn't move his car... that was so the Aahil from the beginning of QH2, right? Spiteful, arrogant, full of himself.

And then when he finds out what happened, he is so full of remorse. So true to his character, really.

I loved that he actively looked for her. Googled her ;) - That was seriously cute!

And the love... omg, the love.

I loved reading about their little chocolate-filled midnight tryst. That she planned all that just to tell him that he was going to have his own family with her, was wonderful.

Except... when I read the word pregnant... my heart leaped into my mouth.

Because we know this is a flashback, we also know she lost the baby.

And she shuts him out. She thinks she's a failure. He mostly sees that she won't get intimate with him (Typical man...)

Aahil, you douche. She thinks she's taken something from you. She shut you out to deal with it.

She can't seek comfort from you, because how can you make her feel better, when she feels like it's you that she's wronged?

And W*F with her not being able to have male friends?!

DUDE. You are not being serious...

(Sorry, pet peeve of mine, in general)

Typical mama's boy, listening to Begum Evil. (Dudes, I have a son, but I can't handle Mama's boys. Dare my son be one of those! Haha)

Aahil, I think you needed to convince yourself that Sanam was still yours and that you two were still strong, but you took too long man.

You just took too long...

Anyway... who is the guy? Another element of intrigue? I like it!

Thank you for this Sagey; it was sad but yet, so beautiful.

P.S. What a way to incorporate the story of the rings and Rahul's jewellery box.

Clearly, you and I are the sentimental weepers of the group 🤣 )

Love ya!

🤗

(My first comment was so much cooler 😔)

Originally posted by: sara7iris

wow amazing and sad for ahil and sanam 😭 i love it ...i like to see more pls update soon

Okay! I am so very late this time. (I know! I know! You guys would say what's new in that?!?!?) ;) But No! Honestly, this time I just surpassed every damn record I've ever made. And I am really feeling pathetic about that. :(
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Ohhh!! And I loved how you used Tamara's jewellery box story to give us their happy moments. Beautiful way to do that. Love, love and love everything. 😊 🤗

Originally posted by: Tamara27

Aaloo!

OH MY GOD...

Firstly (I just have to get this out of the way) - WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? WHY DO YOU KEEP SAYING YOU CAN'T WRITE???

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Ok... to the delicious, spicy Aaloo side dish 😆

So many questions... I have so many questions 😕

What happened to Sanam and Aahil? They were in love? What did he do to p*ss her off to such an extent that she wants to use Rehan (Who is flirty haha!? And in love with Seher? - Good going, girl!)

Ooh baby, this was sooo good. I could totally feel Aahil's jealous rage. These next lines: *sigh*

"I tried living without you but failed. With every passing second my feelings grew stronger for you."

Why are they so broken, Aaloo...?

You gotta give us more. I want a Part 2 to this side dish... Or make a new post and write us a proper fic.

Juliet will tell you, I have a thing for tortured love stories. I don't know why, I just do 😆

I have to say, I loved the "missing" element to the story. The mystery and intrigue. To be able to write like that is a talent, y'know?

This was so beautiful... so sad, but beautiful nonetheless.

Still, I want to know what broke them...

Pretty please?

Love you, hun.

Thanks so much for giving this to us 🤗

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Allooo!

I didn't know what to give you except Ian.. So I asked Faru what does Allooo like besides Ian and she replied Ian.😆

Anyways where do I begin. YESSS! I LOVE YOU!

Love! You had us fooled when you said you are new to this imaginations go wild business.

Oh Allooo! Whom are you kidding. You write like a Pro with Killer Heels Dude!

Sexxxahhh! So flawless.

So twisted and knotted.

You anchored and you are still mooring...

God that was something I will remember for a long time... I love stories that leave endings to vivid imaginations.

I mean we need our readers to be active participants and not lazy beer bellies who want things just spoon feed.

Your story! ASDKSHF!!#@# (learning from Prags and Suds😆)

You totally woke me up with all these speculative senarios. I wanna know. I want it so bad.

The title...IT AIN'T EASY BEING GREEN!

God my theories. Othello came to mind instantly. But not so, this is Aahil, The doesn't do in between, He is his own demon...

His Green was the reason for her to move away, to drift apart... She needed his faith and he couldn't help being green. IT wasn't easy for him to let go of his green because his life was full of insecurities. He could not risk losing her. He had to make sure she remained his. Hence his green., No it's not easy.. It burns you up from inside out...

Home Coming! I never went to one...😛 Oh Cheesy Twillight came to mind.. But Aliya does any thing but cheesy... Aliya does class. And Aliya does Class Apart...

He didn't want to go without her.. And she knew somewhere somewhat..

I loved the lines...Sanam couldn't help but feel watched. She nervously looked around and saw him looking at her.
Why does he always have to be around them...around her?!?! Aahil stared at her with the mixture of adoration and frustration that defines their relationship. He held her gaze for a few seconds before looking away and walking off.

I just awed those lines... I know the feeling! I have lived that. That crackle and the dimensions of the room change and suddenly those pair of eyes nude and tug not just your heart...They do something to me these things. They so do...

He stood at the end of the hallway, whimpering and frowning in jealousy. There was a silly feeling that someone was moving in on "his" territory. Enough!! He needs to end this now. The agony, the angst and the pain.

Mr.Green at his best here...😆 in your face sucker... I have a guy to flaunt and make you jealous some more..😛

then " I want you back!" And " We are both broken!"

I don't cry normally.. But all these feeling you evoked in me with your one tiny piece Allooo! I honestly mean it when I say... I was so caught up reading, so into the plot that I hated I didn't have answers. I wanted to jump in that story and fix things for them...

I am a sucker for happy ending.. I have never ever written anything sad in my life.. And this felt so so sad... I want a completion okay..

Please at least try something...But even if you don't want to continue.. This was a brilliant piece... Just amazing...

Aliya! Thank you! Thank You so very much...Because honestly... I am lost in the show.. I don't connect to it at all. But I love this bunch and I love telling stories. And I am here only to be a part of this awesomeness and crazy. For you to attempt something out of your comfort, IT means a lot Alloo... so thank you from the bottom of my heart...

Love

Juliet!

Thank you so very much...